(高中英语课文话题积累与写作运用).ppt

Warmly Welcome to Class 20!,Collecting Useful Information from a Topic &Writing （高中英语课文话题积累与写作运用） By Zhang Tingxiong,Book2 music,Part one,Collecting Useful Information from Music,一.Types of Music: n. .摇滚乐： 管弦乐： 说唱乐： 情歌; 歌谣；民谣： 爵士乐： 乡村音乐： 民间音乐: 古典音乐：,Rock and- roll Orchestra Rap Ballad Jazz Country music Folk music Classical music,现代音乐： 流行音乐： 中国音乐： 西方音乐： 音乐家： 歌手： 歌迷： 乐器： 乐队： 音乐会：,Modern music Pop music Chinese music Western music Musician Singer Fan Instrument( piano, violin, guitar, drum) Band Concert,v. 表演/弹： 组建： 二.Effects of music (Book2 P67) : 1.can make sb. feel relaxed/comfortable/calm/bored/ sad. 2.can reduce the pressure in ones study and life. 3.can cure the broken heart/feeling./ is the medicine to cure the broken heart. 4. can make my life colorful and interesting. ,perform /play e.g. perform / play the piano,form / found e.g. form / found a band,三.Useful expressions(Book2 P67): 1. I like/ am fond of / prefer/ enjoy(listening to)music best (because.) 2. I hate /dont like/ am not fond of / dont prefer/ dont enjoy (listening to) music best (because.) 3. My favorite music/ musician is (because.) ,Writing,Part two,Writing Steps:,一、审题(Analyzing material)： 1.标题(title)：需不需要？ 2.时态(tense)：用何种时态/语态？ 3.主语(subject)和谓语(predicate)：整合信息时注意 4.文体(style)：记叙文？说明文？议论文？夹叙夹 议？ 二、列中/英文提纲 (Making Outlines in Chinese/English)： 三、连贯成文（combining separate sentences to form a coherent passage）： 四、 工整书写(writing neatly)：,Preparation may quicken the work. 磨刀不误砍柴工！,Waste time?,Basic Writing,一、Example: 请根据以下说明，使用五个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 【写作内容】 毫无疑问，U2 是20世纪80年代英国最受欢迎的摇滚乐队之一。在30年后的今天，该乐队仍然活跃在乐坛并得到歌迷的喜爱。 乐队组建的时间和地点：1976年，爱尔兰； 第一部专辑：BOY， 取得了巨大的成功；,奖项：第48届格莱美5项大奖，包括年度最佳专辑奖和年度最佳歌曲奖。 【写作要求】 标题：U2 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 参考词汇： 第48届格莱美奖 the 48th Annual Grammy Awards 年度最佳专辑奖 Album of the Year 年度最佳歌曲奖Song of the Year 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,写作步骤(writing steps),一、审题： 1.标题：U2 2.时态：一般过去时(simple past tense)和一般现在时(simple present tense) 3.找出各句的主语(subject)和谓语(predicate)： 4.文体：记叙文(narration) 二、列中/英文提纲(Making Outlines in Chinese/English)： (Making Outlines in Chinese and then translating) 1.U2被组建在爱尔兰在1976年。,2.毫无疑问，U2 是20世纪80年代英国最受欢迎的摇滚乐队之一。 3.他们发行了第一张专辑BOY，并取得了巨大的成功。 4.他们获得了第48届格莱美5项大奖，包括年度最佳专辑奖和年度最佳歌曲奖。 5.在30年后的今天，U2仍然活跃在乐坛并得到歌迷的喜爱。 (Making Outlines in English) 1.U2 was founded in Ireland in 1976. 2.Without doubt, it was one of the most popular rock-and-roll bands in Britain in the 1980s. 3.They published their first album BOY，which was a great success to them.,4.They won five Grammies at the 48th Annual Grammy Awards, including Album of the Year and Song of the Year. 5.After 30 years, U2 is still very active and deeply loved by its fans. 三、连贯成文（combining separate sentences to form a coherent passage）： 四、 工整书写(writing neatly)：,Possible version: U2 U2 was formed/founded in Ireland in 1976. Without doubt, it was one of the most popular rock-and-roll bands in Britain in the 1980s. They published/recorded their first album BOY，which was a great success to them. Whats more, they won five Grammies at the 48th Annual Grammy Awards, including Album of the Year and Song of the Year. After 30 years, U2 is still very active and deeply loved by its fans today.,红色为素材词汇,黄色为过渡用语,二、Practice: 众所周知，音乐在人们的生活中起着非常重要的作用。你们班将召开一节主题班会课，探讨有关音乐方面的知识。请就以下内容写一篇英语短文，准备在班会上与同学们一起交流。 【写作内容】 音乐的重要性：生命的一部分，有助于人们放松和医治心灵的创伤。,音乐的起源：一种古老的艺术形式，起源于人类语言产生之前。 音乐的种类：古典音乐、流行音乐等。 说明你周围的人所喜欢的音乐类型及其表现。 说明你所喜欢的音乐类型并解释原因。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,写作步骤： 一.审题： 1.标题：_ 2.时态：_ 3.找出各句的主语和谓语： 4.文体：_ 二.整合信息（中文提纲） 1._ 2._ 3._ 4. _,无,一般现在时,议论文,音乐是生命的一部分，它有助于人们放松和医治心灵的创伤。,音乐是一种古老的艺术形式，它起源于人类语言产生之前。,有很多种类型的音乐，如古典音乐、流行音乐等。,喜欢音乐，并（如：许多成年人喜欢古典音乐 并去听演唱会在周末，而年轻人喜欢流行音乐并组建一个乐队 去写和演奏自己的音乐） （较具有开放性）,5. _ (英文提纲) 1. _ 2._ 3._ 4. _ 5. _ 三. 连贯成文： 四. 工整书写：,我喜欢音乐，那是因为（如：我喜欢古典音乐和流行 音乐，因为前者帮我减轻学习和生活上的压力，而后者使我的 生活更丰富多彩。） （较具有开放性）,Music is an essential part of life. it can help people relax themselves and sometimes it is even the medicine of the broken heart.,Music is created long before human language. it is one of the oldest art,There are many kinds of music, such as classical music, pop music and so on.,sb. enjoymusic, so they（Many adults enjoy classical music and they will go to a concert at weekend, while youngsters prefer pop music and they form a band to write and play their own music.）,As for me, Ibecause（As for me, I appreciate both classical music and pop music because the former can help me to reduce the pressure from study and life, while the latter can make my life more colorful and interesting.）,Possible version: _,colorful and interesting.,As an essential part of life, music can help people relax themselves and,sometimes it is even the medicine of the broken heart. Created long before,man can speak, it is one of the oldest art, taking many forms such as classical,music, pop music and so on. Many adults enjoy classical music and they,will go to a concert at weekend, while youngsters prefer pop music and they,form a band to write and play their own music. As for me, I appreciate both,to reduce the pressure from study and life, while the latter can make my life,classical music and pop music. That is because the former can help me,colorful and interesting.,红色为素材词汇,黄色为过渡用语,Homework: Task Writing,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Should Free Music Downloads Be Banned? With the development of the technology, more and more people are making use of the Internet and they are enjoying downloading all types of materials. Some are especially fond of downloading free music. They argue that free music downloads not only enrich our life but also are good for the musician industry, because they help increase the popularity of music. However, from my point of view, it is not advisable to allow free music downloads. For one thing, they vary the international propertys rights of musicians. For another, they have a negligent impact on the sales of musical products such as CDs, which may do harm to the whole musician industry. Without good returns, who would like to invest in the musician industry? In the order that musician industry can develop healthily, wed better ban free music downloads. Lets all start to do so, with us.,写作内容 1.概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词； 2.就“音乐”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词： 1）谈谈音乐的重要性； 2）说明你周围的人所喜欢的音乐类型及其表现； 3）说明你所喜欢的音乐类型并解释原因； 写作要求 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。,写作步骤(Writing Steps)： 一、审题(Analyzing material)： 1.标题(Title)： _ 2.时态(Tense)：_ 3.文体(Style): _ 二、列中/英文提纲(Making Chinese or English Outlines) Abstract: (omitting) 1. _ Par1. Importance: 2. _ 3._ 4. _ Par2. Around me, 1_ 2_ Par3. As for me, _ _ 三、连贯成文（Combining separate sentences to form a coherent passage） 四、工整书写(Writing neatly),No,Simple Present Tense,Argumentation,can help people relax themselves .,can reduce the pressure in their study and life.,can make them feel comfortable.,is even the medicine to cure the broken heart.,.enjoy(s) classical music and they will go to a concert at weekend.,prefer(s) pop music and they form a band to write and play their own music.,1can help me to reduce the pressure from study and life. 2can make my life colorful and interesting.,Possible version: With the technology developing, some download music without paying, which infringe the propertys rights of musicians and impact on musical industry to develop