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第二讲书面表达“三步曲”典题示例请根据以下提示,结合你校园学习生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文。Being real friends means helping you out when you are in trouble.注意:无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;除诗歌外,文体不限;内容必须结合你校园生活中的一个事例;文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;词数为100左右。第一步:审题审题包括仔细阅读题中汉语和英语以及其他信息,以便弄清写作要求。保证写作不偏题。审题过程:1根据汉语提示可知,考生需要提供校园学习生活的一个事例。2根据英语提示可知,真正的朋友总会在你困难之时向你伸出援助之手,所举事例必须围绕这一主题来写。第二步:构思在审题的同时,除考虑事例外,要积极构思,在头脑中搜索可以使用的词语和句式。构思过程:1写好topic sentenceIts true that real friends are those who help us when we get into trouble.As an old saying goes, a good friend in need is a friend indeed.Besides our teachers and parents, who are most likely to help us when we meet with difficulty in studies? Of course, it is our friends.Real friends not only share our happiness and sorrows but also help each other sincerely.2写好exampleI had trouble with my English.(details)I found it difficult for me to remember all those new words.I darent read English aloud because I was afraid of being laughed at by my classmates.Gradually I lost heart in the subject,which made my English worse.3写好detailsHe helped me with my English.(details)He encouraged me to read aloud the English texts in the morning.He offered to practice English with me.He gave me some useful advice on how to learn English.4写好summary/resultFinally I realize it is Li Hua who is my real friend.As a result,my English has improved a lot.With his selfless help,I have made great progress in my English.第三步:撰写在写短文时,要反复默读所写内容,保证句子之间的逻辑衔接到位,同时注意长短句的分配和不同句式的使用。始终保持卷面整洁。【参考范文】A good friend in need is a friend indeed.Li Hua, one of my classmates,is such a friend in my school life.When I began my junior middle school years,I had much difficulty in learning English.I found it was too hard for me to memorize all the new words.I even couldnt follow the English teacher.I dared not read English aloud in class because of my poor pronunciation.Afraid of being laughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class actively, which made my English worse.When Li Hua found out my situation,he often encouraged me and offered to practice English with me.With his help,I became interested in English gradually and my English has begun to improve ever since.(一)假定你是李华,你校英文报外国文化栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1栏目介绍;2稿件内容;3稿件长度:约400词;4交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to writer an article for our schools English newspaper._Yours,Li Hua写作“三步曲”第一步:列好提纲,不漏要点1_2_3_【答案】1.写作目的2栏目介绍稿件要求3表达期望第二步:翻译句子,打造亮点1它刊登一些由外国朋友撰写的关于他们国家文化的一些文章。_(分词作定语)_(定语从句)2请你写一篇关于美国文化的文章。_(祈使句)_(疑问句)【答案】1.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.It carries articles which are written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.2Please write an article about the culture of America.Would you please write an article about the culture of America?第三步:做好衔接,流畅行文【参考范文】Dear_Peter,Id_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_schools_English_newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li_Hua(二)假如你是李华,请你根据以“老人摔倒你会搀扶吗?”为主题的班会调查结果及你自己的意见给英语周报写一篇演讲稿,要点如下:调查结果理由80%的人认为会搀扶救人第一15%的人认为不一定会搀扶看情况5%的人认为不会搀扶不懂急救;怕惹事注意:1.总词数不少于100;2开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;3不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Ladies and gentlemen,Will you help the old when they fall down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that_写作“三步曲”第一步:列好提纲,不漏要点1_2_【答案】1.三种不同观点及理由2自己的观点第二步:翻译句子,打造亮点1百分之五的人认为不应该帮助那些老人。_(宾语从句)_(同位语从句)2尊重老人是我们的优良传统之一。_(非谓语)_(It作主语)【答案】1.Five percent of people think that the old shouldnt be helped.Five percent of people hold the view that the old shouldnt be helped.2To respect/Respecting the old is one of our best traditions.Its one of traditions to respect the old.第三步:做好衔接,流畅行文【参考范文】Ladies_and_gentlemen,Will_you_help_the_old_when_they_fall_down_on_the_street?_A_recent_survey_from_our_class_meeting_shows_that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old who fall down on the street because saving life is the first thing.Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances.However, five percent of them hold the view that the old shouldnt be helped.Why not? First, they lack the knowledge of first aid,not knowing how to deal with the situation.Second,they are afraid
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