高考英语作文顶级高分教案A育才实验专用.doc

高考英语高分作文（书面表达）高考英语完美作文四步骤：1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。4：检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误。过渡性词语 表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say表补充：besides、inaddition、moreover表对比：on the one handon the other hand in spite of表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up表转折：however、nevertheless、yet遇到不会写的单词怎么办？遇到不会的单词时，可以用同义词或近义词代替；选择不同的词性，变化一下句型；当出现了非要使用的单词不会拼写或拼不准时，不要放弃；尽量采用较简单的词和句子结构和句型来表达相近或与主题相关的内容。 作文中的首字母何时大写？冠词都不需要大写；字母多于三个(不含三个)的介词、连词首字母要大写；题目的第一个单词；名词、动词、形容词、副词、代词、感叹词首字母；大写所有英语中要求大写的单词。如月份、人名、地名等等。作文字数如何把握？在题目要求范围内如果有能力写的稍微多一点，问题不大。如果追求长度，而忘了写那些话是不是真正有意义，是不是真正跟题目相关，那就没有太大价值。发现跑题如何补救？从感觉跑题起写切合题目的内容，通过一些关联词转接过来，让阅卷者知道你真正想表达的内容。比如用一句“刚才谈了那么多，但是对这个问题真正重要的方面是”即可补救。字迹潦草会不会扣分？尽量一笔一画写清楚，潦草程度不至于让批卷人很难判断是没有问题的，但是如果让批卷人很难判断还是要扣分。考作文的时间安排？写作理想时间是30分钟，最少不能少于20分钟，要有一定的时间限制。英语作文如何开头？1开门见山，揭示主题 文章一开头，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是：I Spent my last vacation happily 下面是题为Honesty(谈诚实)一文中的开头：Honesty is one of the best virtuesAn honest man is always trusted and respectedOn the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a liar，and is looked upon by honest people 2交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如A Trip to Shenyang (去沈阳旅游)的开头:The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Shenyang. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如A Trip to the Taishan Mountain(泰山游)的开头是：I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4概括性的开头 即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头： People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5介绍环境式的开头 即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6交待写作目的的开头。 在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 Pollution Control (控制污染)的开头： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 写作中使用率最高覆盖面最广的基本句式以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的12个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。、表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obvious 4）The reason for this is not far to seek 5）The reason for this is that 6）We have good reason to believe that 例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lifeFirstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondly，most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or likeLast but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life 注：如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life There are three reasons for this这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。 、表示好处 1）It has the following advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us quite a lot 4）It is beneficial to us 5）It is of great benefit to us 例如： Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizonsTherefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us 3、表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages 2）It does us much harm 3）It is harmful to us 例如： However，everything divides into twoTelevision can also be harmful to usIt can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television 4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sbto do sth 2）We think it necessary to do sth 3）It plays an important role in our life 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in businessSoon， computers will be found in every home，tooWe have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age 5、表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with 例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more seriousTherefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it 6、表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education 例如： Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five yearsThe major reasons for these changes are not far to seekNowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins7、表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that 2）No one can deny the fact that 3）There is no denying the fact that 4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in 5）However，thats not the case 例如： We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollutionTo solve these problems， we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollutionThe government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment 8、表示比较 1）Compared with A，B 2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV 3）There is a striking contrast between them 例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordableFirstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleumSecondly，they do not cause the pollution problemLast but not least，they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise 9、表示数量 1）It has increased（decreased）fromto 2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000 3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January 例如： With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased 再如： From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000 10、表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth 2）People have different opinions on this problem 3）People take different views of（on）the question 4）Some people believe thatOthers argue that 例如： People have different attitudes towards failureSome believe that failure leads to success Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavorHowever， others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers 再如： Do “lucky numbers really bring good luck？Different people have different views on it 注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，应掌握这一写作方法。 11、表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that 例如： From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved 注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句； 例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。 12、套语 1）Its well known to us that 2）As is known to us， 3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that 5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way 例如： As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus The reason for this is obviousNowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an ivory tower. As college students，we must get in touch with the world outside the campusOnly in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate 再如： Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it解读高考英语高分完美作文及作文新模板简明模板图标作文As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，_ has been on rise/ decrease， significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart， it goes without saying that _.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _. In one hand， _.On the other hand， _ is due to the fact that _.In addition， _ is responsible for _. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned， I hold the point of view that _. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 东北育才五校联考：作文（满分25分）请你根据题目要求及下图所示，为学校英文报纸写篇稿子讨论目前交通秩序中存在的问题及原因，可适当增加细节。注意：1 字数不少于100;2 应包括图中所有内容;3 标题和开头已为你写好参考词汇：行人pedestrian；人行横道zebra-crossing；隔离护栏divider；骑车人cyclist答案内容要点：1 行人违章2 自行车违章3 机动车违章4 对交通状况的思考 Take a look at the road conditions today. Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all. They cross roads anywhere they like, even though there are zebra-crossing line just a few yards away. Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of the roads. Many drivers act like F1 racers on the highways. They drive at considerable speeds without care. They usually speed through zebra-crossing lines, even when pedestrians are there. When there is a red light at an intersection, pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop. They all forget where they are. Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving license, or worse, drink and drive, which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion, it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people ignore various traffic rules, road safety, or even the lives of the others. This leads to their bad and reckless behavior, which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse. It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation. Then road safety wont be a problem and traffic conditions wont be a bother to us any more.书面表达（满分30分）假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：地铁（列车）- subway trainFebruary 12th, 2008_One Possible Version: February 12th，2008The day is my Dads birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile，I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future.书信作文模板 Your addressMonth， Date， yearReceivers addressDear ，I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，书面表达(满分30分)假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. _ Best wishes, Li HuaOne Possible Version: June 8, 2008Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes写作（满分30分）假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120 150Dear Li Ming,_Best regards,Zhang HuaDear Li Ming, Im sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that your might be too shy to talk confidently wit h your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that tour classmates will make fun of your accent. There it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally. I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, it can be well learned to speak Putonghua, well understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.In our spare time, Ill invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, Id like to introduce my good friends to you.I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible. Best regards,话题作文Nowadays， there are more and more _ _ in _ _. It is estimated that _. Why have there been so many _？ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is _. Besides，_. The third one is _. To sum up， the main cause of it is due to _. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，_. For another thing， _. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _.书面表达（满分25分）目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Exams”。请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇征文稿。主要原因 考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰 取悦父母、老师个人看法 作弊不对，违反校规 要诚实，努力学习 （其它看法）注意：文章必须包括所有要点，词数100左右（给出部分不计入总词数）。My Opinion on Cheating in ExamsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in exams at school. 参考答案： As students, we often take exams at school, but sometimes we have too many exams which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for exams.书面表达（满分25分）实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）注意：1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”._Thank you for your listening!One Possible Version:Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank yo