高三英语二轮复习 第二篇 分类写作3 请求 求助信课件.ppt

,分类写作,三、请求/求助信,anunforgettableexperience一次难忘的经历makepreparationsfor做准备havetroubleinsth./doingsth.有困难collectmaterialS收集材料properly合适地appreciate感激；欣赏offersb.ahand提供帮助passenger旅客airlinecompany航空公司flight航班leavesb.adeepimpression给某人留下深刻印象nameandaddress姓名和地址,【必备词语】,course课程accent口音；方言managetodosth.设法成功地做了某事hobby爱好symbol象征luckandunity运气和团结silkthread丝线customer顾客furtherinformation进一步的消息asksb.afavor请某人帮忙apreciousgift一份珍贵的礼物postage邮资,【必备词语】,1.Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavor.我想请您帮个忙。2.Iamwonderingwhetheryoucould.我想知道您是否能够3.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould.如果您能，我将感激不尽。4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。5.NowIwonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor.不知道我是否可以请您帮个忙？,【好句朗诵】,6.Icantwaittoseeyouagain!我等不及再次见到你了！7.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIlookforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。8.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,doletmeknow.如果您需要更多的信息，请告知我。9.Thankyouverymuchforallthekindness.谢谢您一切的好意。10.Hopeeverythingisfinewithyouthere.希望您在那里一切如意。,【好句朗诵】,1.ThewholethingisgettingverydifficultandIrealneedyourgoodadvice!,1.real改为really,2.ThemainreasonImwritingisthatIhavelittefavourtoask.,2.little前面加a,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,3.Ithankyouintheadvanceforyourpromptattentiontothesematters.,3.删掉the,4.Iwouldliketobringyourattentiontosomeproblemswhatareoccurringinthisblock.,4.what改为that/which,5.Thepeopleintheapartmentbelowmineoftenplayloudlymusiclateatnight,makingitverydifficultformetosleep.,5.loudly改为loud,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,6.Also,thereisoftenrubbishleavinginthestairway.,6.leaving改为left,7.Iwouldappreciateyouifyouwouldhelpmesolvetheseproblems.,7.第一个you改为it,8.Weretryingtofindsomeonetolookafterthecatswhileweaway.,8.away前加are,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,9.Therearehundredsofpeoplegotoworkincarsandbuses.,9.go改为going,10.Ilookforwardtohearfromyouabouttheactionthatthecouncilwilltakeonthismatter.,10.hear改为hearing,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,【2013新课标1卷：请求帮助接机】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtohaveameetinginyourcity.DoyouremembertheChinesepaintingIpromisedyoulastyear?Myunclewillbringittoyousoon.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour.ThisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitedtheUS,soIhopeyoucanmeethimattheairport.Hearrivesat11:30a.m.onAugust6thandhisflightnumberisCA985.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakehimtohishotel.Myuncleistall.Hewillbewearingdarkglassesandabluejacket.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,满分赏析Imwritingtotellyouthat使用了宾语从句。theChinesepaintingIpromisedyou使用了定语从句，提升了文章的档次。使用了Iwonderif的结构，表达了委婉的语气。使用客气套话Iwouldappreciateitif显得非常礼貌，语言得体。,满分佳作（二）DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?DoyouremembertheChinesepaintingyoulikeverymuch?Hereissomegoodnewsforyou.Youknow,myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulivetoattendaninternationalmeeting.Heistobringthepaintingtoyou.Iamwonderingwhetheryoucouldpickhimupattheairport.Myuncleistallandwearsapairofglasses.HisflightnumberisCA985.Hewillgetthereat11:30a.m.onAugust6.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldmeethimattheairport.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,满分赏析使用定语从句theChinesepaintingyoulikeverymuch，属于高级句型。本句是作者适当添加的内容，起到很好的过渡作用，为下文转入谈论叔叔为Peter带去他喜欢的那幅中国画作铺垫。使用Iamwonderingwhether，语言表达委婉礼貌。高级句型Iwouldbeverygratefulif是一大亮点，会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。,【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】作文原题假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译亲爱的Tom，你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。你的,李华,DearTom,ItsbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamreallyhappytospendsuchanunforgettableexperiencewithyouhere.IamgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJuly.Tohaveaverygoodperformance,Iammakingpreparationsforit.However,Istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,IfindithardtouseEnglishproperly.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Youknow,Ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soIhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.Icantwaittoseeyouagain!Yours,LiHua,【2010重庆卷改编：请求寻找物品】作文原题假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flightnumberBA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。信件要点包括：1.陈述写信原因;2.简要描述该行李;3.说明其重要性;4.期待回复并表示感谢。,作文翻译尊敬的先生，我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793航班的一个乘客。我是在2010年6月3日乘坐这趟班机的。你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我到家时，我发现我把一个旅行箱落在了飞机上。您想象不到这个旅行箱对我是多么重要。里面有我需要参加一个工作面试的文件和我的身份证，没有身份证我不能参加一场重要的考试。我的旅行箱较小，蓝色，有一条拉链。在把手处有一个标签，上面有我的姓名和地址。谢谢你善意的关心，我期待收到您尽早的回复。您真挚的，李华,DearSir,MynameisLiHua,apassengerofflightBA793ofyourairlinecompany.ItwasonJune3rd,2010thatItookthisflight.Yourgoodserviceleftmeadeepimpression.Butunfortunately,themomentIgothome,IfoundIhadleftasuitcaseinyourplane.Youcantimaginehowimportantthesuitcaseistome.TherearesomedocumentsIneedforajobinterviewandmyIDcard,withoutwhichIcanttakeanimportantexam.Mysuitcaseisasmallblueonewithazip.Thereisalabelonthehandlewithmynameandaddressonit.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIlookforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua,【2011新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助】假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（LearningCentre）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua;Phone:12345678）DearSir/Madam,.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,【全真考场】,【2011新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助】DearSir/Madam,ImLihua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.Everythingisgoingwell.IenjoyallthecoursesherebutoneofferedbyProfessorMartinBygate.Ihavedifficultyunderstandinghiminclass.Hehasaverystrongaccent,whichmakesithardformetofollowhiminclass.Ifeelworriedaboutthis.IwastoldthatIcangototheLearningCentreforhelp.ImwonderingifIcouldcomeonWednesdayorFridayafternoons.Ihavenoclassesatbothtimesandcanmanagetocomeforhelpandsuggestions.PleaseletmeknowwhichtimeisOKwithyoueithervialihuaoron12345678.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,【2013全国大纲卷：请求代卖中国结】假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chineseknot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；2.象征意义；3.价格。DearTom,Howareyoudoing?Yours,LiHua,【2013全国大纲卷：请求代卖中国结】DearTom,Howareyoudoing?IamsoexcitedtoknowthatyouhavesetupashopontheInternet.MyhobbyismakingChineseknotsbyhand.Couldyousellsomeforme?Asasymbolofgoodluckandunity,Chineseknotshavealonghistory.Theyarestillpopulartoday.Thecolourincludesred,greenandyellow.Theyareaslargeasahandkerchiefandmadeofredsilkthreads,clothandothermaterials.Chineseknotsareusuallyusedasagiftforfriendsandcanbehungonthewalltodecoratetheroom.SoIguesssomecustomersmaylikethem.Isuggestyousellthemfor15dollarseach.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,do