高考英语议论文写作提高.ppt

技巧点拨作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意，提出若干理由，试图说服他人，这种通过议论或说理来表达作者见解和主张的文体叫议论文。议论文的写作要注意以下几点：1.准确找出论点、论据及其之间的相互关系，即找出要点；,2.合理安排材料的顺序，即论点、论据和结论之间的表述方式；3.注意文章的时态、语态等。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，可用过去时态；预测将来时，要用将来时态；也经常使用被动语态；有时假设一种虚拟情况时，还需要用虚拟语气。,必备词句1.Currently,thereisawidespreadconcernoverincreasingtrafficaccidents.时下，不断增加的交通事故已引起人们的广泛关注。2.Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtorealizethat现在越来越多的人正在逐渐意识到3.Thehighereducationfairnesshasdrawnattentionofthepublic.高等教育公平问题已经引起公众的普遍关注。,4.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatprivatecarsdobringconveniencetoourlife.无可否认，私家车确实给我们的生活带来了方便。,5.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.关于这个问题，仁者见仁,智者见智。6.SofarasthetopicHealthandWealthisconcerned,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.说到健康和财富，不同的人有不同的观点。,7.Recently,wehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertheBeijingZooshouldbemovedoutofthecity.最近我们对北京动物园是否应该迁出城进行了热烈的讨论。8.Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorofthemove.TheythinkthatHowever,othersareagainsttheidea,sayingthat有些同学赞成迁出，他们认为然而，其他同学反对迁出，他们说,9.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论10.Justasthesayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides”.正如俗语所说，“事物都是一分为二的”。,11.Frommypointofview,theadvantagesofstudyingabroadoutweighitsdisadvantages.依我之见，出国留言的优点要大于它的缺点。12.Withthesedone,Ithinkthepollutionoftheriverwillbereduced.Meanwhile,wecanbenefitalotfromtheseactivities.我认为，如果做到这些，河流的污染将会减少；同时，我们也能从这些活动中受益。,语篇模板,(1)讨论调查型点明讨论主题Thestudentsinourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhethertheonlywayforseniorhighstudentstosucceedistogotocollege,whichinfactisahottopicnowadays.Theresultisasfollows:,描述讨论结果/陈述不同观点About75%ofthestudentsthoughtitnecessarytogotocollegewhile15%hadoppositeopinion.Thereststatedthattherewasnoneedtalkingaboutitfortheydidntcare.,发表自己观点Inmyopinion,goingtocollegeisgoodforustolearnmoreandimproveourselves.Also,ithelpsusmoreeasilytofindajobinthefuture.However,therearedifferentroadstoRome,whichmeanstobesuccessfulmayhaveotherchoicesbesidesgoingtocollege.,(2)观点论证型提出论点Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.列举论据Ononehand,advertisinggreatlypromotessales.Ontheotherhand,intheireffortstotellpeopleaboutproductsandevents,advertisersprovideuswithgreatamountofthelatestinformation.Therefore,ithasbecomepartofourdailylife.Meanwhile,tomakeanadvertisement,alotofpeoplewillworktogetheronit.Sowiththedevelopmentofadvertising,alotofjobsarebeingprovided.,得出结论Inconclusion,advertisingisanimportantbusiness.,5.神奇的礼貌语(2010江西卷)英语中“please”“thankyou”“sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊、改善关系、化解矛盾的神奇力量，因而被称为“magicwords”。请以“MagicPowerofPoliteWords”为题写一篇英语短文。,专题练析,写作内容1.讲礼貌是人与人之间建立良好关系最重要的一步；2.举例说明使用礼貌用语的神奇力量；3.作为学生该如何做到讲礼貌。,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容,开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总句数。MagicPowerofPoliteWordsMoreandmorepeopleattachgreatimportancetorelationshipinstudyandcareersuccess.Remember,beingpolitecostsnothingbutitsworthofmilliondollars.,写作点拨1.这是一篇议论文，故要用一般现在时；2.举例说明可用forexample,forinstance,takesthforexample等；3.因句数限制，在发挥较多的情况下要尽量使用一些连词，如notonly.butalso,so,and。,MagicPowerofPoliteWordsMoreandmorepeopleattachgreatimportancetorelationshipinstudyandcareersuccess.Beingpoliteisthefirstandmostimportantsteptodevelopgoodrelationshipbetweenpeople,sopolitewordscanbeeasyyetverypowerfulinyourdailylife.Forexample,alwayssaying“please”and“thankyou”willmakepeoplefeelmorecomfortableandmorewillingtoofferhelpwhennecessary.Alwaysappreciateotherskindnessandshowyourgratitudethroughyourmouth.,Althoughsomepeoplemayeasilyignoretheimportanceofbeingpolite,westudentsshouldformgoodhabitsandgoodmanners.Notonlyshouldwelearntobefriendlytoourparentsandrelativesathomebutweshouldalsolistenattentivelywhenourteachersareinstructingus.Remember,beingpolitecostsnothingbutitsworthmillionofdollars.,6.对索钱参加选秀发表看法,某19岁女孩休学参加选秀(talentshow),向下岗母亲索要十万元,媒体报道后,引起很大的争议。,写作内容请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文。,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；短文的开头已经给出，不计入句子总数；Recently,thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethatanineteen-year-oldgirlwhoquittedschoolaskedhermother,whohasbeenlaidoff,for100,000yuaninordertotakepartintalentshow.,摆出争议事例Recently,thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethatanineteen-year-oldgirlwhoquittedschoolaskedhermother,whohasbeenlaidoff,for100,000yuaninordertotakepartintalentshows.,陈述不同观点Somestudentsthinktalentshowsareofgreatfunandcanprovideacolorfulplatformtoshowtheirtalents,anditisalsoawaytoreleasetheirpressure.Butmanyparentsandteachersholddifferentviews.,Theythinkthattakingpartintalentshowswilltakealotoftime,energyandmoney,whichshouldbeusedforstudyanddoingothermeaningfulthings.表明自己看法Inmyopinion,Idonotapproveoftakingpartinthisactivity.Asyoungpeople,weshouldmakethemostofourlimitedtimeandconcentrateonourstudiestogainmoreknowledgeinordertobetterserveourcountryandpeople.,如何道歉更有效(课外题目)假如你明天要在班上演讲，讨论怎样向同学道歉更有效，请你写一篇简短的演讲稿。,写作内容,必备词汇1.负责处理从右耳传入的声音_2.使左脑变得活跃_3.求得原谅_4.更容易“听进去”_,写作指导,havemorechanceofgettingonesmessageacross,earnforgiveness,activatetheleftsideofthebrain,processsoundsthatcomeinthroughtherightear,必备句型1.对着右耳说道歉更有效。_2.当谈到的时候，。_,Whenitcomesto,Apologygoesdownbetterthroughrightear.,重组信息（按照以下的方式把写作内容中的每个要点重新组合成五句话。）请根据中文意思将下列句子翻译成英文。1.我认为对着右耳说道歉更有效。_,Ibelieveitgoesdownbetterthroughrightear.,2.科学家发现，当人们在生气的时候，右耳变得比左耳更敏锐；因为人的左脑主要负责处理从右耳传入的声音。_,Scientistsfoundthatwhenweareangry,therightearbecomesmorereceptivetosoundthantheleft,whichisbecausetheleftsideofthebrainprocessessoundsthatcomeinthroughtherightear.,3.当生气使左脑变得活跃时，从右耳传入的声音会被听得更清楚。_4.一声“对不起”往往不足以求得别人的原谅，但如果这声“对不起”是对着对方的右耳说，他会更容易“听进去”。_,Ifangeractivatestheleftsideofthebrain,noisefromtherightwillbeheardmorekeenly.,Sayingsorryisntalwaysenoughtoearnforgivenessbutwehavemorechanceofgettingourmessageacrossifwespeakintosomeonesrightear.,5.如果我们想说服别人去做什么事情，最好也对着他的右耳说。_,Ifwewanttopersuadesomeonetodosomething,weshouldalsospeaki