九年级英语全册Unit13We’retryingtosavetheearth同步作文指导人教新目标版.ppt

Unit13Weretryingtosavetheearth,写作题目：Saveourearth,Aretheycute?,Theyaredying!,Theyareendangeredanimals!,Whatproblemaretheseanimalsfacing?Thereusedtobealotofanimals,butnowsomeanimalsareendangered.Whyaretheyfacingthisproblem?Someoftheirlivingplaceshavebeenpollutedordestroyed.Peoplecatchandkilltheseanimals.Howtosolvetheproblem/saveanimals?Thegovernmenthaspassedlawstoprotectthem.Tellpeoplearoundustoprotectanimals.,bepolluted/bedestroyed,bekilled,thegovernmentpassedlaws,tellpeoplearoundus,Whatotherproblemsdowehave?,naturalresorces,thingsthatareinnatureandcanbeusedbypeople,Theearthisindanger!,Helpme!,Whataretheproblems?Whydowehavetheseproblems?Howtosolvetheproblem?,合作探究,Discussingroups,trytoanswerthe3questions.,2.Thisisbecausewethrowtrasheverywhere.,Forexample:1.Thisiswastepollution.,takeyourownbags,puttrashintherightplaces,recycle,uselesspapernapkins,thingswecando!,合作探究,Nowchooseonepollution.Discussingroups,trytoanswerthe3questions.,WaterPollution,AirPollution,Theworldsproblems,globalwarming全球变暖,当我们回答了这3个问题，已基本完成文章的主体！,Whataretheproblems?Whydowehavetheseproblems?Howtosolvetheproblem?,basicstructure基本结构,beginning,body中心要点,ending,1.打比方Theearth_(像)ourmother.Wemuststoppeoplehurtingher.,writingmethods(一些支持论点的写作方法),2.列数字Wecanuselesspaper.Becauseabigtreecanonlybemadeinto_(大约4000)piecesofA4paper.,3.举例子Wecandomanythingstoreducepollution,_usingfewerplasticbags.,4.引用_(就如俗语所说),“Helpingtheearthishelpingourselves.”,Theearth_ourmother.Wemuststoppeoplehurtingher.,打比方,islike,writingmethods(一些支持论点的写作方法),Wecanuselesspaper.Becauseatreecanonlybemadeinto_(大约4000)piecesofA4paper.,列数字,about4000,writingmethods(一些支持论点的写作方法),Wecandomanythingstoreducepollution,_usingfewerplasticbags.,举例子,suchas,writingmethods(一些支持论点的写作方法),_(就如俗语所说),“Helpingtheearthishelpingourselves.”,引用,Asthesayinggoes,writingmethods(一些支持论点的写作方法),信息点与连接词的关系,信息点是珠子，连接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。,写作技巧：善用连接词,加上开头、结尾和连接词使你的文章更加完整吧！,_Thereusedtobealotofanimals,_someanimalsareendangered.Someoftheirlivingplaceshavebeenpollutedordestroyed.Animals_donthaveenoughfoodtoeat._,Peoplecatchandkillanimalsforfoodorfur.Animalsarepeoplesfriends,_Ithinkitsneccessaryforustosaveanimals.Thegovernmenthaspassedlawstoprotectthem.Weshouldobeythelaw_tellpeoplearoundustotakegoodcareofanimals._,Nowadays,animalsarefacingaseriousproblem-,Onlyinthiswaycanwesavethemandlivewithanimalshappily./Dontputitoff.Lets.,butnow,so,aswellas/and,notonlyobeythelawbutalsotellpeoplearound,even,Whatsmore/Besides,开头常用词语：asfarasweknow据我们所知aseverybodyknows众所周知atpresent目前nowadays现今totellthetruth老实说,好的结尾,首尾呼应。Wemustdosomethingtoprotectwaterinordertomaketheworldmorebeautiful.Onlyinthiswaycanwe.2.提出倡议或号召。Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!/Dontputitoff.Lets.3.名句结尾。Ibelievewecandobetterinprotectingourworld.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.,Howtoprotectourearth?,作文1我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇80字左右的短文。1.现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（wastepollution）2.原因：乱扔垃圾3.措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色污染；循环利用书和纸等。提示词：trash，pileup堆积,herightplaces,reduce减少,plasticbag塑料袋,recycle,作文2以“ProtectingWater”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。1.现状：水越来越少，水污染严重2.原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。3.措施：保护水。提示词：careabout,tap,pourwastewaterinto,Narration记叙文B.Exposition说明文C.Argumen