高考英语复习---书面表达评析及指导课件.ppt

,高考复习-书面表达评析及指导福州十五中林玲,Howtoimprovethewritingskills,Chinglish,horsehorsetigertigeropenwaterwatchsisterupstreetbuythingsgiveyousomecolourseeseeheartflowerangryopenIcallLioldbig.toyear25.AmericanChinesenotenough,YouseenoseepeoplemountainpeopleseaYouaskme,measkwho?Howareyou?Howoldareyou?Younosee,Inowverybusy.Onesideplaygo!Wetwowhoandwho？Yougivemestop!,Ithismorningeatbreakfast.Haveyoueatmeal?Imalargerschoolstudent.Imverylikeplaybasketball.Weshouldhardstudy.ButIbetterlikelistenmusic.Livetoold,studytoold.,Ihadbreakfastthismorning.,Goodmorning/afternoon/evening!,Imacollegestudent.,Wemustwork/studyhard.,Itsnevertoooldtolearn.,ButIlikelisteningtomusicbetter.,Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.,应用文：书信、通知、便条记叙文：看图作文、日记说明文：人物介绍、活动议论文：,高考书面表达题型,高考链接,高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围,第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21-25分）,第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、2个次重点。（16-20分）,第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（11-15分）,第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10分）,第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。（1-5分）,未能传达读者任何信息：0分。,半期考作文假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June8,2008DearPeter,Imverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.,readandwrite,findithard,fluentEnglishtowrite,Greatchanges,roads,hadtakenplaceinmyhometown,buildings,widened,Itwillbewonderfulwhen,youcometoChinaifyouarefree,showyouaround,Iwillbegladto,语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分,progress,it,well,widened,roads,Myhometownisbecomingmoreandmore,are,词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.,learn,oftheteachersandmy,progress,readandwrite,ithardtolearn,hardwork.,writelettersinfluentEnglish,found,hadbecome,WelcometoChinaifyouhavetime,showyouaround,语言素质较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.,影响书面表达得分的因素：,“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,Myhometownhasgreatchanges.,语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”,Greatchangeshadtakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.,3.IfyougettoChinathathavetime,mewithyoulookmyhometown.4.Iwillwelcometoyou.“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,.,IhopeyoullgetachancetocometoChinaandIllshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.,WelcometoChina.,Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.,Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.,书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！,Badsample,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,审题不认真，要点有所遗漏,1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3.连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。,注意：,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,书面表达评分最高标准（第五档21-25分）,Onepossibleversions:June8,2008DearPeter,Imverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.,NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandIllshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.Bestwishes,LiHua,Sixstepsforwriting(写作六步骤）,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.,Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.,I.怎样使用较高级的词汇,Weallthinkhighlyofhim.,Agoodideaoccurredtome.,/Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.,4.Thestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.5.ShewenttoAustraliainordertostudymusic.6.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.,ShewenttoAustraliaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.,Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.,Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.,II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!2.强调句Itwasthisyoungboywhohelpedtheoldgranny.3.倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.4.省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.,5、with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句ThatswhatIshoulddo.8、各种状语从句Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.,III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whatsmore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.,3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse,5.表示时间关系当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until直到才:notuntil一就:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon,6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;,8.进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth,10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,其它常用到的副词therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;,12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately13.表示强调：aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly,Practice请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet_heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.Itwasnotlong_thepolicecame.3._heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.,when,before,Assoonas,4.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping._,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.5.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends._,Isaved$80.6.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._,itmaymakeusfat.,Inaddition,Asaresult,Whatsworse,Pre-writing-Fillintheblankswiththeproperwordsorphrasesaccordingtothemeaningofthepassage:WorldEnglishescomefromthosecountrieswhereEnglish_,eitherbecauseofforeignrule_becauseofitsspecialroleasani_language.Today,morepeoplespeakEnglish_theirfirst,secondorforeignlanguaget_.,playsanimportantrole,or,international,as,thaneverbefore,Chinamayhavethel_numberofEnglishspeakers.NativeEnglishspeakerscanunderstandeachother_theydontspeakthesamekindofEnglish.Englishhaschanged_time.Nowadaysthenumberofpeople_(学习)EnglishinChina_increasing_(迅速地).,largest,evenif,over,learning,is,rapidly,假定你是李华,你的一位内地朋友张贵来信向你咨询如何才能学好英语，请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.学英语的意义；2.参加英语口语学习班;3.看英文书刊、电视；4.学唱英文歌曲；5.与以英语为母语的人交朋友。,Writing,Homewo