四级写作(同名18631).docx

【四1】Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a bicycle you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.【范文】Advertisement(A Second-hand Bicycle for Sale)A used Forever mountain bike is (available) on sale! Though used, its still a fast and reliable classic bike, for it is well maintained and in good condition (which is) perfect for any standard of riders (beginner right through to competitive club cyclists) with suitable seat and strong tires.The bike was bought two years ago for 688 yuan, and it is now sold at only 388 yuan (so it is a real bargain! Besides, the price is negotiable)!I want this bike to be sold as quickly as possible, for I am a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus in the near future. Please feel free to contact me if you are interested in this bike. I can be reached at phone 87654321 or by my e-mail 123.解析：这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售自行车的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“销售二手自行车”因此只需要将题干规定的要点（自行车品牌，性能，状况，价格，出售者的联系方式）有序的组织起来就可以了。逻辑框架分析：【分解练习】段落句子内 容逻辑框架模板第一段开题第1句一辆二手山地自行车出售。开篇点名广告主题出售品牌二手自行车。第2句虽然是二手的但是保养得好，性能好，仍然是一辆快速值得信赖的自行车，自行车舒适的座驾和结实的轮胎适合任何骑行者。描述题干内容自行车性能。第二段第3句自行车是两年前买的，原价688元，现388出售，绝对的物美价廉，价格可以商讨。交代自行车的出售价格。第三段第4句我想尽快出售这辆自行车，因为我是大四学生，不久的将来就要毕业离开校园。可加入题干以外的自由句，为了引起下句第5，6句如果你对自行车感兴趣的话，请随时联系我，我的联系方式是:87654321 或者邮箱：e-mail 123点名题干要求的联系方式。【四2】Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell some of the course books you used at college. Your advertisement may include a brief description of their content, their condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 【范文】Advertisement（English Course Book- on Sale）Im Li Hua, a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus, so I have three used course books about English learning to sell at a fairly low price!These books could be beneficial to anyone who decides to buy them. First, the books provide many practical skills on the following three aspects of English learning: how to improve listening, speaking and writing. Second, the books are still well-maintained with seemingly brand new covers but it is of great use of my CET4. Third, considering being used once, there are some necessary notes on the margin. Therefore they are not charged high, only 10 yuan for each book and each book contains a delicate bookmark with the writers signature as a souvenir!If you are interested in my book, please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.解析：这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售大学期间用过的教材的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“出售二手教材”因此只需要将题干规定的要点（教材的内容，状况，价格，出售者的联系方式）有序的组织起来就可以了。逻辑框架分析：【分解练习】段落句子内 容逻辑框架模板第一段开题第1句我是李华，一名大四的学生，由于即将毕业，所以有三本用过的英语学习参考书，低价出售。开篇点名广告主题出售用过参考书-三本英语参考书。第二段第2句任何购买这三本书的人都会从中受益。介绍书籍优点第3句首先，书中包括了有关英语学习的使用知识，有关如何提高听力、口语、写作。优点有三。其一，实用性强。第4句 其次，书保存完好，封面还是崭新的，但是对我英语四级考试有很大帮助。考试有帮助第5，6，句第三，考虑到书不是新的，页边有一些笔记，所以低价出售每本10元并附有书作者签名的精美书签作为纪念品。低价出售附有书签纪念品。以激发同学们的购买欲。第三段第 7.8句如果对书感兴趣的话可以随时联系我咨询跟多问题，电话：87654321，并期待你的来电。结尾发挥广告的鼓动作用，留下联系方式。【四3】Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.【范文】Advertisement(A Well-maintain Computer on Sale)As I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal computer at a low price.It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches. For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe so much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it.I bought the laptop as the price of 4500 RMB. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is *126.com.解析：这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售电脑的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“销售二手电脑”因此只需要将题干规定的要点（电脑整体情况、品牌、基本配置软硬件的运行情况，联系方式等）有序的组织起来就可以了。逻辑框架分析：【分解练习】段落句子内 容逻辑框架模板第一段开题第1句由于我即将毕业离开校园，故低价出售本人电脑。开篇点名广告主题出售二手电脑。第二段第2句于2015年6月购入的联想电脑点名题干中要求的电脑品牌。第3句电脑尺寸不大，但是功能性很好。点名电脑外观性能。第4句 四核CPU,2G 独立显卡，500G 硬