高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作提升系列 第一板块 第7节 高级词汇与高级句式课件 北师大版.ppt

第七节高级词汇与高级句式 技法指导 写作时 高级词汇与高级句式 如能运用贴切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处 也会为你的作文增添色彩 一 使用高级词汇的三大技巧1 标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩 别人有可能想不到的词汇 恰当地求新求异 asfarasi mconcerned parents muchprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren sfuturedevelopment asfarasi mconcerned parents limitlessprotectionwilldomoreharmthangoodtochildren sfuturedevelopment 2013 福建高考满分作文 withthisexperience theywillcertainlylikebettertohelpothersinfuturejustlikethelaundrywomanhasdone withthisexperience theywillcertainlyprefertohelpothersinfuturejustlikethelaundrywomanhasdone 2014 广东高考满分作文 2 短语优先多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 althoughitwasnotexpensive inordertobuymethegift mydadtriedtoearnthemoney althoughitwasnotexpensive inordertobuymethegift mydadmadeeveryefforttoearnthemoney 2014 重庆高分满分作文 what smore wecanpouroutthetroublesweface andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects what smore wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects 2013 重庆高考满分作文 3 避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词 必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替 ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 学以致用 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语1 weallhavethesamechance 答案possess2 wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend 答案endless3 icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous 答案putupwith 4 hedidn tlistentowhatisaidintheclass 答案turnedadeafearto5 we lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus 答案promote6 theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses 答案challenging 二 使用高级句式的七大策略1 使用被动语态wewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstothemarsthroughouttheworldby2015 aboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtothemarsthroughouttheworldby2015 2013 广东高考书面表达 i mdelightedtoknowthattheshanghaimuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas i mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheshanghaimuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas 2013 上海高考满分作文 2 使用强调句asasayinggoes thelittlethingmattersmost asasayinggoes itisthelittlethingthatmattersmost 2013 上海高考满分作文 withsincerityandfaithfulnesswecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere 2014 江西高考满分作文 3 使用倒装句thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy 2013 福建高考满分作文 ididn trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen notuntilthendidirealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways 2013 湖北高考短文写作 4 使用省略句ifitisso ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime ifso ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime 2013 山东高考满分作文 whentheyarecomparedtothetraditionalones theyhavethreenewuniquefunctions comparedtothetraditionalones theyhavethreenewuniquefunctions 2014 湖南高考满分作文 5 使用感叹句itisaverysplendidmoment howsplendidamomentitis 2013 辽宁高考满分作文 iamveryworriedabouthiscondition howworriediamabouthiscondition 2013 湖北高考满分作文 6 使用with复合结构asenglishwordsgetpopularinbothmediaanddailylife achinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups for and against withenglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife achinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups for and against 2014 江苏高考满分作文 asthesocietydevelopsrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofenglishandcomputer withthesocietydevelopingrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofenglishandcomputer 7 使用虚拟语气itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges 2013 福建高考满分作文 imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp withoutyourhelp iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar 2013 安徽高考满分作文 学以致用 用高级句式转换下列句子1 aboveall wemustdosomethingtostoppollution 使用被动语态 aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution 2 irealizedtheimportanceofenglishwhenienteredseniorhighschool 使用强调句 itwaswhenienteredseniorhighschoolthatirealizedtheimportanceofenglish 3 wedon tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth 使用倒装句 notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 使用省略句 ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 5 wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 使用感叹句 whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday 6 becausetherewastoomuchnoise icouldn tgoonstudying 使用with复合结构 withthenoisegoingon icouldn tgoonstudying 7 ididn ttakehisadvice soifailedintheexam 使用虚拟语气 ifihadtakenhisadvice iwouldn thavefailedintheexam 8 becauseiwasillthatday ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 使用虚拟语气 iwasillthatday otherwiseiwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting 9 theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 使用被动语态 asurveywascarriedoutamong260students 10 theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 使用倒装句 itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 使用强调句 演练提升 请按以下内容要点写一篇短文 尽可能多地使用高级词汇和高级句式 1 众所周知 世界人口在一天天增长 因此需要大量的新鲜用水 2 随着工业的快速发展 产生了很多有毒的气体和废水 结果导致了水污染 尽管水是新的 但却不能再运用 3 这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性 确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了 不要再污染用水 否则 我们就不能再在这个地球上生存 那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊 4 只有充足的水源 世界才能蓬勃发展 参考范文 asisknowntoall theworldpopulationisgrowingdaybyday soenoughfreshwaterisneededtofeedsuchalargepopulation what smore withindustrydevelopingrapidly poisonousgasesandwatersareproduced consequentlyresultinginthepollutionofwater thoughfres