高考英语 书面表达技法点拨 3.如何衔接过渡.doc

3.如何衔接过渡【示例】假如你是李明，最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落，丧失信心，对学习消极应付。请你给他写一封email，指出其消极行为可能带来的不良后果，并结合自身实际提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法，鼓励他努力学习。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear zhang hua，im sorry to hear that yours，li mingone possible version：dear zhang hua，im sorry to hear that you didnt do well in your last exam.you are not the only one who seems to try his or her best but ends up with a failure in exams.quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence (lose heart)and dont want to study hard any longer.im sure you know that its unwise to do so because you might be left far behind.i was once in the same situation as yours.failure is the mother of success.in the face of failure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice.anyway，rome was not built in a day.only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success.i firmly hope i can be of some help to you.yours，li ming【如何衔接过渡】衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：1表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above allfirst of allto begin withaccording toas you know/as is knownas is shown in 等。 according to a research，the total number is reduced to less than 1，000 now. 按照调查结果，现在总数已减少到不足 1000 只。 as we all know，good learning habits contribute to efficient study. 我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。 2表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 first(ly)thenlaterin the endfinallyat lastafter thatafterwardssince thenimmediatelysuddenlymeanwhile 等。 meanwhile，we all enjoyed the beauty of nature. 同时，我们都欣赏了大自然的美丽。 firstly，i collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. then i wiped the dust off all the furniture. after that，i swept and mopped the floors. 首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收 集起来放好，接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，然后我扫地、拖地。3表示并列关系的过渡性词语 andoralsoas well asneither .nor .not only .but also .either .or .not .but .等。 i think we will have a good time there and i will send your photos taken there. 我想我们会在那儿玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片送给你。 also，do let me know if you need more information. 如果你需要其他的信息，也一定要告诉我。 4表示转折关系的过渡性词语 butyethoweverwhileotherwiseon the contrary 等。 however，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser. 然而，直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。 on the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth，so they are eager to experience the future life on the mars. 相反，这些志愿者总是说，他们厌倦了地球上的生活，因此他 们渴望体验未来火星上的生活。 5表示因果关系的过渡性词语 becauseassinceforthanks todue toas a result ofsothereforeas a result/consequence 等。 therefore，there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs. 因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。 as a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 结果，孩子们变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立的思想和创造性的想法。 6表示条件关系的过渡性词语 ifunlessin case(of)as/so long ason condition that 等。 i would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport. 如果你能到机场接他，我将不胜感激。 as long as we stick to our dreams，we will become a winner sooner or later. 只要我们坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。 7表示递进关系的过渡性词语 whats morefurthermoremoreoverbesideswhats worsestill lessto make matters worseworse stillon(the)one hand .on the other(hand) .for one thing .for another .等。 many of them can hardly look after themselves，still less manage their own life. 他们很多人几乎不能照顾自己，更别说经营他们自己的人生。on one hand，i can earn some money by doing it to help my parents，and on the other hand，i can gain some experience from it， which will do good to my future life. 一方面，我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母，另一方面，我能从中获得一些经验，这会对我将来的生活有益。 8表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such asfor example / instancetake .for examplethat is to say as followsin other words 等。 they are of different shapes，such as diamonds，butterflies，flowers and birds. 它们形状各异，诸如像钻石、蝴蝶、花、鸟。 on one hand，i will organize some english activities，for example，to hold english debates or english speech contests so as to help us students arouse their interest in english. 一方面，我会组织一些英语活动，例如举办英语辩论赛或英语 演讲比赛，目的是帮助我们学生提高英语方面的兴趣。 9表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinionin my viewin my point of viewas far as i am concernedas for mepersonallyi think .等。 as far as i am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity. 以我看来，他们代表爱、友谊和团结。 10表示总结的过渡性词语 in shortin briefin conclusionin a/one wordto sum up，all in allon the wholein generalgenerally speaking 等。 in a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success. 总之，成功很重要，失败也很重要，因为它是成功之母。 all in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. 总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的方式。 【演练】翻译句子 1首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。 2上周我得了重感冒。首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事。然后我开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气。最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。 3努力学习，你就会考上重点大学。 4然而在我们学校，情况却大不一样。 5多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。 6只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。 7我在森林里迷了路，更糟糕的是，天开始变黑了。 8就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 9就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。 10总之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。 【答案】1.first of all，i think it important to make more friends abroad. 2i had a bad cold last week.first，i had a running nose，but i did not take it seriously.then i began to cough.after that，i had a fever and felt weak.finally，i was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. 3work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university. 4in our school，however，things are quite different. 5thanks to the doctors timely treatment，he was saved. 6as long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succ