高考英语大一轮复习 层级化晋级写作 层级四 高仿模板快得分（三）求助信讲义.doc

学案(三)求助信题型技法 (学一学)写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例(2016全国卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教ms jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分范文dear ms jenkins，im li hua and i plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. i have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. however, im not sure about the words and format. therefore, im writing to ask for your help and professional advice. would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? besides, id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. id be most grateful if you could do me a favor.im looking forward to your reply.yours，li hua阅卷评点表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙述提到了一定的高度，很好地为下句做了铺垫。therefore关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。would you please do .？是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处，符合说话者的身份；过去分词attached作定语，使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。would you mind doing .？不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一化，语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情，也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语：(1)my name is .im writing to you for some help.我叫，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。(2)im writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。2寻求帮助常用语：(1)faced with so much difficulty, i have to ask you for help.面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。(2)in the meanwhile/at the same time, i beg you to . so that . also, i would like you to .同时，我恳求你以便我也想让你(3)i would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。3结尾部分常用语：(1)im sure with your help i can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。(2)i will appreciate any of your help.我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：1谈谈你目前遇到的问题；2针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear charlie，how are you getting along? i am looking forward to your early reply.yours，li hua参考范文：dear charlie，how are you getting along? recently i have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed. i am writing to ask you for help.you know, my parents dont allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends. they think i should make full use of every minute to work on my lessons. however, i think i need to play with my friends so that i can relax myself after a weeks hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. i know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but i dont know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and