Recreational activity.ppt

Recreationalactivity Inpeople sdailylife therearevariousrecreationalactivitiesapartfromstudyingorworkingrangingfromKaraokeordancingtocomputergamesorsportsgames Suchactivitiesarebeneficialaswellasharmfultousifundertakeninappropriately Ononehand canhelpustonotonlybuildourbodyandmindbutalsoimproveourcommunicationandunderstandingwithfriendsbecausemostoftheseactivitiesaredonewithothers Ontheotherhand ifwespendtoomuchtimeonsinging dancingorothergames wemightfailtoconcentrateonourdutiessuchasstudyingourworking whichinturnmayleadtofurtherconsequences AsfarasI mconcerned recreationalactivitiesshouldbedonewithinacertainlimitsothatwecankeepaproperbalancebetweenrecreationandstudyingorworkinglife Recreationalactivity 优点 按照提纲的要求分三段 每一段都思路清楚 结构明晰 缺点 作为范文 字数明显不够 语法错误和过渡句的衔接不自然 用词不够地道自然 Recreationalactivity Inpeople sdailylife therearevariousrecreationalactivitiesapartfromstudyingorworkingrangingfromKaraokeordancingtocomputergamesorsportsgames 可以再加一两句如 moreandmorepeoplechoosetotakepartinrecreationalactivitiesintheirsparetime Such 建议改成Recreational activitiesarebeneficialaswellasharmfultousif theyare undertakeninappropriately Ononehand recreationalactivities canhelpustonotonly 移到前面 buildourbodyandmindbutalsoimproveourcommunicationandunderstandingwithfriendsbecausemostoftheseactivitiesaredonewithothers Ontheotherhand ifwespendtoomuchtimeon in singing dancingor playing othergames wemightfailtoconcentrateonourdutiessuchasstudyingour or working whichinturnmayleadtofurtherconsequences AsfarasI mconcerned recreationalactivitiesshouldbedonewithinacertainlimit limitations sothatwecankeepaproperbalancebetweenrecreationandstudyingorworkinglife 2011年6月英语四级 Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow 1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 现象描述 2 网上购物有很多好处但也有不少问题 利弊 3 我的建议 要有针对缺点的解决办法 自己认为利大于弊 在利用时趋利避害等 Nowadays withtherapiddevelopmentofinformationtechnology onlineshoppinghasgainedgreatpopularityamongmoreandmorewebusers Forexample itisfashionableforyoungsterstopurchasedailyessentials suchasbooks clothes electricalequipmentonsomefamouswebsite likeTaobao EBayandAlibaba Undoubtedlyspeaking onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages Firstly comparedwithtraditionalshopping it sveryconvenient Whatyouneedtodoisjustclickingyourmouseandwaitinginsteadofgoingoutbyfootordriving Secondly morechoicesthanrealstoreareanotherattractiontocustomers However inspiteofconvenienceandmorechoicesofonlineshopping wecannotturnablindeyetoitsdisadvantages Obviously qualityproblemisitsfirstdisadvantage It scommonthatarticlesaren tsogoodjustastheyaredescribedonlinethatcustomersalwaysbuyfakecommodities Inaddition it stroublesomeandannoyingformanycustomerstomakeachangewhentheyarenotsatisfiedwithwhattheyboughtonline Asacollegestudent IlikeonlineshoppingbutIexpectedthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentomakeitbetter Specificallyspeaking governmentshouldworkoutstrictregulatio