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改错答案Until the very latest moment of his existence, man hasbeen bound to the planet on which he originated and developed. Now he had the capability to leave that planet _1_and move out into the universe to those worlds which he has known previously only directly. Men have explored parts of _2_the moon, put spaceships in orbit around another planet and possibly within the decade will land into another planet and _3_explore it. Can we be too bold as to suggest that we may be _4_able to colonize other planet within the nottoodistant _5_future? Some have advocated such a procedure as a solution to the population problem. ship the excess people off to the moon. But we must keep in head the billions of dollars we _6_might spend in carrying out the project. To maintain the earths population at its present level. we would have to blast off into space 7,500 people every hour of every day of the year.Why are we spending so little money on space _7_exploration? Consider the great need for improving many _8_aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified in his concern for the money and resources that they are poured _9_into the space exploration efforts. But perhaps we shouldlook at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions. _10_ 答案：1. had - has2. directly - indirectly 3. into -onto / on4. too - so5. planet - planets6. head - mind7. little - much8. Consider - Considering9. they - / 10. arriving 后加at 或 arriving - reaching 考点例析： 例1： If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, enjoys S3._ the hunters triumph of killing his prey. 解析：这是由一个条件状语从句引导的复合句。但主句只有谓语动词enjoys，缺少主语，因此要步上主语。根据从句的his aim可推断应该加上主语he。 例2：Nuclear physicists who interested in the structure of 5._ atoms cannot observe protons, electrons and neutrons directly. 解析：如果将who后面的部分作定语从句，那么它绝少谓语，故将who去掉，此时分词短语interested in直接作定语修饰前面的physicists。或在who后加are，补全定语从句。 例3：This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6._ are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment. 解析：even是副词，后面不能直接跟句子，根据句子的意思，应该在even后加if或though。 巩固与拓展 1. A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training to become a performer a medical student needs to become _ a doctor. 2. This trip can be found in a booklet, Passport to the Pub: The Tourists Guide to Pub Etiquette, a customers code of conduct for those want to sample a central part of British _ life and culture. 3. When a new robot is introduced to a small suburban factory, a Shinto priest is invited to inaugurate. _ 4. Since the law made easier to get a divorce, the number of _ divorces has increased. 5. Another changehas been caused by the fact people are _ living longer nowadays, and many old people live alone following the death of their partners巩固与拓展： 1. 在performer后加as 此处为同级比较，固定结构为as.as.，而原句比较的对象a medical student前缺少连词as。 2. want - wanting或those后加who for为介词，后面的宾语时代词those，不可再跟主谓结构。故将want改为wanting，用现在分词短语作定语修饰those，或者在want前加who构成定语从句修饰those. 3. inaugurate后加it 4. made后加it 句子主语是law，谓语是made，easier是宾语补足语，逻辑宾语是to get a divorce，可见此句缺少形式宾语it. 5. fact后加that fact之后的部分是同位语从句，补充说明fact，其引导词不能省略。 综合训练 1. small - smaller 该句后面有than，所以前面应该是smaller。Manymore peolpe than ever are drinking coffee these days - but in small 1._ quantities than they used to. Some manufacturers of coffee makers are trying to maketake advantage of this trend by developing diminutive machines 2._ that brew（煮）smaller amounts of coffee. Two U.S appliance companies -Black&Decker, basingbased in Twson, Maryland, and Toastmaster Inc. 3._ of Columbia, Missouri -has recently introduceintroduced drip Coffee makers that 4._ brew one or two cup servings of coffee. Neitheofr of the products brew the 5._ coffee directly into a cup or mug, eliminatingOr the need for a separate carafe. Since many people make a pot of coffee in the morning and drink 6._ onlywith a single cup, the new cofee makers shouldcan reduce the wasted coffee. Black&Deckers Cup-at-a-Time spendscost $27, while Toastmasters Coffee 7._ Break retails for $20. Black&Decker also makes a coffee maker drips coffee directly into a 8._ carry-around thermal carafe. The carafe, a glass vacuum bottle, is supposed to keep the coffee fresh for hours. The product, called the Thermal Carafe coffee-maker, comes with a built-in lid that opens during the brewing process, closesand when it is completed. There are several models, including 9._ one that firs under the counter, ranging from $60 to $110 at price. 101. small - smaller 该句后面有than，所以前面应该是smaller。2. make - take take advantage of 为固定搭配，意思为“利用”，与其同样意思的词组还有make use of。 3.basing - based base和它的逻辑主语是被动关系。 be based on sth 以什么为基础base sth on sth 以为基础what are you basing this theory on ?你这种理论的根据是什么？ 4. has - have 句子的主语是two US appliance companies, 谓语动词要用复数。 做短文改错先找句子主干：判断时态，单复数5. Neither - Both 根据文章的中心观点，这里时说两种产品都如何。故要用both 先通读全文，了解文意 6. and - but 本句的意思应该是：大部分人都是早上煮一壶咖啡 但却只喝一小杯。并列句前后应该是转折关系。 7. spends - costs spend的主语必须是人，此处主语是物，应该用cost表示 “该物花费了多少”。 8. maker 后加that或which 一个句子在没有连词的情况下不能带有两个谓语，本句的谓语是makes，而drips和之后的部分应该是定语从句修饰coffee maker，又由于先行词在从句中作主语，所以引导词不能省略。 9. closes前加and 在英语中，用逗号连接两个独立的主谓结构是不对的，所以要在closes前加and。 10. at - in 表示“在.方面”，使用介词in1.有比较级than一定注意形容词为比较级01. If our friends cannot take us, we must have made alternative arrangements to get to the airport. have made alternative make alternative02. No one in this department has ever accused the governor for taking advantage of his position; he is hard-working and considerate. for taking advantage of taking advantage03. The pet dog died when it was fifteen, not of old age, but that it injured its head when it fell down a flight of stairs. that it injured its head of the injury on its head04. Casualties are said to be very high and in some villages, where older and less substantial buildings predominate, it is said that not a house remained standing. remained remains05. It was an accepting custom in western countries for men to open the door for women and always to let ladies go first on social occasions. accepting accepted06. Early industrial people used three times energy as much as their agricultural ancestors; modern people are using three times as much as their industrial ancestors. energy as much as as much energy as07. Geothermal sources, though in a sense free, in order to be maintained, will end up using more energy than they produced. will end up would end up08. Ever since the invention of the two-day weekend, where-to-go-for-the-holiday was a live topic for people in this city. was has been09. When we speak of leisure nowadays, we are not thinking of securing time and opportunity to do something; time weighs less heavily on our hands, and the problem is how to fill it. and or10. There is absolutely no reason for saying that there are no regularities in Nature in which our statements of natural law correspond. in which with which11. The first English immigrants to that is now the United States crossed the Atlantic long after Spanish colonies had been established in Mexico, the West Indies and South America. that is what is12. Wed rather have long waits than no shifting of the scenes, and all the actors on the stage doing nothing. than than have13. The teacher said that if we believed something was true and good we should hold on to them. them it14. The text and dialogues below focus on cultural differences between Chinese and Western societies which can create misunderstanding if ignoring. ignoring ignored15. When sailors are not supposed to be at work on the ship, they go to ashore and look around town. go to go16. Abraham Lincoln once spoke of democracy by saying that he would not be a slave and nor he would be a master. he would be would he be17. I didnt mind their coming late to the lecture, but objected their making so much noise. objected objected to18. Its true that the old road is less direct and a bit longer; we wont take the new one, therefore, because we dont feel as safe on it. therefore though19. Dont make the examiner spend too much time trying to get you say something. say something to say something20. On seeing the young girl falling into the lake, Eric sprang on his feet and went to her rescue. on his feet to his feet21. No one can predict that the consequences of urban growth on such a scale will be for the people living there or elsewhere. that what22. Human beings are paying a lot for medicine and are not getting all that they think they are paying: a guarantee to endless betterment. paying paying for23. Despite his low opinion of professors or perhaps in an effort to improve the breed Smith himself eventually became it. it one24. With the word scientist we mean one who is equipped to spend a lifetime for the advancement of science to the best of ones ability. With By25. Any culture, which in the interests of efficiency or in the name of some political or religious dogma, that seek to standardize the human individual, commits an outrage against mans biological nature. seek seeks26. The stroke left him with serious difficulties in speaking and with an impairing memory for recent events. impairing impaired27. As for the last point, it is perhaps not generally realized how difficult is it to make verbally accurate translations of extremely technical material. is it it is28. This has caused them to deduce that science is mathematics and hardly nothing else. hardly nothing hardly anything29. It is no doubt that China has benefited greatly from her population policy. It is There is30. The university, faced with tightening budgets and declining enrollments, is casting about for new ways to support and enlarge their research activities. their its31. Marine biology, the study of oceanic plants and animals and their ecological relation, have furthered the efficient development of fisheries. have has32. In spite of his aged appearance, his movements were as spirited as a young man. a young man a young mans33. Since I loved her very much when she was alive, I prize my mothers-in-law picture and I wouldnt sell it for all the money in the world. mothers in-law mother-in-laws34. Human beings are social animals who usually prefer not living in physical or psychological isolation. living to live35. People who lose weight with the help of behavioral techniques, like weighing themselves regularly and keeping records of what do they eat, seem to need the same techniques to keep the weight off. what do they eat what they eat36. The current anti-procreative atmosphere may be interpreted as a triumph of private over social interests or, more, a triumph of rational man over natural man, and the facilities of planning, reason, and choice over emotion, heredity, and instinct. and and of37. They cannot go camping right now because they are taking care of a three-weeks-old baby. three-weeks-old three-week-old38. The field of dynamics in physics is concerned with a particles motion in relation to the forces acting it. acting acting on39. The suggestion that taxes were cut was not accepted by the mayor who foresaw a deficit that was not yet public knowledge. were cut (should) be cut40. I think I would enjoy the movie we went to last night even more if I had read the book before seeing it. would enjoy would have enjoyed41. The trouble is, as I see it, that he is a perfectionist in his way, and he says that he will not have children when they can afford it financially. when until42. I would advise you not to press the matter too hard or become convincing that money does not matter. become convincing that become convinced that43. In these days, with the rising cost of life, it is dangerous for a married man to risk his place in his profession or in his community. cost of life cost of living44. He argues that he would not want his children have to suffer hardship or not be socially acceptable because of lack of money. have to suffer to have to suffer45. By the time people reach the sixties and are facing with retirement, the value of money as a source of security might reach its peak. facing with retirement facing retirement 或者faced with retirement46. Accordingly, this may be the chief reason why some people wish to get rich, as the actual goods or possessions play a secondary part to an envy or admiration that this wealth brings them. an envy or admiration the envy or admiration47. When a person lives on inherited income, whether it supplements what he earns, or frees him from working, he judges as coming from a successful family. judges is judged48. Man requires accurate mathematical information and may find it difficult to express numbers in a way he can understand. and but49. The trouble is with everything becoming quantified, from micro up to macro, the world is becoming overburdened with numbers that defy mans own ability to comprehend, even when they are about his own body. is with is that with50. In Latin America, for example, studies indicate that women, who have completed primary school average, have about two children fewer than those not. fewer than those not fewer than those have not51. Just like happy families value pleasures that involve personal effort, so they value possessions that have personal meaning, like Grandmas wedding ring. Just like Just as52. If such pervasive a medium has come into our society in the last four decades, and if our society has changed in drast