雅思大作文结尾段技巧.doc

海量资料下载 免费学习英语 /wenku.htm （申请网址）话说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，雅思大作文也是如此，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮。这样，你就可以拿高分了！虽然雅思作文的分数并不是取决于结尾段落，但是一个漂亮而干脆的结尾段还是会让雅思考官眼前一亮，也会将前文出现的小瑕疵掩盖掉，把大作文的分数拿到最高。以下是专家老师根据多年的教学经验总结的一些黄金招式。招式一：回答问题 answer the questionEg1When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die outIt is pointless to try and keep them aliveTo what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means pointless, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technologyWe should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。招式二：不要添加新的信息 not apply any new informationEg2Happiness is considered to be very important in lifeWhy is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness用1句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。招式三：2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enoughEg3Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of timeDo you agree or disagree?Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as workIf everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want2句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。一般在结尾段的最开始部分，考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词，让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句：信号词：Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall句型：1 it can be concluded that2 we can find that3 I think it is also important to remember that4 the main point is to make sure that5 I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that招式四：可采用的技巧1总结式（重述前文）把在前文中的观点在结尾段进行重述，但是不能出现与开头段或者题目中的单词重复。Eg4In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviourWhat do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generationThe government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole把solutions进行的简单的再次描写-父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbishWhy do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general publicChildren can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take actionGovernments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste重述上文的内容，由政府采取措施提高意识（children & adult）-具体措施（提高价格、循环利用、罚款）2两分式把文章涉及到的主题人或者物分成两种，对其进行分别的说明。Eg5In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid workSome people regard this ad completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilityWhat are your opinions on this?Nevertheless, in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid workIf learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in childrens development对于有钱的家庭而言，家长很少送小孩去做童工；如果是为了钱或者其他，可做兼职。Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changeOthers, however, think that change is always a good thingDiscuss both these views and give your own opinionIn conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes如果是人们自己的选择那么改变是一件好的事情，但如果是被强加于身，改变则不会带来任何可喜的效果。3折中式很难判断In conclusion, I do not think其中到底谁占据主导地位，或者什么是最重要的，两者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。Eg6Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our lifeThat either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effectsHow these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a persons life两者是缺一不可的，天赋和后天培养同等重要。4转折对比式提出另一种群体，与之相比，会产生什么效果来支持自己的观点。Eg7Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionalsSome people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfairPersonally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it