湖北省谷城县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错训练（7）.doc

湖北谷城县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（7）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear jin jing，your problem is common one among middle school students.maybe the following advices can help you.first in all，believe in yourself.your greatest problem is that you lack selfconfidence.the first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates.one smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.your smile will show that you are friendly to him.next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.you can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies as well.unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.yours，lily【参考答案】：dear jin jing，your problem is common one among middle school students.maybe the following can help you.first all，believe in yourself.your greatest problem is that you lack selfconfidence.the first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates.one smile speaks about your wish to make friends than any word.your smile will show that you are friendly to .next, talking with a student who is as shy as you or who the same interest as you.you can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies as well. anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as .yours， lily短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear editor，im writing to tell you something about how we students use the internet. as we all know, the internet is playing a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the internet. sometimes we sent emails to our families as well as our friends. beside, we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. we can even do shopping without leaving our homes.however，it has its disadvantages. we waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad effect on our studies. whats worse, the bad information on the internet do great harm to them. i hope we can make the use of the internet proper for our studies.yours truly，zhang hua答案：dear editor，im writing to tell you something about how we students use the internet. as we all know, the internet is playing important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and foreign languages by ourselves on the internet. sometimes we emails to our families as well as our friends. ， we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. we can even do shopping without leaving our homes.however，it has its disadvantages. we waste too much time playing the electronic games, has a bad effect on our studies. whats worse, the bad information on the internet great harm to . i hope we can make the use of the internet for our studies.yours truly，zhang hua(2015四川高考)hi, janice，its been a month since i came to this new school and i really want share with you some of the problems i have been experiencing.as i tell you last time, i made three new friend here.we hang out together during lunch and after school.weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.its been three saturdays now and it really costs me many.and i started to see this as a timewasting activity! in fact，i dont like to go anymore, so im afraid ill lose their friendship.how do you think i should do? if you are me，would you talk to him?please help with me and give me some advice.grace1解析考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。答案want后加to2解析考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。答案telltold3解析考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。答案friendfriends4解析考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend.(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。答案singsinging5解析考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。答案manymuch6解析考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。答案sobut7解析考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。答案howwhat8解析考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，。答案arewere9解析考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？答案himthem10解析考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。答案去掉with (2014新课标全国)nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and i planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.since then for all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please.as result，the plants are growing somewhere.the fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.there are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.we are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!1解析ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted，用的是过去式，故用ago。答案第一句中beforeago2解析with the help of.在的帮助下。答案第一句中byof3解析由前面all these可知应用year的复数形式。答案第二句中yearyears4解析根据时间状语“since then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。答案第二句中hadhave5解析as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。答案第三句中as后加a6解析因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere到处；somewhere某处。答案第三句中somewhereeverywhere7解析are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。答案第四句中tastetasty8解析根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而much修饰不可数名词。答案第五句中muchmany9解析although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。答案第六句中but去掉或改为yet10解析因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。答案第七句中wonderfullywonderful(2014新课标全国卷)my dream school starts at 8：30 am.and ends at 3：30 pm.they are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.we didnt need to do so many homework.therefore，we have more time with afterschool activities.for example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.my dream school look like a big garden.there are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom bu