贵州省遵义县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达品析（5）.doc

贵州遵义县2016高考英语书面表达二轮品析（5）第二节 书面表达 (25分) 为配合我校开展“创建卫生文明城市(build a civilized and clean city)”活动，学校举办以“how to behave well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：1. 衣着整洁；2. 保持环境卫生，不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾；3. 待人有礼，乐于助人；4. 遵守交通规则；5. 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中14 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；3. 词数：80-100词左右。how to behave well?in order to build a civilized and clean city, we students should_书面表达how to behave well? in order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. our city should be kept clean every day. dont throw litter or spit about. its good manners to say thank you and please and so on. we should never say dirty words. be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. for example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. we should also obey traffic rules. when the traffic lights are red, we should stop. and wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public. if everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.第二节书面表达（满分25分）（见答题卡上）假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请银据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于哪件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin_ li xia书面表达（满分25分）hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin. i am quite interested in it . i think im fit for it. as a student, i have been learning mandarin for many years. in addition ,i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. so im quite confident that i can help you learn mandarin.learning mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing mandarin everyday. as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. besides, you can also read some books in chinese、see some chinese films and listen to some chinese radio programmes. speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.in your post, you say you can teach english as a reward. it is just what i want. im eager to improve my english. so, if you allow me to help you learn mandarin, you can also help me improve my english. we can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in english and half an hour in chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.hope for you early reply! yours sincerely li xia第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假设你即将参加你校主题为“preparing myself for college life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据提示写一则简短的英语演讲稿。构想一下你的大学生活和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活。内容要点应包括：1. 确定新的学习目标；2. 学会独立生活；3. 参加各种活动；4. 处理好与同学的关系。注意：1.短文的内容要连贯、完整；2.字数：100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计入单词总数）。preparing myself for college lifehello, everyone! my college life is right around the corner and im getting ready for it. _thats all. thank you!书面表达 preparing myself for college life hello, everyone! my college life is right around the corner and im getting ready for it. as for me, college life is a brand new experience. in order to get used to college life as soon as possible, i should prepare myself for that from now on. to begin with, after entering college, i intend to set new goals in my studies and stick to them until i succeed. whats more, since i am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently. without doubt i should do laundary and clean-up all by myself. in my spare time, i will take part in a diversity of activities, such as going to the english corner to practise my spoken english. in addition, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college is another challenge for me, but for sure ill make it. i have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous. thats all. thank you!（2014新课标ii）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、1、 家庭2、 工作3、 业余生活注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好 i often imagine what my life will be like in the future._【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样，我会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师。工作顺利和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【一句多译】我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。（1）i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer.（2）i hope i will work in a company which produces computer, and i can design some kinds of very good computer。【参考范文】one possible version i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a g