广西贺州中学高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（3）.doc

短文改错二轮精炼（3）【由陕西省2014五校联考改编】短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线(_), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。manager,i am an exchange student from china. yesterday, i went to your cinema to see a film. the film was very well, but i did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.first, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. it was rather annoyed. second, the sound of the film was too loud that i could hardly bear. the exit signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. if something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.as a visitor to your city, im disappointed with my experience in your cinema. i am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements. yours faithfully, li hua【参考答案】短文改错 1.well-good 2. problem-problems 3. much-many 4. annoyed-annoying 5. too-so 6. bear后加it 7. terribly-terrible 8. will-would 9. a-the 10. 去掉consider 后面的on短文改错the problem with televisionnow i cant watch much television but a few years 1. _ago i was used to watch it every night. i was often 2. _a little tired after a days work and watch tv 3. _demands very little effort. unfortunate, there are 4. _too many people among my family. some wanted 5. _to see the programme while others preferred 6. _another. i am happy with any programme but 7. _the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8. _was no way of settling the matter except by 9. _selling the tv set. now someone at home reads instead. 10. _答案及解析1. 删去 much。“i cant watch much television”意为“我不能看许多电视”， 上下文逻辑不通。much 属于多余。2. 删去 was。由上文句意可知“我现在不看电视， 而过去每晚都看电视”， 因此应用 used to do。3. watch 改为 watching。作句子主语需用动名词。4. unfortunate 改为 unfortunately。此处应用副词作状语。5. among 改为 in。“in my family”为习惯搭配， 意为“在我家中”。6. the 改为 one。由下文的another可知， 上文用one。7. am 改为 was。综观全文时态可知。8. a lot 后加 of。9. 此行无错。10. someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody。someone 意为“某个人”； everyone/ everybody 意为“每个人”。根据上下文逻辑可知。【由陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟改编】短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。we were assigned a composition but i was in good mood for it until this morning. it is sunday today, so i had a good sleep. when i get up, i had a strong desire do something. so i set about doing the toughest thing - writing a composition. i had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind.before long i typed about 500 words. i skimmed through my work and was quitesatisfying. it should be another model composition. i stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failedsuddenly. and i forgot to save the file!【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）we were assigned a composition but i was in good mood for it until this morning. no it is sunday today, so i had a good sleep. when i get up, i had a strong desire got todo something. so i set about doing the toughest thing - writing a composition. thei had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. extremely anotherbefore long i typed about 500 words. i skimmed through my work and was quitesatisfying. it should be another model composition. i stretched myself, intendsatisfied intendingto polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed butsuddenly. and i forgot to save the file!【由陕西省西北工业大学附属中学2014第六次模拟改编】短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。dear lucy,i am very excited to learn that youre coming to xian for travel. both my parent miss you a lot. so is our friend, ruby. april is best time of the year to visit xian. there is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. there are so many places i wanted to take you to after i finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. when you come, you can stay with ourselves. my house is about three kilometers far away from xian moslem street where is full of local foods.best regards,janet【参考答案】短文改错dear lucy,i am very excited to learn that youre coming to xian for travel. both my parent miss you a lot. parentsso is our friend, ruby. april is best time of the year to visit xian. there is only a few rain and does the littlethe weather is neither too hot or too cold. there are so many places i wanted to take you to after i nor wantfinish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. when you come, you can stay with ourselves. as usmy house is about three kilometers far away from xian moslem street where is full of local whichfoods.best regards,janet【由陕西省西工大附中2014第七次适应性训练改编】短文改错。 i am angry about the behavior of dishonest in exams. im not saying that im a good student and that ive never cheated. i once write the answers on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry i felt at once. i thought cheat would help me keep my straight as. little i know that i was hurting not only herself but also my teacher. from this lesson i know our teachers want their students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating. 短文改错：1. dishonest-dishonesty/being dishonest 2. and that-or that 3. write-wrote 4. caught-was caught 5. drop most 6. cheat would-cheating would 7. little-little did 8. herself-myself 9. with their own-on their own 10. do the best-doing the best 【由四川省成都七中2014三诊考试改编】短文改错。下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。每句最多有两处错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。dear diary, here i am in the middle of a city, 3