江苏省宝应县画川高级中学高考英语 漫画作文写作技巧学案.doc

英语漫画作文写作技巧 随着普通高等学校招生全国统一考试江苏卷说明的出台，我们发现了与以往任何一年的考试说明所不同的是，今年提供了两篇书面表达样文。一篇为2009年江苏高考英语书面表达，即表格加插图谈鼠标的利弊，另一篇为漫画作文。下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。漫画一方面比文字材料更直观形象，另一方面则由于夸张而使讽刺意蕴的含义更复杂，更不容易把握，而我们的学生在这一类作文方面几乎没有任何的训练。虽然2010年高考英语书面表达会考什么谁也不能断言，但帮助学生在漫画类作文方面有所准备是非常有必要的。一、什么是漫画？漫画是一种讽刺性、批评性或幽默性的图画。画家从生活现象中取材，通过夸张、比喻、象征等手法来讽刺、批评或表扬某些人和事。因为漫画多取材于社会现实和热点问题，具有强烈的时代感和现实性。二、漫画的特点和构成1、漫画的特点有针对性。（针对现实生活中的某种现象或某个问题）捕捉人事物的本质特征。运用变形、夸张、比喻、象征等手法。具有幽默或讽刺的效果。2、漫画的构成三、漫画作文审图立意的步骤、方法第一步：钻进去仔细观察，弄清画面内容。1、看标题。 标题是漫画的眼睛，有时透过这“画眼”，可洞察整幅画的主题。故在审画时首先要看标题是什么，然后再把标题同漫画的内容结合起来进行分析，这样就容易弄清漫画的寓意所在，进而得出观点。2、看画面漫画是一门绘画艺术，它常用简单而又夸张的手法，勾画出幽默、诙谐的画面，用以说明某种观点。因此，分析漫画的画面是解题的重要环节。漫画画面上的每一个细节都对表达漫画的寓意有提示作用。因此，我们在审漫画题时，一定要仔细、全面观察画面。一篇好的英语漫画作文1仔细审题 2准确立义 3规范行文 4整洁书写describe the picture： the picture is talking about/shows the picture shows a common phenomenon. the picture describes an interesting phenomenon. in the picture, there are/is (are) doing the picture above is about lets look at the picture above/first.interpret the picture： it seems very ridiculous thathowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. the picture shows thatit is the exact reflection of the picture indicates that wenowadays, it is a common phenomenon that this is a satirical cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amonggive your opinions： i think/believe that as far as im concerned, in my opinion, from my point of view, should it is better/advisable to i consider it necessary四、注意点的补充就英语漫画类作文的特点，教师还补充几点要求学生在行文时注意：（1）保证作文的三要素-体裁、人称、时态要正确；（2）避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误，如：误解图意、中心不明等；（3）控制字数，不能太短，但也不要太长；（4）结尾尽量要写地精彩。五、总结一篇高分英语漫画作文必定是做到了仔细审题、准确立义、规范行文和整洁书写。要求学生在今后的练习中牢记这几个方面。六、范文参考health care from the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. he had to go to hospital for medical care. when he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. it was beyond what he could afford. its really another heart attack for him. at present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care. worse still, some cant borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. what a pity! to solve the problem, we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced. the government should build up medical insurance system, and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. only in this way can we enjoy our life as long as possible.范文：theburdenofstudentshasbeenahottopicforyears,buttheloadofparentshasreceivedlittleattention,especiallyfromtheirownchildren.thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreetherworkingmum. realizinghermummustbeverytiredafteradayswork,thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.inresponse,themumkneelsdowntoshowhowhappyandthankfulshefeels.allthisremindsmeofm-ymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecoulddotoletmehavethebest.but totallyengagedinmyownstudy,iseldompayattentiontowhatmotherneedsandfeels,andalwaysthinkstudyingwellistheonlythingicoulddoinreturn.nowiknowicandomybittohelpwiththeeverydaywashing,bedroomcleaning,oratleastpreparebreakfastmyself,soastosharemothersdailyburden.thepictureconvincesmeitisevenmoreimportanttobeagooddaughterthana“good”student.七、作业布置运用你今天所学的英语漫画作文的写作方法和技巧来练一篇作文。 例题展示1：简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。（一）内容要点：1描述文字说明： 1）学生被迫上很多补习班无兴趣可言 2）议论文字说明：太多的补习班是浪费时间学习要有兴趣 3）家长不要强迫孩子参加补习4）表达希望（三）文章结构和套语：lookingatthispicture,youwillunderstandbetter“toomuchw