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中考英语写作讲解设计纵览历年中考07 Ill be free tomorrow! What are you going to do tomorrow? Will you visit your grandparents, go shopping or play basketball with your friends? Why?08难忘的初中生活即将结束，同学们在老师的帮助下取得了很大进步。此时此刻，你一定有很多的心里话要对老师说。请给你的老师写一封6080词的信，表达你的心情。信的开头、结尾已给出。（信中不准出现真实校名和姓名）（10分）09 my good habits 从饮食运动睡眠，三个方面谈 Im pretty healthy because I have good habits. 10 全民健身 lets do sports do you think it is important? What sports and why?How often and how long? How do you feel?11假如你即将升入的高中可以为学生提供丰富多彩的社团活动，根据你个人的兴趣爱好，请从下面表格中任意选择12个你喜欢的社团，以My favorite club(s) 为题写一篇短文。在短文中说明你参加的理由，以及你对社团有哪些期待，你希望有怎样的收获等。（10分）Science club Speech clubDrawing club History clubdancing/ singing clubbasketball / football club要求：1. 词数80左右；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3. 内容完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整。What to write?一， 审题 仔细阅读题目，了解作文的要求，题目，字数，形式，提示 信息二， 构思 根据提示信息进行构思，列出关键点，三， 分段 三段论为最佳四， 斟酌句子 选好连接词五， 美化， 提升档次How to trite?1. 扩词拉长：A girl-a beautiful girl- a beautiful and smart girl-a beautiful and smart girl named Helen加长：Play football-play football on the playground-play football on the playground with great effort2.扩句拉长+加长 A boy is eating.- A foreign boy is eating.-A foreign boy, sitting at the table,is eating.-A foreign boy, sitting at the table, is eating a bowl of noodles.-A foreign boy, sitting at the table, is eating a bowl of noodles with two forks.-A foreign boy, sitting at the table, is eating a bowl of noodles with two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks3.改写句子，制造亮点I love you.-Its you that I love.I ts you that I do love.To be or not to be, that is a question（莎士比亚）- To study or not to study, that is a question- To love or not to love, that is a question.- To go or not to go, that is a question- To play or not to play, that is a question.4.运用黄金句式It is no use (good) doing 是没用的It is no use complaining. It is no use crying.Its no use pretending that you didnt know the rules.It is + time sinceIt is two years since I last met him.It isthatIt is friendship that I value most.5.运用万能公式a. It is said that 据说，听说 It is reported that 据报道It is widely known that 众所周知，大家都知道It is said that a boys life was taken away by H1N1.b. In my eyes, + 句子 在我眼中In my opinion, + 句子 在我看来As far as I know,+句子 据我所知In my eyes, Xishi is the most beautiful girl in the world.c. From this picture we can see that + 句子 从中我们可以看出6.运用名言，谚语A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情The happiness will come when the pain leaves. 苦尽甘来The winter is coming and the spring is not far 冬天已经临近了，春天还会远吗？As long as we work hard, we can make the impossible possible 只要我们努力，就能变不可能为可能。Practice makes perfect! 熟能生巧Better early than late.宁早勿迟It is never too late to learn.学习永远不嫌晚。Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。Parents are the first teachers of the children.父母是孩子的第一任老师。Time waits for no man.时不待人。Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。注意点：1 结构紧凑，思路清晰建构框架三段论开头句子： As we know, . Is coming and I have great plans for it.Just as the saying goes: “Every coin has its two sides”, television has both advantages and disadvantages.正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”，电视即有优点也有缺点。The problem of .is important/serious/.to us. Now let me talk something about it.中间段： 陈述点 first, second, third On the one hand, on the other hand Firstly, secondly, thirdly结尾句子：In a word, I think I will have a good time in I believe everything will be better in the future.I am sure the world must be better if we all give our love to others./if we all make a contribution to it.Let us do it hard/try our best to do it.I am really looking forward to it/doing.连词的使用表示时间 when before after as soon as while since until till 表示“反意见”：but, however though although然而，如：Jim is intelligent but lazy.表示“举例示范”：For example, in other words,换句话说表示原因： because since for as表示结果：so， therefore表示目的：in order that, so that表示条件： if, without, but for, unless,二 避免主语单一，句式单一 切忌通篇以I 开头，一下句式可供参考1 .the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 2 Nothing is + 比较级 than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事 3 There is no doubt that + 句子 （毫无疑问的） 例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 4 An advantage of is that + 句子 （的优点是 例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 5 The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 （的原因是） 例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 6 The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V （愈愈） 例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈进步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问 7 By +Ving, can （借着，能够） 例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 8 enable + sb.+ to + V （使能够 例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松 范文欣赏：My favorite clubNew school life is coming. Im so glad to hear that there will be some kinds o f clubs for me.Id like to join the drawing club. On the one hand, I have been learning to draw since I was five years old. I hope the club can offer me more chances to show my talent. Maybe I can have my own exhibitions and become a famous artist one day. On the other hand, Id like to make more friends who have the same hobbies as well.Ill have a colorful school life if I join the club. Im looking forw