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on a third day, i went to the station to see my aunt away. as i was waving goodbye to her, i saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me. 【参考答案】one day, i went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. when i got there, itold that the for wasticket had all been sold out. just then a man came up and said with a strongly zhejiang accent tickets strongthat he had a spare ticket. i didnt know that if i could believe him or not. after hesitate for a 去掉 hesitatingwhile, i decided to take it. so as soon as the man left, i began to regret. if he was not honest, what butshall i do? on a third day, i went to the station to see my aunt away. as i was waving goodbye to should the offher, i saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me. 15.in recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the chinese people, especially among youngsters. moreand more school in china require students to take part community service during the vocations. students are often seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. community service is of the great benefit to both those inneed and society. moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. as modern middle school students, we should get active involved in community service. by participating, we can learn what to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. undoubtedly, both of these are important to our development. therefore, they should treasure all such chances. in recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the chinese people, especially among youngsters. moreand more school in china require students to take part community service during the vocations. students are often schools inseeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. community service is of the great benefit to both those inseenneed and society. moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. as modern middle social school students, we should get active involved in community service. by participating, we can learn what to work well actively howin a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. undoubtedly, both of these are important to skills allour development. therefore, they should treasure all such chances. we16.例如：it was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. luckily i thewas completely free then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday.am onnowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. it has serious influenced people daily life and economic development. to solve the problem，some pieces of advice is put forward. some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. by this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars. some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. this can decrease the traffic flow. but on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.in my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. and at the same time，buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. nowadays，people in many bi