高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错63.doc

2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。when l was in high school, i had an awful experienceat that time l was so brave and outgoing as the othersbecause of that, a boy name big tom would do all kinds of bad things to mei was scaring to see himso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine outi agreedwe met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went wellby the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to menow we have become close friendsin our life, everyone may make mistakeswhat counts most are that we have the courage to correct them2. 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. in that case we are possible to neglect the details. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.3.短文改错this morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. at the noon we had a picnic on the grass. i eat too much, so i couldnt finish my sandwich. as i didnt know what to do with it, i asked my sister for advices. she pointed at the notice, that said, “ no litter.” and she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. just then i saw an elephant coming slow towards us. suddenly an idea came into her mind. i could feed the elephant by my sandwich and i did so in the end. seen this, my sister smiled and said, “what clever you are!”4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.this family made deep impression on me. there were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. you could tell they didnt have a lot of money. their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. the children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. they were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出修改的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。we all have a strong desire to succeed. for some the desire is great than that of the average people. in fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. success is an attitude and has no really secrets. it all start with your belief system. your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. you must at first believe in yourself. on your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. you will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. besides, its necessary of you to have clear goals. youd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。one rainy day while i was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. the driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. i stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. the man insisted, so i grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. this man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. it was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.试卷答案1.when i was in high school, i had an awful experience. at that time i was notso brave and outgoing as the others. because of that, a boy name big tom namedwould do all kinds of bad things to me. i was scaring to see him. scaredso 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