广西凤山县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错专练（2）.doc

广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（2）短文改错-【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。短文改错的趋势：1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主 。2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、 缺词。错词占60%左右【错误类型】 1. 错词 2. 多词 3. 缺词 4. 正错【考点透视】一错词的热点 1 动词时态 语态 非谓语 ；主谓关系。 2 联系词关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。3 名词可数名词 、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。4 介词介词和动词的搭配错误。5 形容词/副词词类错用。6 冠词定冠词和不定冠词的错用。7 代词人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。8 惯用法固定句型，固定短语。 二多词和缺词热点 1. 冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词 to【短文改错主要特点】1. 语言材料取自于学生的习作。 2. 短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。 3. 短文难度符合学生水平。 4. 语言简单易懂。 5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。短文改错snow came a bit later this year than usually. after school, we took a bus to go back home in noon. on the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery trees, houses, and even cars were covered with purely white snow. how desperately we want to play in the snow! however, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearby to enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. despite the cold weather, we had a great fun playing with the snow. many passer-by watched us laughing and playing, with smiles on his faces. occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard it a refreshing experience for us all.【参考答案】4.snow came a bit later this year than usually. after school, we took a bus to go back usualhome in noon. on the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery trees, houses, atand even cars were covered with purely white snow. how desperately we want to play wantedin the snow! however, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearbythereforeto enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. despite the cold weather, we had thata great fun playing with the snow. many passer-by watched us laughing and playing, 去掉 passers-bywith smiles on his faces. occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard their occupiedit a refreshing experience for us all. as短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。we are going to take the college entrance exams in more than two months. therefore, many students still dont know how to balance their study, rest and physical exercises while preparing for the exams. they usually devote too much time to go over their lessons, what results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.as the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise. wed better leave us enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us learn our lessons more efficient. whats more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities. in brief, as we are preparing to the exams, dont forget that rest, exercise and study were equally important.【参考答案】5.we are going to take the college entrance exams in more than two months. therefore(however), many students still dont know how to balance their study, rest and physical exercises(exercise) while preparing for the exams. they usually devote too much time to go(going) over their lessons, what(which) results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.as the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make(makes) a man healthy, wealthy and wise. wed better leave us(ourselves) enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us (加to)learn our lessons more efficient(efficiently). whats more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities. in brief, as we are preparing to(for) the exams, dont forget that rest, exercise and study were(are )equally important.短文改错下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people according to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves no one worries much about the radio pro;ram young people listen to, although radios can be very noiseteachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials on one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown - ups to make children to want things that they dont real need【参考答案】6.many teachersworried /about the effects of television on young people.according to worry/are worriedstudies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school many/somebecauseso much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability of 删除 readingto enjoy themselvesno one worries much about the radio program young people programslisten to, although radios can be very noiseteachers also wonder about the effects of noisytelevision commercials on one year the average child will see 25,000 television incommercials, all planned and written by grown - ups to make children to want things 删除that they dont real needreally短文改错（满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如： it was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. luckily i was the amcompletely free then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday onevening.in march 1984, dr john fellows, who lived in england, and decided to visit his married daughterin the usa. he bought a return air ticket to new york and flew kennedy airport. when he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. worse even, he discovered he cant remember her family name too! dr fellows spent several hours at the airport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but with much luck. eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to england. 参考答案 短文改错（满分10分）in march 1984, dr john fellows, who lived in england, and decided to visit his married daughterin the usa. he bought a return air ticket to new york and flew/ kennedy airport. when he toreached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. worse even, he arrived stilldiscovered he cant remember her family name too! dr fellows spent several hours at the couldnt eitherairport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but trying thatwith much luck. eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he nocaught a next plane back to england. the短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all t