高考英语 写作点拨 4 非谓语动词课件.ppt

2017年高考英语写作点拨 4 非谓语动词 作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味 句子与句子之间的关系显得松散 而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘 读起来费劲 恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换 不仅句型多样 句子活泼 而且读起来结构紧凑 言简意明 一 运用非谓语动词转换简单句1 我为那事感到非常遗憾 开始考虑做些什么来帮一下 ifeelquitesorryforthat ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp feelingquitesorryforthat ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp 现在分词作状语 2 另一方面 我将帮着建立英语角 提供给我们学生一个练习英语口语的平台 ontheotherhand iwillhelpsetuptheenglishcorner iwillprovideusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralenglish ontheotherhand iwillhelpsetuptheenglishcorner providingusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralenglish 现在分词作状语 3 这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说 allthepeopleherelikethenovel itiswrittenbytom allthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbytom 过去分词作定语 4 我们应该多讲英语 我们认为这是很重要的 weshouldspeakmoreenglish wethinkitisveryimportant wethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreenglish it作形式宾语 不定式作真正宾语 5 我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平 这是个问题 howshouldweimproveourspokenenglish itisaquestion howtoimproveourspokenenglishisaquestion 不定式短语作主语 thequestionishowtoimproveourspokenenglish 不定式短语作表语 4 theboysweremakingthemostoftime theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier 5 isawanoldgranny shelayontheground iwentovertohelpher 答案 1 touchedbytheteacher swords wedecidedtoworkhard 2 nothavingreceivedherletter ihadtowriteagain 3 theboy scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry 4 theboysweremakingthemostoftime soas tofinishtheworkearlier 5 seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground iwentovertohelpher 二 运用非谓语动词转换复合句1 惊诧于他们的熟练程度 我决心要像他们一样好 becauseiwasamazedathowskillfultheywere ideterminedtobejustasgood amazedathowskillfultheywere ideterminedtobejustasgood 过去分词作状语 2 看到一辆车朝她而来 我伸出手把她拉了回来 whenisawacarrunningtowardsher ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback seeingacarrunningtowardsher ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback 现在分词作状语 3 练习了接近两个月篮球后 我们强烈渴望获得一场胜利 afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths westronglydesiredtobethewinner havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths westronglydesiredtobethewinner 现在分词作状语 4 这里曾有一家化肥厂 位于城市的南边 它每天释放出大量有毒气体 污染环境 therewasalargefactory whichproducedfertilizer everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas whichpollutedtheenvironment therewasalargefactory whichproducedfertilizer everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas pollutingtheenvironment 点拨 原句 中分别由which引导两个定语从句 重复且单调 将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后 不仅表达多样 而且言简意明 5 由于老师的帮助 我的英语进步很大 因为我的英语进步很大 我确信我能考上更好的大学 becausemyteacherhelpsme myenglishhasgreatlyimproved becausemyenglishhasgreatlyimproved i msureiwillgotoabetteruniversity withmyteacherhelpingme myenglishhasgreatlyimproved becausemyenglishhasgreatlyimproved i msureiwillgotoabetteruniversity 点拨 原句 两处重复出现由because引导的从句 读起来很别扭 换用 with 现在分词的复合结构 后 读起来给人的感觉大不一样 2 wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothink 3 itookpartinthemeeting whichwasheldinbeijinglastfriday itwasveryinstructive whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday itookpartinthemeeting lastfriday itwasveryinstructive whichwashostedbyamanager 4 motherwenttoworkinahurry andshedidn thavebreakfast shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate motherwenttoworkinahurry shewasasbusyasabeethesedays 答案 1 onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse2 itpossibleforthemtomasterone3 heldinbeijing comingtoourcompanyyesterday4 withouthavingbreakfast comingbackhomeverylate 一般表达 therearealargenumberoftaxidriversinbeijing theyservepassengersheartandsoul theyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofbeijing theymakesomemoney theyworkfromdawntillnight oneday ileftmycellphoneinthetaxiitook igotintouchwiththedriver hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome iwasveryexcited 高级表达 答案 therearealargenumberoftaxidriversinbeijing servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofbeijing inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies theyworkfromdawntillnight oneday igotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiitook onhearingwhathadhappened thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome seeingmycellphoneagain iwastooexcitedtosayaword 一般表达 therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday ononehand therearestilllotsofpeople theyhavenohousestolivein ontheotherhand manyapartmentsarehardtosellout evenifyoubuyanapartment i mafraidyouhavetopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife idohopeourgovernmenttakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthepeople theirincomesarelow 高级表达 答案 therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday ononehand therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein ontheotherhand manyapartmentsarehardtosellout evenify