河南省郑州市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（5）.doc

郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（5）附参考范文短文改错(201*保定调研)last sunday i went to the birds nest stadium. at gate1._i happened to meet some young america tourists.i greeted2._to them in english and then we began to chat. from the chat3._i learned that they were college students traveling in beijing4._but most of them were fond of chinese culture. they were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._after come out of the stadium, we went to the water cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. we exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to each other later. they thanked us again and again.10._i was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral english.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。2americaamerican应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文(4)(25 min.)实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “being a good listener” 的英文演讲稿。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。注意： 1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数不少于120。3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。_【参考范文】one possible version：good afternoon, everyone，the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.what i want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be openminded to different opinions even though you dont like them. in a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.thank you for your listening!*结束 经典名句与句式汇总：核心句型（开头、正文、结尾）1. 开头the arguer may be right about , but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (take into account) that fact thatas opposed to (contrary to) widely (commonly/generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas/views), i believe (argue thatalthough many people believe that , i doubt (wonder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).the advantages of b outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) a.although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that , it is unlikely to be true thatthere is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) thatit is true that (true, / to be sure, / admittedly,), but this is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesnt follow / it doesnt mean / it wont be the case) thatthe main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact that it would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that in all the discussion and debate over, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).there is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) thatlogical (valid / sound) as this argument and i wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when is taken into consideration (account).to assume (suggest) that is far from being proved (to miss the point).a close (careful) inspection (examination / scrutiny) of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless / fallacious) it is.on the surface (at first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find thattoo much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / importance attached to) may obscure (overlook / neglect) other factsthe danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is thatwhat the arguer fails to understand (consider /mention) is thatwe dont have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity) of this argument (proposition).however just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.【专题训练与高考预测】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在刻行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行在边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没能错的不要改passage 1 miss chinaguan qi, a 21-years-old college student from jilin 1._ province, had won the miss china 2003 beauty pageant 2._ in sanya, hainan province, on september 21. 3._ besides judged on their looks, the 32 competitors 4._ were tested on their write ability, english skills, 5._ team-work and generally knowledge. miss guan qi 6._ impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7._ replies during the question or answer section. she will 8._ represent(代表) chinese in the final of miss world 9._ to be holding in sanya on december 6. 10._ key:11. 21-years-old -21-year-old 2. had won -won3. 4. judged- being 5. written- writing 6. generally- general 7.去掉 who 或 who -were 8. or -and 9. chinese- china 10. holding- held*结束*结束高考英语：写作综合训练集写作话题议论篇 诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以how to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。注意：1词数：120左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。how to guarantee honestyas we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, _ honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.【参考范文】-one possible version:as we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others homework and fool their teachers and parents. therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.personally, i think honesty education is necessary. for instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. with the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time. honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“how to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间，有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主；时态为一般现在时；本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点： 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象；2. 解决这一现象的方法；3. 总结要点。*结束 （*）ill never forget the trip to europe last year. after i left76. a small village in the south of france, i drove on to the next77. town. in the way a young man who was very tall stopped me and78. asked me for the lift. as soon as he got into the car, i said79. good morning to him in french and he answered with the same80. language. except for a few words, i do not know any french81. at all. none of us spoke during the journey. i had nearly82. reached the town, while the young man suddenly said very slowly. 83. do. you., speak. english? i looked at him in surprising. 84. here was no people speak english. just then i understood that85. he, too, was an englishman.(二)76left had 77. 78. in on 79. 第一个the a80. with in 81. do did 82. none neither 83. while when 84. surprising surprise 85. speak speaking*结束下面五幅图画叙述了胡先生热爱动物的一段经历。请根据图画内容,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述他的经历并发表一点你的个人看法。 参考范文mr. hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does only causes harm to animals, because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs. he kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animalsfur and skin. worse still, he even ate wild ani- mals in restaurants and fixed some heads of rare anima