江西省奉化市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础训练（8）.doc

浙江奉化市2016高考英语短文改错基础训练（8）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。my father is a farmer. he had only received five years of education in school but he can also gain a lot of in field work for his diligence.last december，i went home for vacation. i learned that his father had suffered great losses in breeding ducklings because of a unknown disease and planting watermelons that were rotted due to the heavy rainfall. father sighed, “you can never change so unexpected bad luck.”i didnt argue. the next day i went downtown and brought some agricultural guidance book back home. while scanned one of the books after my strong recommendation, father says，“god，if only i had known this！”since then, father has held a difference attitude toward books. he succeeded. knowledge changes bad luck!【参考答案】：my father is a farmer. he only received five years of education in school but he can also gain a lot of in field work for his diligence.last december，i went home for vacation. i learned that father had suffered great losses in breeding ducklings because of unknown disease and planting watermelons that were rotted due to the heavy rainfall. father sighed, “you can never change unexpected bad luck.”i didnt argue. the next day i went downtown and brought some agricultural guidance back home. while one of the books after my strong recommendation, father ，“god，if only i had known this！”since then, father has held a attitude toward books. he succeeded. knowledge changes bad luck!假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。the first time when i went on a plane was when i went to hong kong with my dad.when i saw the plane, i thought it was very big. but when there was a lot of passengers seatingon the plane, it wasnt very big any more. it could carry lots of people and baggages. that was so amazed! when the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. it hurt me very much that i wanted to cry. i said to myself, “dont cry. i cant cry.” but i couldnt hold back from my tears. “if you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. when i heard that my dad said, i chewed a piece of gum.【参考答案】4.the first time when i went on a plane was when i went to hong kong with my dad. when i saw the plane, i thought it was very big. but when there was a lot of passengers seating were seatedon the plane, it wasnt very big any more. it could carry lots of people and baggages. that was baggageso amazed! when the plane flew up intosky, my ears started to hurt. it hurt me very much amazing the sothat i wanted to cry. i said to myself, “dont cry. i cant cry.” but i couldnt hold back from my tears. “if you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. when i heard that my dad chew whatsaid, i chewed a piece of gum.短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week. i was surprising to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. take my aunts family for example. we supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have ten workers working for themselves. their familys income reached as much 100, 000 yuan last year. not only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad every year. when asking what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a few english so that they could do business with foreigners directly. to their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.【参考答案】：i visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week. i was to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. take my aunts family for example. supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have ten workers working for .their familys income reached as much100, 000 yuan last year. not only they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad every year. when what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a english so that they could do business with foreigners directly. to their ， my cousin can use he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。from the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is，they are short-sightedas we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesightbut do you know how to protect your eyesight? first, dont keep your eyes work for a long timeyoud better have rest after you have studied an hour or sosecond, pay much attention to the followingdont read under the sun or in a poor light; dont to read in bed or in a moved busthird, do eye-exercise every dayit will also help you keep good eyesightand last, you should have enough sleeponly you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from become short-sighted 【参考答案】6.1students后（加who或去are ） 2which（改it）3work（改working） 4have后（加a） 5under（改in） 6dont to（去掉to ）7moved（moving） 8eye-exercise （改eye-exercises） 9only 后（加if）10become（改becoming）短文改错。how nice to hear you again. you want to know76._ how is going o