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山西省霍州市2014高考英语书面表达训练（8）及参考范文【2014高考英语模拟试题】书面表达(满分25分)假如你叫李华，打算毕业后到美国留学，请给你的美国笔友tom写一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：1留美原因增长见识，体验文化；2目前困扰语言障碍，学业压力；3征求对方建议。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3不要逐字逐句翻译；4邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear tom，ive finally made up my mind to go to america for further study after graduation._looking forward to your reply.yours，li hua【参考范文】dear_tom，ive_finally_made_up_my_mind_to_go_to_america_for_further_study_after_graduation.ive been longing to go to america，mainly for two reasons.one is that i want to experience american culture, which is believed to be the most diverse in the world, and the other is that i hope to broaden my horizon in this developed country.but to tell you the truth, i have some worries about this. i dont have a good command of english, especially spoken english, so im afraid ill have difficulty fitting in very soon. besides, i may suffer from high pressure from college courses, which im not sure i can handle.with so many things bothering me, i hope you can offer me some practical advice.looking_forward_to_your_reply.yours，li_hua【2014高考英语吉林省白山市第一中学二模】书面表达（满分25分） 高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，在这一年中，学生们要面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生下课后也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“a ten - minute break”为主题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。短文的要点如下： 1十分钟的课间休息很有必要。 2要注意适当的休息方式。 3你是怎样利用这十分钟的。 注意：开头已经给出，不计入总词数；字数120字左右。a ten - minute break as a senior three student, time seems much limited. _【2014高考英语河北省衡水中学一调考试】书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华，你的外国笔友mark 想了解你校的近况。正好你校正在开展“提倡节约、反对浪费”的活动。 请根据下文的提示给mark写一封电子邮件。节约用纸，废纸回收；节约用水，珍惜水源；节约用电，按时熄灯；节约用餐，不乱花钱。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总数；4.参考词汇：launch vt. 开展； thrift n. 节俭。dear mark,im very glad you are so interested in our school. _ yours, li hua【参考范文】书面表达:dear mark,im very glad you are so interested in our school.recently our school is launching an activity to call for thrift and go against wasting. every student is required to save paper, water, electricity and food. all waste paper must be collected and sold to help the poor students. water must be made full use of and now you cannot find any tap that is left running without students around. and each student should get into a great habit of turning off the light on time. whats more, all of us are called on not to use our pocket money to buy some things unnecessary and some students even use their saved money to help the students in need. yours, li hua【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)以下是网上走红的 “低碳哥”的基本情况.时 间: 2011年。人物介绍: “低碳哥”, 用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人,主张少用能源,减少二氧化碳的排放。主要做法: 1. 捡起废纸,用空白一面写字； 2. 不开灯看电视,还把电视亮度调到最低(minimum)； 3. 上班骑自行车,不开车等。人们的看法: 做秀,不现实。你的看法: 我完全支持他的想法和行为，尽管他的行为未能对全球气候变暖造成很大的影响，但他至少可以享受健康的生活。【写作内容】根据以上“低碳哥”的基本情况写一篇介绍,内容包括:“低碳哥”的简要介绍及走红的时间;他的主要做法及人们的看法3、你的看法【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。参考词汇: 低碳哥low-carbon brother 二氧化碳 carbon dioxide【参考范文】possible version:a young man called low-carbon brother became a hit one on the internet in 2011, who suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air. for example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something and while he is watching tv, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. some people think that what he is doing is just a show and impractical. but as far as i am concerned, i strongly support his idea and his behavior because although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.基础写作评分说明基础写作主要考查考生的语言结构的应用能力：能够应用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达写作内容所提供的全部内容。在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分；2在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；考生是否使用了合适的句型结构；3在内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达所提供的全部信息；如果考生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分；4在连贯方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。三、基础写作评分标准:语 言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。内 容5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包括所提供的信息内容。连 贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给0分。【广东省2012届高三考前冲刺卷(八)】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)今天是九月九日重阳节(the double ninth festival)，你作为志愿者和班上的其他同学到养老院去慰问老人，以下是今天的主要活动：1向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡)；2为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天)。写作内容请你写一篇日记，包括以下内容1记录当天的活动；2发表自己的感想。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。_ 基础写作【参考范文】september 9th,2011today is the double ninth festival，the traditional chinese festival for the elderly；we visited the nursing home to celebrate the special day.when we got there，we visited the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with flowers and selfmade cards to show our respect and love.then we did some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.as some old people felt lonely，we chatted with them about their old days，changes of our city，or anything they are interested in.the elderly have done so much for their families as well as for our country，so i think we should take more care and respect for them.【2014高考英语哈尔滨市第三中学一模】 书面表达（满分25分）下列图表反映的是某高中2010年与2013年学生健康状况调查的部分数据，请你用英语为某报写一份报告，反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其中原因，并提出一些改进措施。注意事项：1. 报告必须包括图表中所有内容，但不要逐条罗列； 2. 词数120词左右。题目和开头第一句已给出，不计入总词数。healtha recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. _ _ _ 【参考范文】healtha recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. the number of short-sighted students has increased from 77% in 2010 to 93.5% in 2013, while that of overweight students fro