高考英语二轮限时高效训练 短文改错8.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错81.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。last sunday i saw a worst storm in yearsit came sudden and went on for over three hoursafter lunch, i went into my room to have a restthe air was hot, but all was quietthen a strong wind started to blow into my roompieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open windowas i ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fallwhen i come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harderthen i heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the housewhen i ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。no body language can be much attractive than smiling not only can beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it make others feel delightedsmiling is very powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disastersa little boy calling lang zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many of people when a serious earthquake hit wen chuan right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them his smile was like sunshine and warmed people were trappedn the disaster, it is safe to say that without smile our life would be colorless and hardtry it but everything will be different! 3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。this autumn, my class went to the seaside to go camping. we arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains. we set up our tents on the sandy beach. when night fell, we started a fire to give we light and kept us warm. all my classmates sat around them, talking, singing and laughing. several hours late, robert and i went back the tent to have the chat. we stayed up all night. we found that we two had a lot of in common. the fire and stars saw ourhappy and friendship. what i wished time would stop at the moment! 4.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。mr. black，were very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. thank you very much.we had been studying hard since we came back to school. under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progress on our studies. so we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. we have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject well in order to be admitted to key university in the future.were looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the nanjing ourselves. so we hope you can post us a photo of your soon.best wishes! yours，li hua5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。my father and i stayed at the south lake hotel for a week when we visit beijing last month. it is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.we lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. what i liked best were the free highspeed internet connection in the room. i checked my email messages every day. i also shared for my friends many photos taking in beijing. the food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.it is such great hotel that i would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to beijing.6.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。when we learn english, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it wont be very harder for us to remember them. the following is one of example. january named after god janus. he was a strange god because he has two faces. he could look in two directions. he could look forward or backward at the same time. he was the god of endings and beginnings. january is the month on which one looks forward to the new year and its also a period of time how people think about the past year.now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months?试卷答案1.76a 改为the 77sudden改为suddenly 78but改为and79out后加of 80it改为them 81drop改为drops82come改为came 83more改为much或去掉 84that改为what85broke改为broken2.no body language can be much attractive than smiling. not only can beautifulmore a smile make ourselves happy, but also it make others feel delighted. smiling ismakesvery powerful that it gives people great courage to face and defeat disasters. a littlesoboy calling lang zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a great many ofcalledpeople when a serious earthquake hit wen chuan. right after he is rescued by the soldiers was from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them. his smile was like sunshine and warmed ruinspeoplewere trapped in the disaster. it is safe to say that without smile our life would bewho或去掉werecolorless and hard. try it but everything will be different! 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