【状元之路】高考英语二轮复习 疯狂时刻 短文改错1(1).docVIP

2014英语高考疯狂时刻引领状元之路：短文改错1(建议用时: 40分钟)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误; 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。1i was a honest child indeed. i didnt dare to tell lies because of my eyes often let the secret out. i remembered telling a lie to my parents, and i could hard fix eyes on my fathers face, let alone my mothers eyes. i glanced here and there, up and down nervous. however, after i came to beijing, i no longer have to worry about my nervous eyes because everything i wanted to speak was sent by letter. i found myself often tell small lies. i wrote “im well in beijing. i enjoy the food selling at the university. and at weekends, i often buy fried chickens or pork to eat. ”2there were many people on the bus and no vacant seats. when a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you, ”she said, “but please dont do that. i am perfect able to stand. ”“but, madam, let me. . . ”began the man. “i ask you to keep your seat, ”interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. so the man tried to rise, and said, “madam, will you kindly permit me to. . . ? ”“no, no, ”said the woman and again force him back. at last the man managed to get up, say, “madam, you carried me three block beyond my house. i wanted get off. ”3my friendship with yang qing began when we meet in our school photo club. from then on we became good friend. we had common interest in basketball and often shared their experience about photographing. on weekends we rode to play the basketball together. now in senior 3, we seldom play together, or still keep in touch and encourage each other. with the entrance exam comes near, im worried about what my life will like as we may go to different universities. but now what doesnt worry me any more because i know just as the old saying goes: truly friendship will always live on no matter where far apart we are. 4chocolate is many people favorite food. people often use pencils to write or draw with. its difficult to put those two different things together. and some people made chocolate pencils in japan. they are becoming more and more popular among chocolate lover all over the world. you can use them to write or draw with, but you can only eat them. the sweetly pencils are not only in the shape of real pencils, but also have a special“pencil sharpener”comes with them. you can use them to sharpen the chocolate pencils and putting the shavings on cakes or other desserts. maybe this is a good news for child who enjoy chewing on the ends of their pencils. 答案解析1答案: i was a honest child indeed. i didnt dare to tell lies because of my eyes often let anthe secret out. i remembered telling a lie to my parents, and i could hard fix eyes hardly myon my fathers face, let alone my mothers eyes. i glanced here and there, up and down nervous. however, after i came to beijing, i no longer have to worry about my nervously hadnervous eyes because everything i wanted to speak was sent by letter. i found myself sayoften tell small lies. i wrote “im well in beijing. i enjoy the food selling at thetelling solduniversity. and at weekends, i often buy fried chickens or pork to eat. ”chicken1. 【解析】将第一句中的a改为an。honest是以元音音素开头, 需要用an。2. 【解析】将第二句中的of去掉。这里是一个原因状语从句。3. 【解析】将第三句中的hard改为hardly。hardly表示几乎不。4. 【解析】在第三句的fix之后加my。fix ones eyes on凝视于 。5. 【解析】将第四句中的nervous改为nervously。修饰动词glance, 用副词。6. 【解析】将第五句中的have改为had。全文基本时态是过去时。7. 【解析】将第五句中的speak改为say。speak一般跟语言, say后接说话的内容。8. 【解析】将第六句中的tell改为telling。作found的宾语补足语, 表示正在做 。9. 【解析】将第八句中的selling改为sold。the food与sell之间为被动关系, 所以用过去分词短语作后置定语。10. 【解析】将第九句中的chickens改为chicken。chicken作“鸡肉”讲, 为不可数名词。2答案: there were many people on the bus and no vacant seats. when a woman got off, ona man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you, ”she said, “but please dont do that. i am perfect able to stand. ”“but, perfectlymadam, let me. . .”began the man. “i ask you to keep your seat, ”interrupted a thewoman with the hands on her shoulders. so the man tried to rise, and said, his but“madam, will you kindly permit me to. . . ? ”“no, no, ”said the woman and again force him back. at last the man managed to get up, say, “madam, you carried forced sayingme three block beyond my house. i wanted get off. ”blocks to1. 【解析】第二句中的offon。由句意“一位妇女刚上车, 一个男人试图站起来。”可知用get on上车。2. 【解析】去掉第二句中的had。文章记叙的是过去发生的事, 故用一般过去时。3. 【解析】第四句中的perfectperfectly。修饰形容词应用副词。4. 【解析】第六句中的athe。特指前面提到的妇女, 故用定冠词。5. 【解析】第六句中的herhis。此处指妇女把她的手放在男人的肩膀上(阻止他为自己让座)。6. 【解析】第七句中的sobut。男人想站起来, 可是妇女不让, 前后是转折关系, 故用but。7. 【解析】第八句中的forceforced。动作发生在过去, 故用一般过去时。8. 【解析】第九句中的saysaying。say与句子主语是逻辑上的主动关系, 故用现在分词作伴随状语。9. 【解析】第九句中的blockblocks。block为可数名词, 此处指三个街区, 所以用复数。10. 【解析】第十句中的wanted后加to。want to do sth. “想要做某事”, 是固定搭配。3答案: my friendship with yang qing began when we meet in our school photo club. metfrom then on we became good friend. we had common interest in basketball and friendsoften shared their experience about photographing. on weekends we rode to play the ourbasketball together. now in senior 3, we seldom play together, or still keep in touch butand encourage each other. with the entrance exam comes near, im worried about comingwhat my life will like as we may go to different universities. but now what doesnt be itworry me any more because i know just as the old saying goes: truly friendship will truealways live on no matter where far apart we are. how1. 【解析】将第一句中的meet改为met。前面是began, 时态一致。2. 【解析】将第二句中的friend改为friends。主语是we, friend用复数形式。3. 【解析】将第三句中的their改为our。前面是we, 代词一致。4. 【解析】将第四句中的the去掉。球类前面不用冠词。5. 【解析】将第五句中的or改为but。这里是转折关系。6. 【解析】将第六句中的comes改为coming。这里是with的复合结构。7. 【解析】在第六句中的will后面加be。like是介词, 前面需要用动词be。8. 【解析】将第七句中的what改为it。it代指上句中提到的事情。9. 【解析】将第八句中的truly改为true。后面是名词friendship, 用形容词修饰。10. 【解析】将第八句中的where改为how。构成how far。4答案: chocolate is many people favorite food. people often use pencils to write or peoplesdraw with. its difficult to put those two different things together. and some people butmade chocolate pencils in japan. they are becoming more and more popular among chocolate lover all over the world. you can use them to write or draw with, but lovers cant you can only eat them. the sweetly pencils are not only in the shape of real pencils, sweetbut also have a special “pencil sharp