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广西德保县2016高考英语二轮书面表达精练（8）（2014安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪hi worried，im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment. yours,jamie【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑jamie的口吻回复worried的求助信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题，所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太担心了。（1）the truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.（2）it is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.【参考范文】hi worried,im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. the truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. the important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. here are three useful tips:first, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. this is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. and third, remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.i hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.yours,jamie【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 以下是一场关于学生十八岁成人礼报道的主要内容。【写作内容】 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯。时间2013年5月4日，五四青年节活动地点与参加人员你校体育馆，高三全体学生倡议的责任与要求对自己负责：已长大，不是小孩；对家庭负责：感恩父母，因为他们艰辛地把我们抚养大；对社会负责：身为社会一份子。意义让学生懂得成人后承担的责任更重；在做决定的时候要考虑周全成人礼growing-up ceremony; 五四青年节chinese youth day【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作(one possible version)on chinese youth day, may 4th, 2013, a growing-up ceremony was held in our school gym to help us recognize our duty for ourselves, our families and the society. taking part in the ceremony, we senior three students realize that we are grown-ups rather than children. therefore, it is important to show our appreciation for our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up. furthermore, as a member of society, we must fulfill our duty to our country. in a word, as adults, we have more responsibilities on our shoulders and should take more into consideration when making decisions. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。these are the two simple words, if and what. these two words can be used in many sentences and questions by them, selves, but if you put them together, it forms a serious question, what if.? this question will bring you back to a certain time in your life when you made a choice. you may not be happy with that choice today and often think about why you did it, but you made the decision because it was the best choice at that specific moment m your life. now, years later, you start to think about that specific choice you made. you mentally struggle with yourself and consider if you could choose again, what would you do? would it be totally different? i truly believe if you want something very much, you can do it and achieve it, because where there is a will, there is-a way. you can correct the mistakes of your decisions for the past, go out and find happiness in the right decisions for your future. it is never too late to do anything in life.【写作内容】1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词就“人生努力永不晚”谈一谈你的看法，内容包括：(1)你对人生努力的理解；(2)举一个“大器晚成”的例子；(3)你对实例的评价或看法。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)this passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams so long as we have the determination, even though some wrong decisions may have been made before. as for me, i believe in the old saying “nothing is impossible”. no matter how many difficulties we might go through, we can overcome them if we dont give up. harland sanders, who quitted school and worked on a farm at 14, became a cook and dishwasher later. he didnt achieve anything until he retired and used his small retirement check to start a new business at the age of 65. now harlands business, kentucky fried chicken, has expanded to all over the world. that man,