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考研图画作文预复习资料（1）2012考研图画作文专题一、第一段套话如何描述一、词汇准备1) 有关图画的名词u sketch/ drawing/ cartoon/ caricature/ diagram/ picture/ painting/ portrait/ portrayal2）描述图画的形容词 thought-provoking发人深省的enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣profound含义深刻 =far-reaching implicationsinstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV: extremely, highly, most, particularly, very/quite ）ridiculous/ preposterous荒谬可笑的; amusingilluminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有启发性的；很有助益的；impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸张的3）描述图画的动词describe/depict/illustrate/present/portray/demonstrate4）修饰动词的副词：graphically/ vividly生动地, symbolically象征性地, conspicuously/clearly /explicitly清晰地, subtly巧妙地，精细地, ironically/sarcastically /satirically讽刺地, humorously5）寓意Is the moral tagged to the story clear? The implication of your silence is that youre bored.a film with a message 有寓意的影片symbolic/implied/intended meaningThe connotation subtly conveyed should be taken into consideration. I have already spoken about the import of his speech. (FORMAL) (import: meaning not clearly expressed意思 ) 寓意深刻 have a profound message, be pregnant with symbolic meaning富有象征意义entertain a thought deeply The humorous language with rich implied meaning is in agreement with Lun Xuns theme of exposing nationality.作品的叙事话语风趣诙谐而寓意深刻,承接着鲁迅暴露国民性的主题。 6）字幕l We are informed by the caption that “_”. l The caption reads/indicates that “_”.7）考研作文中常见的主体 大学生：college (and university) students 老人: the old, old people, the aged, senior citizens 年轻人：the young, young people, the youth(总称) 青少年：juveniles, adolescents, teenagers(13-19岁), youngsters 老百姓: people from all walks of life, ordinary people, the general public二、图画描述段首套话1. What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is!2. How interesting and enlightening it is!3. This is a very thought-provoking picture.4. This is quite an extraordinary and meaningful picture.5. The cartoon reveals a very thought-provoking scene.6. The picture describes an increasingly common scenario in todays world.7. Almost everybody who lives in is familiar with the phenomenon shown in this picture.8. It is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing.三、图画描述套话-半套+描述1（图画总述）1. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, （图画总述）2. As is shown/described in the pictures above, we can see clearly that 3. What is conspicuously/clearly illustrated/ presented /portrayed/described in the drawing above is that 4. The satirical sketch graphically portrays/ depicts a scene in which 5. It is graphically/symbolically/explicitly/ vividly/illustrated/demonstrated in the drawing that 6. It is a very alarming cartoon, in which7. The cartoon features a man who looks 8. A first glance at this cartoon tells us that四、图画描述套话-半套+描述1 (there be 图画总述）1. As the exaggerative and enlightening drawing describes, there is/are2. As is vividly depicted in the impressive and satirical cartoon, there is/are3. There is, as is vividly depicted in this picture, 4. Currently, there is a widespread concern about the previously neglected connection between A and B. As the two graphs obviously portrayed,5. According to this vivid and inspiring picture, there is/are6. This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a critical moment. In it, there is/are7. This is a very eye-catching picture. In it, there is/are8. One cannot help but be moved by the drawing. There is/are五、图画描述套话-半套+描述2（图画重点信息）1. What impresses me most is that 描述2（图画重点信息）.2. The most striking feature of the drawing is (the fact) that 3. What makes the drawing striking/ intriguing /compelling is the fact that 4. The title of the picture further points out that六、图画描述段尾套话 (承上启下/总结)1. Given its profound social implication, the thought-provoking phenomenon is well worth our endeavor to explore.有鉴于它深刻的社会寓意，该引人深思现象非常值得我们努力去探究。2. Simple as the image seems to be, the intended/ implied meaning goes far deeper.3. Uncomplicated as the picture is, the symbolic/implied meaning is as deep as ocean.4. Odd and funny (可根据情况任意替换形容词) as it seems/appears to be/ looks, such/ these happenings/practices/ phenomena/ stories/ cases/ events are so pervasive/ widespread that we cant afford to ignore/ disregard/ overlook/ pay no attention to them.5. Odd and funny as the above image looks/seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.6. Simply designed as the pictures are, the symbolic meaning they convey are rather deep and profound.7. The primary purpose of this picture lies in the criticism of the moral degradation.8. The set of pictures apparently reminds us that excessive protection only leads to negative results.七、强调语气时可用的套语l There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly (巧妙的)conveyed should be given deep consideration.there is no doubt that-的同义替换l Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Indisputably/ Incontrovertibly, _.l beyond any doubt，beyond question，without doubt八、图画描述首段写作的三种思路第一段的思路1：段首套话半套+描述1 (图画概述) 半套+描述2(图画重点信息) 段尾套话u What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, 描述1（图画概述） . What impresses me most is that (=The most striking feature of the drawing is that)描述2（图画重点信息）. Simple as the image is, the implications mirrored are apparently/ conspicuously far-reaching.第一段的思路2：半套+描述1 (图画概述) 半套+描述2(图画重点信息） The cartoon subtly and symbolically depicts a thought-provoking scenario in which 描 述 1. Further examination reveals that 描 述 2. / However, a quick glance at _ reveals ironically that 描 述 2 .第一段的思路3：半套+描述1 (图画概述) 半套+描述2(图画重点信息) 段尾套话 As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述 1 . The most striking feature is 描述 2 （图画重点信息). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.专题二、如何具体描写图画 掌握图画作文第一段描述图画的四种句型。 分析范文，模仿描述图画的高分写作方法。 分析并掌握0209年的考研真题图画作文题首段描述。一、四种图画描写句型句型1： (主谓版) 主体(+定从)+动作+客体(+定从)例：In the picture, we are worried to find that the god of death is sitting maliciously on a bus whose driver dozed off while driving. It clearly tells us that in the domain of transportation, there are hidden dangers everywhere should we become careless.句型2：(倒装版)地点+动作+主体(+定从)例：The above picture features a man who is quite bothered and dissatisfied with his new toothbrush, which is of poor quality. As the caption indicates, the toothbrush is not a product of good attributes (特质), but of unsatisfactory ones. We can also guess that such a toothbrush may hurt the mans teeth as well as his mood, inconveniencing him greatly.句型3：(there be版)There is/are主体(+定从) (00)The picture unveils a drastic change of ocean ecology during the past century due to the expanding scale of world commercial fishing. There were few fishing ships on the sea in 1900 when an enormous number of fish swam freely; in contrast, in 1995 a large fleet of ships were endeavoring to search for the only one fish in the sea.段首套话+there be （00）As is shown in the picture, with the rampancy猖厥 of commercial fishing, the number of fishes dramatically decreased. In picture one, there were various kinds of fish swimming freely and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 a large fleet of ships were endeavoring to search for their target, with only one fish in the sea. 句型4：(高手版)非谓语动词做插入语/用分词做状语例：用分词做伴随状语 The picture reveals a scenario that is commonly seen in any urban area. A woman on the third floor of a building is happily hanging up the clothes she has just washed on a sunny day, ignoring that the dropping water is drenching the dry coverlets hung by her neighbor downstairs. The victim looks very annoyed by the womens selfish behavior. (官方版)例：地点+动作+主体（+定从） At the upper part of the picture is a selfish woman who is bringing out her wet clothes to dry. The water (dropping) from her clothes dampens/drenches (或makeswet) the quilt/sheets of a pitiful neighbor who is conspicuously angry about the womans uncivilized behavior/with an angry expression on his face.二、“段首套话+there be”的图画描述结构图画描述结构：段首套话+there be串联图画+伴随状语+平行结构(+虚拟语气)(+定语从句/独立主格)+提示语翻译(+段尾套话)(+主题概括)例：(09) As the exaggerative and enlightening drawing describes(段首套话), there are (there be串联) many peopleold and young, men and women(后置定语/平行结构)sitting within narrow spaces in a circular area which can be divided into some sub-sections(定语从句), working or playing(伴随状语) on computers to communicate with each other via the Internet, as if all of them were separated by and confined to this “spider web”(虚拟语气/平行结构). The caption under this cartoon indicates: “The Internet: near or far?”(提示语翻译) After careful thinking, it seems that what is conveyed in the drawing is quite realistic and most meaningful.(段尾套话)三、双图的描述方法范文(美丽不是表面的): 主体（+定从）+动作+客体（+定从） The set of thought-provoking cartoons symbolically illustrates different attitudes toward rubbish. As is demonstrated in the first sketch, a beautiful girl, after eating a banana, is throwing the peel (或rubbish, garbage, waste, trash) away casually. On the contrary, a disabled man is struggling (或trying/trying his best) to put her trash into the rubbish can/box. In addition, we are informed by the caption that “the beauty is not on the face.”四、其它描述图画的模板 模板一：It is undoubtedly believed that is of the utmost importance to one nation/society/ individuala matter no one can afford to ignore. As is vividly portrayed in the drawing above, Generally speaking, However, the most striking feature of the drawing is that 模板二：What the drawing is trying to portray is profound, which seems to be eye-catching at first sight, but thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most conspicuous feature that impresses me deeply is 模板三：The picture depicts a scene in which The scene is presented in an artistic and ironic manner. Crowds of people are crammed in Further examination reveals that It is not difficult to find that in todays society, an increasing number of people begin to It is rather good news to 模板四：The cartoon reveals a very thought-provoking scene. The artist purposefully exaggerates This picture reveals the in-depth problem of From the picture we can perceive that What astonishes the readers is that It is known to all that, but it seems真题分析与模仿(08) : “段首套话+there be”的图画描述结构u (08) According to this vivid and inspiring picture, there are two disabled men running fast to their destination, supporting each other with their powerful hands and leaving the crutches far behind them, as if both of them proved to be healthy and normal. It seems that they have successfully cracked the hard nut of lameness which might have confused the majority of the disabled. The caption under the cartoon indicates, “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel extensively.” The drawers intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be in deep meditation.范文(07) :“段首套话+there be”的图画描述结构u (07) This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a critical moment. In it, there is a nervous soccer forward standing by the penalty spot, facing up with his opponent, the goalkeeper. Interestingly enough, the forward magnifies the goalkeeper in his mind so that chances of shooting in are slim. Meanwhile, the goal-keeper minimizes his own image, with an illusion that the goal is too enormous for him to protect, as if he couldnt defend the goal successfully. Casting a closer look and reflection upon this picture provides us with a better sense of its deep implications.范文(06): 主体(+定从)+动作+客体(+定从) u As is shown in the two photos, one man has written “Beckham” on his face and the other is spending RMB 300 to have Beckhams hair style. How mad their behaviors are! 范文(06): 地点+动作+主体（+定从） u The two pictures illustrate vividly the popularity of the famous British soccer star David Beckham. In the left picture a man painted Beckhams name on his face to show his support for Beckham, while in the right another is willing to spend three hundred yuan to have a hairstyle that is exactly the same as Beckhams. 范文(06): “段首套话+there be” u （06）As is vividly depicted in the photos above, there is a Chinese young man writing BECKHAMthe name of a very famous and popular British soccer staron his face and going to the hair studio to have a hairstyle that is exactly the same as his idols, even willing to spend three hundred Yuan, with a shining smile hanging on his face full of content and satisfaction, as if he proved to be Beckham himself. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. Simply designed as the pictures are, the symbolic meaning they convey are rather deep and profound.范文(05)：养老“足球赛”地点+动作+主体（+定从） In the center of the picture lies a pitiful old man who looks like a football with a sad expression on his face. His three sons and a daughter stand in four corners and refuse to accept their old father.范文 (05): 段首套话+there beu (05)As is vividly depicted in the impressive and satirical cartoon, there are four cruel children playing a fierce, immoral and irresponsible “football match” of taking care of their aged father. Each of them stands in a different corner of a football field, with the eldest son kicking out the father and the other three guarding their own goals, while the old man himself becomes the ball, being kicked around, as if he proved to be deserted as a heavy burden. It is clearly indicated that none of the children is willing to spare a tiny portion of time and money to repay their old father who have raised them. There is no doubt that this cartoons symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.u (05): The cartoon displays a very special and thought-provoking soccer game: the four goals are kept by an old mans three sons and one daughter, while the old man himself becomes the ball, being kicked among the four corners by his “beloved” children. It is clearly indicated that none of them is willing to spare a tiny portion of time and money to repay their old father who have raised them.范文(04) : 高分版u The picture presents a young runner who just finishes a long run and arrives at the finish line, sweating and smiling. While he stand at the end, a sign stating “beginning” lies not far away from his position, indicating that “an end means a new beginning”. 范文(04) : 段首套话+there beu (04)One cannot help but be moved by the drawing. There is an exhausted young runner dashing to the finishing line along the racetrack, sweating all over, with a shining and confident smile hanging on his face, as if he was embracing the hope of his achievement and his victory. The caption under the cartoon indicates that every finishing line has to be considered as a new start. By carefully examining this picture, we find a deeper social message is transmitted to us.范文(03)：温室花朵经不起风雨 地点+动作+主体（+定从）u In the center of the greenhouse (picture above) stands a tender/ delicate/lovely flower which grows vigorously/well under the protection of greenhouse. When it is moved out, it can not withstand bad weather and its leaves fall on the ground.u 03年真题(官方版)As the title indicates, “greenhouse flowers cannot survive unpleasant weather”, the set of pictures apparently reminds us that excessive protection only leads to negative results. In the greenhouse a flower blossoms despite of the external rain and thunder, but it withers immediately once being