河北省高邑县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（3）.doc

河北高邑县2016高考英语二轮书面表达选编（3）（2014湖北卷）第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。small things make a big difference. the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，要求我们就：我们做的微小的事情都可以对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。仍然属于议论文，可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。当然也可以写成记叙文，叙述一件小事让我们懂得要关注细节。要点：1.叙述生活中发生的一件小事；以及这件小事对我们产生的影响。2.说明任何一件小事都会对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要重视这样的小事。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【一句多译】我在去书店的路上，在十字路口等待的时候，一个十岁左右的女孩还被一辆开得很快的汽车撞倒。 i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly.i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, driving off quickly.【参考范文】it isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society. i can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy sunday afternoon. i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. a man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and i joined in without hesitation. luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. compared with the escaped driver, i am proud of what i did.as a member of the society, i am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.2016书面表达训练假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生tom登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言和文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给tom发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1. 你怎样得知tom的愿望；2. 你愿意成为他的朋友；3. 你打算如何帮助他；4. 你盼望他的回复。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 电子邮件的格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。deartom,ive learned _ _yours sincerely,li hua【参考范文】dear tom,ive learned it from the internet that you want to make a chinese friend so as to learn the chinese language and culture. im glad that you show such great interest in china and i would like to be your friend. ill try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the chinese culture. when you have an opportunity to come to china, ill teach you how to speak chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. anyway, im going to help you as much as i can. how do you think? im looking forward to your reply. yours sincerely, li hua【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。halloween is very popular in western countries.on october 31st，dozens of children dressed in costumes(节日服装) knock on their neighbors doors and yell “trick or treat” when the door opens.pirates and princesses，ghosts and popular heroes of the day all hold bags open to catch the candy or other goodies that the neighbors drop in.as they give each child a treat the neighbors exclaim over the costumes and try to guess who is under the masks.today school dances and neighborhood parties called “block parties” are popular among the young and the old.more and more adults celebrate halloween.they dress up like historical or political figures and go to masquerade parties(化装舞会)in larger cities，costumed children and their parents gather at shopping malls early in the evening.stores and businesses give parties with games and treats for the children.teenagers enjoy costume dances at their schools and the more outrageous the costume，the better! certain pranks(恶作剧) such as soaping car windows and tipping over garbage cans are expected.but partying and pranks are not the only things that halloweeners enjoy doing.some collect money to buy food and medicine for needy children around the world.写作内容1以约30词概括短文的要点。2以约120词就“中西节日的不同”为主题写一篇短文，并包含以下内容要点：(1)你还知道哪些西方节日？你印象中的西方节日有哪些特点？(2)请具体讲述一个你熟悉的中国传统节日；(3)你更喜欢中国传统节日，还是西方节日？为什么？写作要求你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_读写任务【参考范文】on october 31st，people in western countries dress themselves in costumes to celebrate halloween.school dances and neighbourhood parties are popular on that day.pranks are played for fun.many western festivals are very popular all over the world，such as christmas，thanksgiving day，april fools day and so on.personally，i think the western festivals are romantic and exciting.colourful decorations are filled with all streets.people will gather together and hold parties.they have a good time singing and dancing during the parties.traditional chinese festivals are popular too.the midautumn festival is my favourite.it falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.on this day，the moon is said to be its biggest and brightest so people meet in the evening and watch the moon.this festival is important because it is a special occasion for family.the traditional food，mooncakes，are made with bean paste，but nowadays there are many different kinds of mooncakes，including fruit，coffee and even icecream mooncakes.in my opinion，i prefer the traditional chinese festivals to western festivals.china has a long history and its festivals are full of cultural meanings.chinese people enjoy food，the traditional activities of the festivals as well as the love of their motherland.2016书面表达训练假设你是李华，你的美国笔友david最近在学汉语,他给你发来一封电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语兴趣浓厚，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；2. 给david提出一些学好汉语的建议(至少两条)；3. 邀请他来中国玩。 注意： 1.词数 120左右；开头已经给出，不计入总次数。 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 deardavid,im glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning chinese. _yours，li hua【参考范文】test 13deardavid, im glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning chinese. it is well known that chinese is difficult to learn. one cant avoid making a mistake when learning a foreign language. here are some tips on how to learn chinese. first, dont be afraid to make mistakes. making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right. second, if you know a chinese friend, ask he or she to practise with you.third, you should spend more time practising listening to and speaking chinese frequently. i wish you success in learning chinese. i am expecting to hear from you. atlast, iwelcomeyoutocometochina. yours， lihua【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡。请根据以下提示，阐述电子贺卡的优越性。写作内容1可播放动画和声音；2传递速度快，节省钱；3形式多样，可从网站下载，可自行设计；4有利于环境保护。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信