陕西省延长县高考英语二轮复习 作文品析（4）.doc

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（4）【2016高考训练题】书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华。为了加强大家的消防安全童识，你校邀请消防员在学校大厅举行了 安全知识讲座。请给美国朋友彼得写一封信，简述活动情况以及你的感受。要点如下：1.活动时间：上周三下午3点；2.讲座内容（典型火灾案例，如何火灾自救，提问互动等）；3.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。dear peter,im writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school._作文参考范文dear peter,im writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school. in order to arouse our safety awareness, our school invited a fireman to give us a lecture on fire safety. it was held at our lecture hall at 3 p.m. last wednesday. first of all, some videos about fire accidents were shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. then, the fireman told us how to react in case a fire should occur. finally, a q&a session was arranged to answer the related questions and help us get a better understanding of fire safety. thanks to the lecture, ive learned how fast a fire can grow and what little time we may have to react. so destructive is a fire that each of us should be cautious in our daily life to prevent it from happening. （127 words） yours,友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你以“friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括：1朋友的真谛；2.择友的标准；3.怎样对待朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。good morning, ladies and gentlemen，friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy._ _thank you!【参考范文】good morning, ladies and gentlemen，friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy. real friends are those who can share all our sorrows and double our joys. no man can make most of his life without the help of his true friends. true friends cherish your ideals and feelings; they will not desert you when you are in hot water; they will not take advantage of you when you are in favorable conditions; and they will offer you their sincere advice when you are lost. we should choose those as our friends who have good characters, great ability and a kind heart. we should treat our friends politely, forgive their mistakes and try to help them as much as possible. if so, well be able to keep the sacred friendship burning all our life.thank you!2016书面表达训练学生会将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(innovation on campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请根据以下内容，用英语写一份书面通知。【参考范文】notice .in order to enrich your life after school and provide you with a chance to show your talents, we have decided to hold an exciting event “innovations on campus”. note that your works must be school things and created by yourselves. along with your wonderful works, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. all the collections will be on show from may 3 to 9 in the gym, the top 10 of which will be awarded. so dont miss the chance and for any questions, call li hua at 88235791.come on, everybody! its your show time.书面表达近日网上就“女孩挥拳打母”事件展开讨论，请你根据以下图片所展示的内容，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.阐述自己的观点；2词数120左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。recently there has been a heated discussion online._ _one possible version：recently there has been a heated discussion online. so concerned are lots of people about the discussion on whether the girl should hit her mother.as the picture shows, 9,923 people support the girl. they think its because of the high pressure from her mother. theyre even wondering why her mother called her back to chongqing when she had a job in shanghai. she should have her own life.but 14,219 people are against her, who hold an opinion that she is lacking in morality. they are angry that she doesnt know how to respect the old. even though she didnt agree with her mother, she could make efforts to persuade her mother.in my opinion, i dont appreciate what the girl did. she can solve this problem in many ways. above all, hitting her mother is completely wrong.【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）假设你的名字叫李华，你从你的朋友王涛那里借了一本书，可是不小心让你家的宠物狗撕坏了几页，请你就此事给王涛写一封信，信的内容如下：1. 告诉他发生的事情并向他表示歉意；2. 你买了一本同样的书，想赔偿给他，希望他不要生气；3. 希望还可以继续从他那里借书。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语和结尾语已为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。dear wang tao,_ yours sincerely, li hua【参考范文】作文(满分25分)dear wang tao, im writing to tell you what has happened to the book i borrowed from you yesterday. when i got home after school, i put the book on the sofa and began to do my homework. unfortunately, when i was going to read it, i found my pet dog had torn several pages. im so sorry for this. when my father learnt it, we went to the bookstore and bought a new one for you. i hope