广东省深圳市高考英语二轮复习 基础写作 高效解题密招 经历感受课件.ppt

经历感受 晨读背诵 相关短语 1 organizeanactivity组织活动2 meet gatherattheschoolgate在校门口集合3 singthenationalsong唱国歌4 takepartinthespeechcontest参加演讲比赛5 surftheinternet上网搜索 6 haveachatwithsb 和某人聊天7 haveadiscussion进行讨论8 putonwonderfulperformances表演精彩节目9 once in a life time难得的10 startafive daytour开始为期五天的旅行 11 can twaittodo迫不及待地做12 anunforgettabletrip一次难忘的旅行13 beimpressedby对 印象深刻14 setagoodexampletous为我们树立好榜样15 winthefirstprize获得一等奖 16 takegreatpainstodosth 不遗余力地做某事17 behighlythoughtof受到高度赞扬18 haveasenseofduty responsibility有责任感19 begratefultosb 向某人致谢20 expressone sgratitudetosb 表达对某人的感激 1 我们正在上语文课 老师突然滑倒了 lastmonday wewerehavingourchineseclasswhentheteachersuddenlyslippedandfell 2 我们正要出发 这时天下起雨来了 wewereabouttosetoffwhenitbegantorain 相关句式 3 我刚刚躺下 这时电话铃响了 ihadjustlaindownwhenthetelephonerang 4 他一演讲完观众就欢呼起来 nosoonerhadhefinishedhisspeechthantheaudiencestartedcheering 同义句式 hardly when assoonas 5 一到达 我们就开始工作 uponarrival webegantoworkimmediately 6 一听到铃声 学生都尽快跑进教室 onhearingthebell studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycould 7 我让他进来后不久 他就伏在桌上哭了起来 shortlyafterilethimcomein hecriedonhisdesk 8 在那之后 我们举行了聚会 有的人唱歌 有的人跳舞或轮流讲故事 afterthat wehadaparty someofussang othersdancedortoldstoriesinturn 9 从这次经历中 我意识到 我们可以从帮助别人中得到幸福 fromtheexperienceirealizethatwecangainhappinessfromhelpingothers 10 我觉得这次活动很有意义 我学会了与人沟通 ifindtheactivitymeaningful forihavelearnthowtocommunicatewithothers 技巧点拨 1 记叙事件经过一般按照事件发展的顺序来写 2 表示先后顺序的词有atfirst atthebeginning of then later next afterwards soonafterthat finally before during after thenextday onthethirdday onthelastdayof等 3 若试题要求考生写自己的感受 考生不能只是用iamveryhappy等简单句 而是尽量用复合句来充分表达自己的观点 另外 记叙文多涉及情感相关的单词 考生平时可以多积累这样的单词或短语 如anunforgettableexperience tomyjoy delight besatisfied contentwith等 时间 2012年12月1日星期六8 30启程集合地点 校门口车程 一个半小时自行车车程目的地 红十字会医院活动内容 亲切交谈 牵手跳舞 赠送礼物 拍照留念 共进午餐后返回感受 典型例题 假设你参加了你校在世界艾滋病日 theworldaidsday 组织的 关爱生命携手 艾滋 儿童 的活动 写作内容 请你写一篇英文日记 叙述活动情况 内容包括 december1st2012saturdayfinetodayistheworldaidsday soourschoolorganizedanactivitycalled takecareofourlives handinhandwithaidschildren at8 30a m wevolunteersgatheredattheschoolgateandstartedourbiketrip whichtookusaboutonehourandahalf soonafterwegottotheredcrosshospital wheremostaidschildrenarestaying webegantohaveclosechatswiththemtoseehowtheirlifeisgoing andthenwedancedhappilytogether havinggottoknowthemsowell wepresentedourgifts tooklotsofphotosandatelunchtogetherbeforewecameback ifeelverygladtoseetheaidschildrensohappywhentheyarenotignoredandtakengoodcareof 课堂练习 onmayday myclassmatesandiattendedathree dayvisitorganizedbytheinternationaltravelagency nosoonerhadiarrivedinbeijingbytrainthanwetookthebustothetian anmensquare wherewewatchedthesoldiersraisethenationalflag thenextday whenvisitingthegreatwall wewereattractedbyitsgreatnessandadmiredthewondercreatedbytheancientpeople onthelastday wepaidavisittoourdreaminguniversities beijinguniversityandtsinghuauniversity whichimpressedusbytheirbeautifulcampusandfancyarchitecture sounforgettableistheexperiencethatithinkitwellworthasecondvisit 课外作业 onoctober15th allthe45membersofthestudents uniontookpartinthevolunteerworkforthesportsmeetingontheschoolplayground iworkedfrom7to12inthemorningandfrom2tohalfpastsixintheafternoon ieditedthearticlesofeachclassandbroadcastthemtocheertheathletes what smore ibroadcasttheresultsandannouncedtheawardlist althoughiwasexhaustedandhadasorethroat iwaspraisedanditwasw