江苏省邳州市高一英语 高考英语书面表达课件课件 牛津版.ppt

高考英语书面表达指导课件 1generalstructure 3advancedexpressions 2linkingwords elementsofapassage 一 文章总体模板 1 文章开头的总体交待 起 引出主题 a recently wehadadiscussionabout b wecarriedoutasurveyof c whenitcomestothetopicwhether 2 呈现不同观点的句式 转承 陈述观点 a someofthemareinfavoroftheideathat however othersholdacompletelyoppositeopinion b somepeoplefirmlybelievethat othersarguethat 呈现论据时常用的连接词 inthefirstplace 原因一 furthermore inthesecondplace 原因二 soitgoeswithoutsayingthat 观点一 somepeopleholdtheideathat 观点二 intheirpointofview ontheonehand 原因一 ontheotherhand 原因二 therefore thereisnodoubtthat 观点二 3 结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语 结 总结观点 asfarasi mconcerned frommypointofview tosumup 方法一 使用多种句子结构 ifsheiscomparedwithotherteachers wefindshepaysmoreattentiontoherwayofteaching 状语 comparedwithotherteachers shepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching 2youshouldkeepsilentatthemeetingunlessyouareinvitedtospeak 连词 分词 unlessinvited youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting 3hedidn trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome 倒装 强调 notuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness itwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness 二 高分作文技巧 4wecanachieveasatisfyinggradebychangingthewaywestudy only倒装 5howshouldweprotecteyesight itstillremainsaquestionamongus 主语从句 6weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesight can t toomuch onlybychangingthewaywestudycanweachieveasatisfyinggrade howtoprotectoureyesightstillremainsaquestionamongus wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesighttoomuch 方法二 善用高级词汇 whichisbetter 1周末我们会有很多作业要做 awehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend bwehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend 2在我所有的老师里 毛老师给我留下了很深的印象 aofallmyteachers istillremembermrmoore bofallmyteachers mrmooregavemethedeepestimpression 3高级培训班结束后回到家 他的妻子感到精疲力尽 a hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass feelingverytired b hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass feelingveryexhausted 4 他没听我课上讲的东西 aheturnedadeafeartowhatisaidintheclass bhedidn tlistentowhatisaidintheclass topic howtolengthenyourcomposition whenitcomestotheissueof themajorityofpeopleseemtogetaccustomedtotheideathat however attitudestowards varyfrompersontoperson somepeoplefirmlybelievethat therearesomefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows inthefirstplace inthesecondplace ontopofthat asamatteroffact itisnotoftenthecase othershaveapreferenceof thereareseveralremarkablereasons foronething foranother onmypart 1 利用模板 方法 添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件 目的等内容 2 附加成分作解释说明 例一 这样更方便照顾父母 拓展 因为父母越来越年迈 原因 astheyaregettingolderandolder owingto because 例二 因广告过多 影片放映晚点 拓展 这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火 后果 whichmadeaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed makingaudienceimpatientandsomeofthemevenannoyed itwillbemuchmoreconvenienttolookafteryourparents thereweretoomanyadvertisementsthattheydelayedthetimeofshowingthefilm 方法 添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件 目的等内容 2 附加成分作解释说明 条件 目的 例三 安全出口 exit 标志不明 存在安全隐患 potentialhazard 拓展 万一遇到危险 观众难以逃脱 incaseofdanger itisdifficultfortheaudiencetoescape 例四 对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查 wedidasurveyabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday 拓展 为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式 inordertolearnabouthowourhighschoolstudentscommunicatewitheachotherduringtheholiday wedidasurveywiththehelpofmyclassmates theexitisnotclear sotherewillbepotentialhazard 方法 添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件 目的等内容 2 附加成分作解释说明 1 表达不同原因的概括语thereareseveralreasonsforthis thereasonsareasfollows thereasonfor isthat thereasonwhy isthat 2 表示无需说明的事实的概括语 itgoeswithoutsayingthat it sneedlesstosaythat needlesstosay it sobviousthat 3 加谚语 proverb 锻炼对学生有好处 itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise asthesayinggoes allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise 3 添加谚语 加谚语 proverb 集中注意力于学习 weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies asthesayinggoes nopains nogains weshouldfocusourmindonourstudies 怎么添加谚语 方法 添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件 目的等内容 常用谚语 proverb striketheironwhileitishot 趁热打铁 thinktwicebeforeyoudo 三思而后行 practicemakesperfect 熟能生巧 abirdinthehandisworththantwointhebush 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林 doastheromansdo 入乡随俗 doitnow 机不可失 时不再来 failureisthemotherofsuccess 失败是成功之母 itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk 覆水难收 anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway 一天一个苹果 医生远离我 allroadsleadtorome 条条大路通罗马 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球 weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth forexample wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags refusetousesingle useproducts plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy 4 举例说明 人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害 举例说明 manypopulatedareassufferfrommanynaturaldisasterssuchasflood hurricanes droughtsorotherdisasters 珍惜每一滴水 therefore weshouldnolongerbeindifferentaboutthis toprotectourvaluablewaterresources weshouldcallonpeopletocherisheverydropofwater otherwise maybethelastdropsofwaterwillbeourtears asmiddleschoolstudents wealsohaveaparttoplay doremember wearenotsavingwater wearesavingourownlife witheveryonedoinghisbit wecanmakeadifference 5 结尾提出倡议或号召 asstudents weshouldstartfromourselves herei dliketoremindmyfriendtotaketheleadinprotectingtheenvironment witheveryonedoinghisbit wecanchangethepresentsituation 参加俱乐部或活动 don thesitate itwillbegreatfun don twait joinusnow sinceithassomanybenefits whatareyouwaitingfor starttojoinusnow 保护环境 短话长说 方法 1 利用模板 2 附加成分作解释说明 3 加谚语 proverb 4 举例说明 5 结尾提出倡议或号召 写作任务现在 青少年肥胖越来越严重 很让父母担心 请你根据以下提示写一篇文章参考词汇 肥胖 obesity垃圾食品 junkfood要求 1 字数150左右2 对所有要点要适当发挥 不要简单翻译 3 开头已给出 不计入总数recently thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned 要点分析 如何起 转 承 结 onmypart 利用模板 whenitcomestothephenomenonofteenobesity ourparentsareingreatconcern whyaresomanykidsgettingfatterandfatter someare othersare becauseofthepopularityoftvandcomputers andbecausestudentshavesomuchhomeworktodo theyaregettinglessexercisethanbefore 1 缺少运动 becauseofthepopularityoftvandcomputers andstudentsareburdenedwithsomuchhomework becausepeople squalityoflifehasgottenbetterandbetter familiescanaffordtobuymanyfoods suchasmeat chocolateandothersweetoroilysnacks whichmightmakethekidsoverweight 2 饮食结构不合理 inordertoloseweightandstayhealthy teensshouldavoidspendingtoomuchtimeinfrontofthetvorthecomputeranddomoreexercise 建议1 多参加体育锻炼 asthesayinggoes anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway theyshouldalsoeatamorebalanceddietsuchasfruitsandvegetables andlessfastfoodandjunkfood 2 多吃健康食品 远离垃圾食品 lastbutnotleast theyshouldmakeapropertimeschedulesothattheycanbalanceourexerciseandstudies 3 制定合理的计划 时间表 合成文章 recently thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned whyareteensgettingfatterandfatter inmyopinion therearetworemarkablereasonsforthisproblem fir