My Bedroom写作课.doc

精品文档Learning paper一Pre-reading.1. Review the things in the bedroom. Whats in Miss Hans bedroom?_ _ _ _ _ 2. List other things in the bedroom. _ _ _ _ _ 二Reading. MY BEDROOM I love my bedroom. Its nice. My sister and study here. My desk is next to the door. There are many books on it. A light is above the desk. My sisters desk is in front of my desk. A computer is on her desk. Sometimes she plays computer games. There is a nice rug on my bedroom floor. My dog usually sleeps under my chair. This is my nice bedroom.三After-reading.1. Answer these questions after reading the passage1). How is my room? _ 2). Are there many books on the desk?_3). Where is my sisters desk?_2. Find out the prep phrases in the passage.(找出文中的介词短语)_3. Make sentences according to the pictures. (每幅图用两种句型。) 1） The desk is next to the door.There is a desk next to the door.2) _ _3)_4) There _ a chair on the floor. There _ some books on the floor. 四Writing.How to write a good composition?如何写好作文？一润色你的语言1. 加上颜色的形容词和描述的形容词。 beautiful , colorful, wonderful ,interesting .Eg. A kite is on the wall.润色： A green and yellow kite is on the wall. Its so beautiful.2.The beginning（1）设问法Whats the warmest place in the world? I think its my bedroom. Now let me introduce it.世界上最温暖的地方是什么？我认为是我的卧室。现在让我来介绍给你。（2）比喻My bedroom is like a candy box. It gives me sweet dreams. Now let me introduce it .我的卧室像一个糖果盒子，它给了我甜美的梦。现在让我来介绍它。2.The body 主体段（1）. 融入优美的高级句式。（兴趣类万能句式）not only. but alsoThere are many books on the desk. I like reading. Because reading can not only open our eyes but also enrich our knowledge.我喜欢读书，因为读书不仅能开阔视野而且能丰富知识。 这个句式可以适用于很多活动的好处，背下来，应用到你的作文中。Watching TV / Playing soccer / Joining the club can not only open our eyes but also enrich our knowledge.(2) 名言法There are many books on the desk. I like reading, because “Reading makes a full man.”我喜欢读书，因为“读书使人充实。”There are many books on the desk. I like reading , because “ Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.”我喜欢读书，因为“读万卷书行万里路。”3. The ending. 结尾段名言式“Home is the warmest place in the world.”I love my bedroom.家是世界上最温暖的地方，我爱我的卧室。排比式My bedroom makes me warm every night. My bedroom gives me lots of sunshine. My bedroom gives me a colorful world.我的我卧室每个夜晚使我温暖；我的卧室给我无限的阳光； 我的卧室给了我一个五彩缤纷的世界。Write a passage t