高考英语题型步步衔接 专题01 书面表达.doc

1 书面表达【母题来源】【2015四川卷高考书面表达】【母题原题】假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarm_【参考答案】hi sharon, this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin. i am quite interested in it . i think im fit for it. as a student, i have been learning mandarin for many years. in addition ,i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. so im quite confident that i can help you learn mandarin. learning mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing mandarin everyday. as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. besides, you can also read some books in chinese、see some chinese films and listen to some chinese radio programmes. speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress. in your post, you say you can teach english as a reward. it is just what i want. im eager to improve my english. so, if you allow me to help you learn mandarin, you can also help me improve my english. we can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in english and half an hour in chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. hope for you early reply! yours sincerely li xia【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：it is just what i want.等。还使用了大量短语等。1.【2015预测题】 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友david最近在学汉语,他给你发来一封电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语兴趣浓厚，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括： 1. 收到来信时的心情； 2. 鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；3. 给david提出一些学好汉语的建议(至少两条)；4. 邀请他来中国玩。 注意： 1.词数 120左右； 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 deardavid,_yours， li hua 【命题方向】高考书面表达以应用文写作为主，特别是信件、电子邮件的写作。应用文题材的多样性和特殊性决定了其语言表达更贴近生活，更能反映学生在真实情境中对语言的运用水平。我们可以预计该类型文章仍将是2015年书面表达的命题趋势。所以，同学们在备战2015年高考时应该熟悉相关文体的写作特点，努力提高自己的英语写作水平和表达技巧。【参考范文】 deardavid,im glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning chinese. it is well known that chinese is difficult to learn. one cant avoid making a mistake when learning a foreign language. here are some tips on how to learn chinese. first, dont be afraid to make mistakes. making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right. second, if you know a chinese friend, ask he or she to practise with you.third, you should spend more time practising listening to and speaking chinese frequently. i wish you success in learning chinese. i am expecting to hear from you. atlast, iwelcomeyoutocometochina. yours， li hua 2.【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】 最近，你校的校园网将开辟一个英语学习交流博客（blog）。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个博客，并欢迎同学们积极参与。1.时间：2015年6月1日开通；2.目的：促进交流，提高英语水平；3.内容：交流经验，提出问题，参与每周讨论等；注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 请勿提及学校真实名称； 3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear fellow students, good news for you! _thats all. thank you.【答案】dear fellow students,good news for you! a blog will be opened on the website of our school on june 1, 2015. it aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our english level. the blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things. first of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our english study. secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. and possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of enthusiastic schoolmates. in addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion. i am sure the blog will be of great benefit to our english study. and every one of us is encouraged to visit it. thats all. thank you!【亮点说明】serves as、 promote 、with the help of、take part in、be of great benefit 等词或词组使文章更生动；first of all、secondly、and possibly、in addition等关联词的使用使文章条理清晰；第二段开头the blog serves as an open platform where we can do a lot of things.此处为定语从句，来修饰先行词an open platform；接着用了一个if引导的条件状语从句；you will find proper solutions to them with the help