高三英语对比类作文课件.ppt

howtowriteacompositionaboutdifferentopinions 观点对比类作文 考试大纲 要求 1 准确使用语法和词汇 2 使用一定的句型 词汇 清楚 连贯地表达自己的意思 教学目标 通过本课学习 使学生能够通过自主探究 发现观点对比类作文的写作方法规律 并能够做到拓展运用 doyouliketosurfthenetonweekends 周末 why pleasetelltheadvantagesanddisadvantagesaboutthenet advantages disadvantages 高考直击 05年浙江卷 书面表达 满分30分 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影 有人选择看电影 有人则喜欢读原著 请你以 filmorbook whichdoyouprefer 为题 按照下列要点写一篇英语短文 1 看电影 省时 有趣 易懂2 读原著 细节更多 语言优美3 我的看法及理由注意 1 词数 100 120文章题目和开头已给出 不计入词数 2 参考词汇 originalwork或bookintheoriginal 原著 抄阅读文章中的句子 不知所云 得分为0分 语言素质欠缺 基本功差 语句毛病多 大小写 标点符号 书写不清等等 得6分 卷面不整洁 涂改较多 语言错误多 层次不清 得11分 语言不地道 中文式思维 词汇错误 卷面有涂改 得20分 语言表达流畅 层次分明 连接不够 得27分 有少许语言错误 有背的嫌疑 得27分 filmorbook whichdoyouprefer someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory besides thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow however someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion 相反的观点 theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformation 详细的信息 fromtheoriginal meanwhile thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful personally iagreewiththesecondview actuallyihavemorereasonsforit ithinkicanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown andwhat smore i mabletobetterunderstandtheauthor s writer s ideas inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit filmorbook whichdoyouprefer someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful iagreewiththesecondview actuallyihavemorereasonsforit ithinkicanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown and i mabletobetterunderstandthewriter sideas toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit besides however meanwhile personally what smore inaword 作文中尽可能使用恰当的连接词 顺序关系 firstly secondly thirdly lastly finally对称关系 foronething foranother ontheonehand ontheotherhand转折关系 but however onthecontrary递进关系 what smore besides inaddition what sworse tomakemattersworse总结 inshort tosumup inaword onthewhole group work tofindoutthesimilarities 相同点 inthetwocompositions howtobegin 开头 hadadiscussion howtointroducethesupporting 正方 opinion arefor besides howtointroducetheopposite 反方 opinion areagainst howtoend 结尾 inmyopinion howtobegin 开头 1 wehadadiscussion surveyaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto 2 opinionsaredividedonthisissue 3 differentpeople however havedifferentopinionsonthismatter 4 differentpeople however thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter 介绍正方 supportingopinion 观点 1 ontheonehand somestudentsarefortheidea 2 somestudentsthinkitnecessaryto 3 theyareoftheopinionthat 4 what smore besides inaddition furthermore what sworse usefulwords haveadvantages benefitfrom dogoodtobeofhelp use importance behelpful useful important good 介绍反方 opposite 观点 1 ontheotherhand somestudentsareagainst 2 however somethinkitnotnecessaryto 3 othersholdtheviewthat 4 what smore besides inaddition furthermore what sworse usefulwords havedisadvantagesbeharmfulto doharmtobeuseless bad 作文模板 观点对比类 have arehavingadiscussionaboutwhether opinionsaredividedonthisissue ofthestudentsthink should what smore ontheotherhand ofthestudentsthink shouldnot what sworse inmyopinion weshould for 目标回扣 应对高考 会考书面表达建议 1平时多接触和尝试各种题材和话题 尤其是一些热点话题2高考 会考前多背一些优秀的范文 3多积累和掌握一些书面表达