广东高考英语读写任务任务型写作记叙文专题.ppt

narration 高考专项复习 task basedwriting pattern 2 4 contents texttwo 4 homework 该题型在高考中的得分情况 该题总分值为25分 其中概要部分5分 正文部分20分 2007年高考的任务型写作 即读写任务 要求考生在阅读完父亲的信后给父亲回信 全省平均分是8 98分 2008年高考的读写任务要求考生写一篇演讲稿 全省平均分是11 32分 均属于记叙文体 introduction 8 98分 11 32分 25分 叙事类文章的写作模板 1 summary 概要 2 body 正文 1 atransitionalsentence 过渡句引出例子 2 anexampleandsoon 举一个相同主题的例子 再按题目要求谈感受或发表看法等 3 ending 结尾点题 itwasduskandasiwalkedalonethroughthemountainsofgreece icameacrosssixlargewolvesthatwerefeedingonthebodyofadeadanimal ihadheardmanystoriesaboutwolvesasachildanditwasthisanimalthatifearedmorethananyother asiapproached thewolvesleftthebodyandstartedwalkingtowardsme oneafteranother theystoppedabout20metresfrommeandstared theanimalslookedbothbeautifulandterrifying asidrewnearer theleadwolfraiseditsheadandletoutaloudhowl theawfulcryrangoutacrossthesilentvalley amorefrighteningsoundihadneverheard iwasalmostcertainitsignalleddeath text1 见资料中的第一篇文章 everymomentiexpectedtoseethepackdashatme iknewmyonlyhopewastoshowmycourage 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helpcatchathiefonabusovercomeyourshynessandsuccessfullygiveaspeechinpublicadmitandcorrectyourmistaketellthetruthinthefaceofdanger 2 groupdiscussion howtoselectanimpressiveexample lifeisfullofobstacles weneedtoovercomethedifficultieswithcourageandmoveon inversionlifeisajourney alongwhichtherearemanyobstacles onlywithcourage canweovercomethedifficultiesandmoveon 3 practice howtoendyourcompositioninaneffectiveway tosumup withcourage wecanovercomethedifficultiesinlife doublenegativetosumup inconclusion inbrief inaword allinall withoutcourage noonecanovercomethedifficultiesinlife parallelismcourageisthepowertoovercomefearanddanger courageisthestrengthtoresistoppositionandhardship courageistheweapontofightagainstmisfortuneandinjustice sowhenfacedwithdangerordifficulties summonupyourcourageandfightagainstit text2 见材料的第二篇文章07高考真题 09样题 第二节读写任务 共l小题 满分25分 dearari asyousleepinmyarms i mamazedathowlightyoufeel istareatyourtinybody sofragilethatasuddenwindcouldliftyouupintotheair ilovethisfeelingofprotectingyouanddreamingofallihaveinstoreforyou iintendtobringyouuptobebraveandsuccessfulinanoftendifficultsociety that swhyyourmommyandihavenamedyouari whichmeans lion it sourhopethatyouwillgrowstrongandeagerlygraspeveryopportunitytodowellforyourselfandothers beforeyoucameintotheworld wehad spentmonthsimaginingwhatyou dbelike wouldyoubeaboyoragirl wouldyoulooklikemommy daddyoryourelderbrothers anyway wewouldfindoutsoon finallyyourmother slaborcame andseveralhourslater wemetthefirsttime iheldyouhighupintheair ithenwasabletocutyourumbilicalcord 脐带 andputyouinyourmother sarms shestillhadenoughenergytoradiatethelovewhileshepressedyoutoherface andherewearetonight asiholdyouclose yousleepsopeacefully ipressmyeartoyourchestandhearyourstrength iamlisteningtothefirstbeatsofalion sheart welcometotheworld ari daddy 写作内容 假设你就是信中的ari 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信 今天是父亲50岁生日 你准备以写信的方式 祝贺他的生日 以下是信的内容 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好 1 以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望 2 以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩 并包括如下要点 1 读信后的感受 2 以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受 3 表达你对父亲的感激和祝福 写作要求 1 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 ex1 activity discusswithyourgroupmembersaboutthethreecompositionsanddecidewhichoneis excellent whichis average andwhichis poor 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 考场作文1 23 5 18excellent 考场作文2 6 1 5poor 考场作文3 16 3 13average 1 ifindedthewaytosolveit 2 iknowthatimustwrong 3 whenyoufoundoutwhatihaddone youdidn tangrywithme 4 iveryloveyouandmommy ex2 correctthemistakes 应改为found 应改为mustbewrong 应改为werenot或didn tgetangry 应改为iloveyouandmommyverym