高考英语书面表达对比类写作训练.doc

高考英语书面表达对比类写作训练高考对比类写作一般分为以下两种：一 过去与现在对比文章结构1、点题 （现在完成时）2 正文：过去 一般过去时现在 一般现在时为主3 收尾写作套语1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place 如： Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since自从以来，事情有了好转/改善。如：Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型: (1)used to, but now 过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去，但是现在(3) once, but now 曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了表达对比和变化的经典句子：1 过去父母们主要通过写信彼此联系，但是现在我们可以在家打长途电话。 In the past my parents contacted others mainly by sending letters，but now we call long distance at home.2 过去我们甚至在周末还要上课，写没完没了的作业。现在我不再熬夜，大约10点睡觉。We used to have to attend classes even at weekends and do endless homework as well. I no longer stay up late, on the contrary, I go to bed at 10 pm.3 在过去的20多年里，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。In the past 20 years, great changes have taken place in our life4 我很高兴告诉你自从减负我们 生活的变化。Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has been reduced.5 总之，自从学校减负以来，有了很大的变化。In a word, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.6 总之，过去20多年的变化使我们的生活更舒服方便。In short, changes in our life in the past 20 years have brought us comfort and convenience.（change, improve, become, turn into）例如：请根据下面六幅图的提示和所提供的主题句，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life” 的英文短文。词数 100 左右。（2004年北京市春季高考写作）开头已为你写好：Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example.范文： Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home. And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.二 正反观点对比 （包括说明利弊题型）常用的结构：1引入2有一些人认为 另一些人认为 3我的看法（根据题目要求来）时态：通常用一般现在时A. 表示观点对比类写作套语总起:Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whetherRecently we have made a survey about weatherDifferent people hold different opinions. Opinions are divided. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for/against the idea think 表达不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, each coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .结构示例：Our class has recently held a heated discussion about the “Super Girls” phenomenon. The students show their different opinions about it.62% of the students support it. They think However, 38% of the students are against it. They believe that In my opinion, 文章示例：Failure is the mother of successWe middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure. Some fall in low spirits when they dont do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They found out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes. I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times before they succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly.例如：最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意： 1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee。Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. Whats more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度1 说明事物现状 2 事物本身的优缺点3 你对现状的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(的优点之一). Besides -（的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一个缺点)To make matters worse,-(的第二个缺点) Through the above analys