短文改错（大纲版）

D D 单元单元 短文改错短文改错 目录 D 单元 短文改错 1 D1 短文改错记叙文 1 D2 短文改错应用文 4 D3 短文改错议论文 4 D4 短文改错说明文 4 D1 短文改错记叙文短文改错记叙文 英语卷 解析 2015 届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期期中考试 201410 第一节 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌的作文如下 文中共有 10 处语言错 误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或者修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处 不计分 What s your attitude to April Fool s Day A survey has done in our school and it shows that there are three different opinion About 40 of the students thought it fun to have such a specially day to play jokes on each other Besides it adds many pleasure to our school life At the same time we can take this chance to test that our classmates are clever enough But 30 of us don t like the day because everything that seems in disorder and you don t know whom to believe or how to do Furthermore most jokes are boring and some even go too far but they often cause trouble or anger The rest think people just play jokes don t too serious 答案答案 知识点知识点 D1 短文改错记叙文 答案解析 第一行 has done 之间加 been 此处是被动 第二行 opinion 改为 opinions 不同的观点是复数 第三行 thought 改为 think 根据上下文此处应当用一般现在时态 第四行 specially 改为 special 形容词做定语 第五行 many 改为 much 修饰不可数名词 用 much 不能用 many 第六行 that 改为 whether 或 if 句意是利用这次机会去检测同学们是否足够聪明 第七行 去掉 that 此处不是从句 没必要加 that how 改为 what do 为及物动词 故应当用关系代 词 第八行 but 改为 so 上下句是因果关系 第九行 don t 后加 be be 的祈使句的否定形式 英语卷 解析 2015 届黑龙江省大庆铁人中学高三 10 月月考 201410 第一节 短文改错 共第一节 短文改错 共 1010 小题 小题 每小题每小题 1 1 分 满分分 满分 1010 分 分 见答题卡 见答题卡 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的一下作文 文中共有假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的一下作文 文中共有 1010 处语言处语言 错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误只涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误只涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 划掉 修改 在错的词下面划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 修改 在错的词下面划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 注意 1 1 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 每句中最多有两处错误 每处错误及修改均仅限一词 每句中最多有两处错误 2 2 只允许修改只允许修改 1010 处 多者 从第处 多者 从第 1111 出 不计分 出 不计分 Volunteers Wanted The Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on The students which are healthy patience warm hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it please sent your application to the Students Union before March 15th The office of the Students Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days March 8th The Students Union 答案答案 知识点知识点 D1 短文改错记叙文 答案解析 第一行 will 后加 be 本句是被动 俱乐部应当是背被建 第二行 去掉 for serve 是及物动词 后不用加介词 第三行 others 前面的 to 改为 with cooperate with 与 协作 固定搭配 第五行 guidances 改为 guidance guidance 是不可数名词 不能用复数形式 which 改为 who 定语从句 先行词是人 不能用 which 引导 第六行 patience 改为 patent 用形容词做表语 表示有耐心的 第七行 whether 改为 if 此处是 if 引导的条件状语从句 第八行 sent 改为 send please 后加动词原形 第十行 choosing 改为 chosen 过去分词作定语 表示被选中的候选人 a 改为 an 元音前用 an 英语卷 解析 2015 届山西省太原五中高三 10 月月考 201410 第一节 短文改错 共 10 小题 每 小题 1 分 满分 10 分 假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错 误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 l0 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 I together with my two friends were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant locating in the center of New York I noticed the young woman eating with two kids We stopped by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa The elder boy whom was about seven years old pointed his younger sister and said She does but I don t I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner I paid for theirs either I didn t know that whether the woman was alone but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone I still feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways 答案 知识点 D1 短文改错记叙文 答案解析 I together with my two friends were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant locating in the center of New York was located I noticed the young woman eating with two kids We stopped by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa a they The elder boy whom was bout seven years old pointed his younger sister and said She does but I don t who at I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner I paid for theirs either I didn t know too that whether the woman was alone but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone I still grew feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways in 1 主谓一致 谓语动词与 I 保持一致 2 be located in 位于 作伴随状语 3 初次提到用 a 4 代词代替的是前面的 kids 故用 they 5 考察非限定性定语从句 且在从句中作主语 要用 who 6 固定搭配 pointed at 指着 7 肯定的 也 用 too 否定的用 either 8 know 动词后缺宾语 考察宾语从句 不能出现两个连接词 根据句意用 whether 9 整个句子用一般过去时 要保持时态一致 此处也要用一般过去时 10 in some small ways 在一些小的方面 D2 短文改错应用文短文改错应用文 D3 短文改错议论文短文改错议论文 D4 短文改错说明文短文改错说明文 英语卷解析 2015 届河北省衡水中学高三上学期期中考试 201411 word 版 第一节 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 分 满分 10 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏词符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student who devoted herself to her lessons every day Last Saturday as usual she went to several class In the evening she continued to study at home until deeply into the night She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn t work effectively In Sunday morning she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break Soon they came up a good idea They decided to go cycling in the countryside Mary enjoyed herself competing and chatting with her father and felt relaxing in the open air On the Monday Mary wa