学生版 2013公开课--basic writing.doc

Basic writing- how to improve sentences?Part1 Lead- in1.优秀习作赏析（2014届湛江市调研考试基础写作）：单调难成，群柱可擎天。学会合作，是为人处世的一个重要的方面。请你根据下表中的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Partner”的英文演讲稿。意义与人合作有利于学习、生活和工作；原因合作可以取长补短，节省时间与精力；对象与喜欢的人合作，心情愉快，同甘共苦；与不喜欢的人合作，学会容忍，发现优点；如何你的观点2，基础写作评分标准1. 按照评分标准, 实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准准分别给分；2. 在语言方面, 重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否正确、考生是否使用了合适的句子结构；3. 在内容方面, 重点评判考生是否表达了所提供的全部信息; 如果考生在表达完整的内容时, 适当添加一些内容, 不扣分；Part2 PresentationHow to improve the sentences: 尽量使用高级词汇，短语优先1)The club has twenty members.2)The dog sensed danger and ran away. 3)He said he would help me if necessary.4)When I saw the horse，I began to cheer up.II 简单句的高级形式1. 上海，中国最大城市，被誉为“东方之珠”. Shanghai , the largest city in China, is honored as “the Pearl of the East”.2. 他鼓励我们独立思考, 而不是马上告诉我们答案。 Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves.3. 由于那噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying. 4. 非谓语动词a)爱迪生出生在美国，是一个伟大的科学家及发明家。Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.b)在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。 In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.c)为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。 In order to study well, we need to do sports.III.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句a）他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。 b）我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。 . 用好从句，写出规范的复合句1) 名词性从句如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。 2) 定语从句如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。 3) 状语从句如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。 特殊句式(1)他们很感激他们的搭档，都不知道该做什么了。 ( )So grateful are they to their partners that they dont know what to do.(2) 他在会议上说的话让大家很吃惊。 ( )It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.(3)如果我是领导，我会听市民的。 ( )If I were a leader/Were I a leader，I would listen to citizens.(4)近年来，他的进步很大。 ( )What great progress he has made in recent years!Part3 PracticeGroup workThere are six learning groups in our class. Each group are expected to finish the assigned exercises in given time. Work together to accomplish them as required and then one member of each group should speak out the answers.Exercise A1. Amy Chua, 美籍华人, 耶鲁大学教授。(同位语) (广东) AmyChua, in Yale University.2. 小车已成为受人欢迎的交通方式, 给人们的生活带来了方便。(现在分词短语) (江西) Cars have become a popular means of transport, .3. 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语) (福建) We students should try to get good results .4.植物园位于我们学校的西南角，面积1000平方米。（非谓语） , the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. Exercise B短语替词、展示实力。(1)The boy is _,but he never loses hope.(同义词poor)(2)I have _ to study English better this term.(同义词decided)(3)I _ how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词dont know)(4)We will _ the matter _ (同义词consider)(5) He _ music so much that he devotes much time to it.(同义词likes）Exercise C 用特殊句式完成句子1.直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。 her father recognized her. 2.只有师生齐心协力，我们学校才会更加美好。_ our school become a more enjoyable place.3.黑板上的子是那么小，他几乎看不见。_ _ that he could hardly see them.4.直到河里所有的鱼都死了，这里的农民才意识到污染时多么严重。 how serious the pollution was.Exercise D 用with复合结构完成句子1. 当你进入校园， 你会看到一个大的花台，两边有两栋高大的建筑。 When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, 2. (随着社会的快速发展), its quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer.3.这是一个小而宜人的公园，到处被花和树覆盖着，中间还躺着一个小湖。This is a small nice park with .4. 由于我的耳机坏了， 我不能做听力练习。 , I cant do the listening exercises.Exercise E 用并列句或者复合句完成句子1. Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, （48%的选择运动明星作偶像）.2. About 9 oclock last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrows test （就在这时，我的房里突然传来很大的嘈杂声）. 3. It is said that slightly more than 50% students are short-sighted, _ (这在世界排名第一). 4. (使我印象最深的是他的那句名言). “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. 5.The causes for short-sightedness are so complicated _ (没有一种药可以治愈近视). Exercise F 合并句子成一句话1. Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. It has an area of about 8 square kilometers. 2. Currently China has about 350 million smokers. Among these smokers 75% are men and 25% are women. (定语从句) 3.The Chinese womens football team beat the US team. He heard the news. He was very happy. He couldnt go to sleep. 4Chaplin was a famous director. He directed a number of films. Most of them were silent. They were popular with people of all ages. 5. There is an old tower. The tower lies in the east of the town. There is a river behind the tower. Part4 Lets improve a composition!2008广东高考基础写作 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目;1904：中断; 1928：中断; 1932：重回奥运会；1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛；现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but it was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.Your improved version: Part5 实战演练以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方