2011全国高考英语 短文改错 新课标

短文改错短文改错 一 When the accident was happened I was standing near a bus stop There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella The bus soon arrived at There were too many passengers hurrying to get on it that the old lady couldn t get on A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away Unluckily the old lady s umbrella was caught by the door She shouted to the driver but he didn t hear The bus pulled her along the road Finally she fall to the ground Several minutes late the ambulance came and took her to hospital I think the driver should be responsible for the accident 答案 1 was happened 删除 was 2 waiting for 3 arrived at 删除 at 4 too many so many 5 careful carefully 6 fall fell 7 late later 8 二 Last week we feel sorry to hear that our class teacher was ill Afterwards we had a discussion and decided manage on our own During the followed days all of us did a good job None of us late for school and we did morning exercise better than ever In class we gave a classroom a thoroughly cleaning to welcome her Our monitor presented some flowers to her while she stepped onto the platform Seeing the red flag for Weekly Model Class she was happy but moved 1 feel felt 2 decided decided to 3 followed following 4 late for were late for 5 exercise exercises 6 had won won 7 gave a gave the 8 thoroughly thorough 9 while when 10 but and 三 Li Ming went to the park in last Saturday afternoon after he had already finished his homeworks He saw several boys skating in the pond happily Suddenly he heard a cry for help Looked ahead he found one of the boys had fallen into the water Li Ming jumped into icy water immediately and tried to pull the boy to safety Then the boy was given first aid but soon came to myself The boy s parents came soon after they received the phone call They were very much thankful Li Ming who was trembling there with cold 1 in last last 2 homeworks homework 3 in on 4 looked looking 5 into icy into the icy 6 tried managed 7 but and 8 myself himself 9 much 删除 10 thankful thankful to 四 My secret of staying young is simple Keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over Take interest in the world around you and learn at least the new thing every day Don t think that you are ever too young to go back to school I know a man entered a medical college at 70 He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor Other man went to a law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer You may say that staying young is easy only for that living in the future In fact you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active what is the only way to be always 1 keeping keep 2 interest an interest 3 the new a one new 4 young old 5 entered who entered 6 other another 7 a active an active 8 that those 9 whether if 10 what which 五 One day after school on the way home I happened see a little boy turning off a tap and splashing water here and there on the ground So with hesitation I went over and turned off the water As we all know it water is the source of life Without water we human beings can t live Otherwise they will disappear from the earth Besides there are a very limited water resource in our world So we mustn t take some measures to getting rid of such wasteful habits Everyone must save water so that development of the world and mankind can continue 1 happened happened to 2 turning off turning on 3 with without 4 know it know 5 but and 6 alive living 7 are is 8 mustn t must 9 getting get 10 that development that the development 六 Learning English is great importance English is widely used all over the world It was often used in the international meetings Most business letters are written in English With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from the developed countries We can also introduce our achievement and experiences to other countries Because of their importance English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges Now many people are working hardly at English It s very important to learn English well If we learn English well we can serve for our country better So I suggest most Chinese can learn it well 1 is great is a great 2 was is 3 a help the help 4 from the developed from developed 5 expeeriences experience 6 their its 7 requiring required 8 hardly hard 9 serve for serve 10 can learn should learn 七 Locate in Conghua the Temple which covers and area of 900 square meters are said to be built between 1426 and 1435 After it was first built much big repairs were done in different dynasties seven of them were recorded in words This is first discovery of ancient buildings in our province with exact times To let it survive local villagers and government treasures the grand relic and protect it with great care and repair it when is necessary Because of their great efforts in 2003 when the Temple was given first prize as cultural relic protection from the UN 1 Locate Located 2 are said is said 3 much many 4 them which 5 first the first 6 times time 7 treasures treasure 8 is necessary it is necessary 9 when 删除 10 as for 八 I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings Knowledge is source of pleasure for me I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge I know college education can prepares me better for my future Better education mean more often then not better jobs better opportunities and better choices I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people care for me will be happy with that Unless I can study at a nice university I will make them happy I d like not let them down That s why I must go to college 1 eager am eager 2 many much 3 source a source 4 to knowledge of knowledge 5 prepares prepare 6 mean means 7 our my 8 people care people who care 9 unless if 10 not let not to let 九 Grain which is used to be the main food of most people in China is now playing a more important role On the other hand meat and fish has increased rapidly The changes in diet can be accounted by three main reason First people are much wealthier than before By higher income they can afford to buy good foods Secondly people have realized the importance of balanced diet to their health Lack in certain amount of meat for example will result in poor health Finally because of the economic reform meat chicken fish or milk which were scarce in the past were produced in large quantities now we believe that as far as the effort continues in reform and development there will be greater changes in people s diet in the future 1 which is which 2 more less 3 accounted accounted for 4 reason reasons 5 By With 6 of balanced of a balanced 7 Lack in Lack of 8 or and 9 were are10 as far as as long as 十 My mother is a village woman who is already in fifties She had very little education and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time with my study Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed for several days When I got home I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed made new clothes for me I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes So is my mother a kind and hard working woman 1 in fifties in her fifties 2 and she but she 3 very importance great importance 4 me study me to study 5 with my study on my study 6 bad ill badly ill 7 still off still on 8 made me making me 9 tear tears 10 so is such is 十一 One cold winter day in 1900 a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the street in London He doesn t have breakfast or lunch He wanted to buy some bread and he didn t have any money His father died since he was very young His mother was often very sick so she could take care of Charles or his brother Neither of them had to work to help his mother He was very young but his dream was very big He wanted to be great man in the world of films So he worked very hardly 1 was called 删除 was 2 walked walking 3 doesn t didn t 4 and he but he 5 since when 6 could could not 7 neither both 8 his mother their mother 9 be great be a great 10 hardly hard 十二 Good health is the person s most valuable possession Today it is much easier to be healthy than it was the past Modern people know more than health have better food and live in clean surroundings Also scientists and doctors had learned how to deal with many diseases Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill As a result people in the modern world generally live longer than people is used to People in developed countries can expect to live for twice as long as people who lived a little hundred years ago 1 the person s a person s 2 the past in the past 3 clean cleaner 4 had learned have learned 5 get for get 6 since when 7 in the modern in modern 8 is used to used to 9 live for live 10 little few 十三 I will never forget the story that happens on a bus the other day It was a windy day I got off a bus after school A young lady was standing the next to me Suddenly a strong wind blew inside the windows The lady s false hair has blown away To our surprise he was hairless While she was wondering what to do when many passengers laughed loudly She managed to hold back her tears Saw this I picked up her false hair and said Don t be sadness Miss I m sure your hair will grow again When I glanced the other passengers they all quick bent their heads with shame 1 happens happened 2 got off got on 3 the next next 4 has blown was blown 5 he was she was 6 删除 when 7 saw seeing 8 sadness sad 9 glanced glanced at 10 quick quickly 十四 There are many more theaters in London Some of them offer standby tickets than is that they have any seats leave on the day of the performance they sell it to students at a lower price You need an official students card to get a standby ticket But there is a performance you really want to see it s a good idea to buy seats in advance to sure of getting in You can either phone and go to the box office to see if they have seats for the performance they want to see 1 many more many 2 that they have when they have 3 leave left 4 sell it sell them 5 studens student s 6 but there but if there 7 buy seats book seats 8 to sure to be sure 9 and go to or go to 10 they want to see you want to see 十五 One day a doctor was start his work in the morning Suddenly a man ran in his room His face was red He could only say Quick Quick The doctor thought he be ill His assistant helped to make the poor man sitting in a chair The doctor gave the man some medicine make him sleepy Then he looked into the man s mouth and pulled out all the bad tooths As soon as the man woke up he said in low voice Quick doctor quick it s all right now the doctor told to him it s over you don t understand said the man I came to tell you that your house was in fire 1 start starting 2 in his room into his room 3 he be he must be 4 sitting sit 5 medicine medicine to 6 sleepy sleep 7 tooths teeth 8 in low in a low 9 told to him told him 10 in fire on fire 十六 A number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years According to the data in October 2007 the number of accidents had reached 600 250 in that 98 000 people lost their lives While the number of cars makes up only 2 of the total of the world the rate of the deaths are 22 make China a country with the highest death rate of traffic accidents in the world The main reason why so many traffic accidents have been happened is that the roads are too crowed and people ignore traffic rules So as to reduce the traffic accident the government should take some proper measure such as developing public traffic And people should obey traffic rules specially the drivers Only people have decided to take action will traffic problems be solved 1 a number of the number of 2 in October by October 3 in that 98 000 in which 98 000 4 are 22 is 22 5 make China making China 6 have been happened have happened 7 so as to in order to 8 traffic accident traffic accidents 9 specially especially 10 only people only when people 十七 In the past teachers always kept on to explaining the points in class Our students just listened and take notes But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves After class we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework For example we can read that we are interested in We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information In my opinion exploring study does not help us learn much but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study 1 kept on to kept on 2 our students we students 3 take notes took notes 4 raising raised 5 kind of activities kinds of activities 6 read that read what 7 and surf or surf 8 variously various 9 not help not only help 10 to enjoy enjoy 十八 Dear Peter I m writing to ask for whether you re able to do me a favor I want having a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similarly to mine In my mind she is someone who is interested traveling swimming and play table tennis With so a pen friend I hope I can share with her our experience in hobbies taking care of pets or whichever we have in common And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and I will learn more about my country I am looking forward to hearing of you soon Best regards Wang Lin 1 ask for ask 2 having a pen to have a pen 3 similarly similar 4 interested interested in 5 play table playing table 6 so a pen such a pen 7 whichever whatever 8 would will 9 my country her country 10 hearing of hearing from 十九 Everyone in the world want to succeed In fact an opportunity comes every once in a while On most of occasions it appears without noticed Only when the opportunity has left us do we realize that we have lost one Some people know the importance of opportunities They know an opportunity is factor in achieving success So they are always ready an opportunity when it arrives However other people give in the efforts to seek opportunities and grasp them They are used to wait for opportunities and only the more intelligent and hardworking people seize them 1 want wants 2 most of most 3 noticed being noticed 4 lost one lost it 5 factor a factor 6 ready an opportunity ready for an opportunity 7 give in give up 8 wait for waiting for 9 our doors their doors 10 but only the more and only the more 二十 Walking through the deep snow is hardly work But Canada s native people have discovered snowshoes to make walking in winter much easier which is made of wood and leather Snowshoes can spread their weight over a large area and this allows them to float on top of the soft snow instead sinking Snowshoes were very important to Canada s early settler They made possible for the settlers to get away in the winter Today we had snowmobiles but snowshoes are still very popular Hunters and many of other people use them for winter travel outdoors and bird watching when they have to walking far into the mountains 1 hardly hard 2 discovered invented 3 is made of are made of 4 a large area a larger area 5 instead sinking instead of sinking 6 early settler early settlers 7 made possible made it possible 8 we had we have 9 many of other many other 10 walking walk 二十一 If you look in some public place you will see that most smokers are young people still middle school students It is said that in China the number of people who smoke is about 45 percents of the population Why do such many people smoke Some think that smoking is a pleasure In fact smoking is a bad habit It does great harmful to people s health Studies of smoking shows that many kinds of diseases are related to smoking Smoking for itself is a waste It costs one too much money Besides many fires often caused by careless smokers Today more and more people all over the world had begun to give up smoke If you are not a smoker don t start 1 place places 2 still even 3 percents percent 4 such many people so many people 5 harmful harm 6 shows show 7 for itself itself 8 fires often fires are often 9 had begun have begun 10 give up smoke smoking 二十二 Dear Sir Thank you for your offer of invite me to the summer English course in your school As for your choice between the two courses I prefer the four week course for 60 hours of study Because of this would allow me more times to do some travelling and make a few new friends either Of all the subjects I m learning at school I like English best I had been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poorly So I hope to take this chance to improve it If is possible I d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order I can know some customs in England I believe I will have wonderful time this summer Yours truly Li Hua 1 invite inviting 2 your choice my choice 3 because of because 4 more times more time 5 either too 6 had been have been 7 poorly poor 8 is possible possible 9 in order in order that 10 have wonderful have a wonderful 二十三 While Xiao Ming with his father were sleeping one night a thief his face was covered with a piece of cloth entered into the room quietly holding a knife in his hand Although he tried to walk as quietly as possibly Xiao Ming and his father were waken up Realized what had happened they fought brave against the thief Suddenly an idea came into Xiao Ming s mind He throw a drawing pin on the floor which the thief might pass As expected the thief stepped on the pin but was hurt badly Screaming in great pain the thief fell down Xiao Ming and his father took chance to tie the thief up 1 with his father and his father 2 his face whose face 3 entered into entered 4 possibly possible 5 realized realizing 6 brave bravely 7 throw threw 8 which the thief where the thief 9 but was hurt and was hurt 10 took chance took the chance 二十四 People all know the old saying which eyes are the windows of our soul but many students pay attention to eye pr