备考辅导英语书面表达常见错误分析及高分技巧指导2

英语书面表达常见错误分析及高分技巧指导2二 高分技巧指导 句式多变，语法活用句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。英语基本句型及造句:主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句)The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. 主语+不及物动词+副词This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. 主语+谓语+介词+宾语He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters 主语+系动词+形容词Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.主语+谓语+直接宾语This factory produces 00 cars a week.主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语He wrote his family a letter yesterday. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (to do)I will get someone to repair the recorder for you.He invited me to teach at a well-known university.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (do)I often hear her sing the song.The boss made workers work hours a day. 主语+谓语+现在分词Did you observe the birds flying around the trees?主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语Nothing can prevent us from going forward. 巧用过渡词，连接词，增强文章的逻辑性，紧凑感。有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的，句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。常见的句子之间的连接手段有：1 使用代词指代上一句中的名词2重复使用上一句中的词3使用连接词4使用平行结构高考大纲中常用的连接词:表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well as，moreover，furthermore, in addition,转折对比关系的: but，however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although， in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless，not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday，thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstthe second, oncenow, on the one handon the other hand, someothers,表 因果关系的since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that,表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else,表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since,from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly,at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century,after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last,all of a sudden表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last,表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way,表进行举例说明: for instance, for example, like, such as,表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a wordin conclusion, in closing, in summary. 巧用高级结构，提高文章的档次“见微知著，一叶知秋”。 词汇的选择处处体现的词汇和整体英语水平。 同学们应掌握一些表达效果好，使用场合广的高级语法，提高文章的档次，提升文章的品位。但是不要挖空心思，追求新，奇，难的结构。下面介绍一些常用高级语法的使用：1 强调句：It is English and computer classes that I like best （NMET96书面表达）2分词结构：Hearing this ，a few people began to run after him.(高考辽宁卷)3倒装句 : Such is our present life , a happy and colorful one (NMET)4 独立主格结构:My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind(NMET97)5 About 9clock yesterday evening, I was busy preparing for tomorrows test when suddenly loud noises came into my room (高考广东卷)6 Of the two , ECCED is the more expensive,costing52 yuan, and XD costs yuan 长短句搭配，锦上添花。在写作中，我们应合理搭配和使用长短句，避免过多使用单句的情况。如下面两个要点：“I have time to read books，visit museums and take computer lessons”和“I have time to read newspapers or watch news on TV”显得结构单调，所以，我们应根据语境（该要点主要谈个人爱好）来转换表达方式，突出表达多样化的要求。可改为：I can follow my interests such as reading books，visiting museums and taking computer lessons I can watch news on TV or read newspapers . 这样就更 符合“应用较多的语法结构和词汇的要求”。 表达规范，语言无误。在写作中，我们首先要保证所使用的句子是正确的，这是写好文章的基础。如NMET书面表达中把减负前的情况误用为一般现在时：I have to have classes and do endless homework at weekends at home。 避免重复使用词汇有时一篇文章里会多次出现某一词，这时表达方式的变换就显得非常重要。丰富的表达方式能够反映出英语应用能力。例如：行李太重了，我们搬不动。（1）The luggage is too heavy for us to carry（2）The luggage is so heavy that we cant move it away(3) We find the luggage to heavy to carry(4)We find that we cant remove the luggage(5) If we are strong enough that we can c