广东省中山市高中英语 Unit 3 A healthy life Writing（1）课件 新人教版选修6.ppt

unit3ahealthylife writing goalstoday trytowriteabeautifulpassage puttheminorder designingthehouse decorating materialcollecting building buildingahouse 1 4 2 3 step1 pre writing outline drawingofanarticle beautifying materialcollecting writing 1 2 3 4 writinganarticle writingarticlesisjustlikebuildinghouses 简单句 只含一个主谓结构的句子 主语 n 谓语 v 宾语 n 并列句 主谓结构 主谓结构 或更多主谓结构 并列 并列 之间用and but or等词连接 复合句 主谓结构 主谓结构 或更多主谓结构 有主从之分 从句做句子的某一 些 成分 sentencepatterns 1 whatisyourlifestyle doyouhaveagoodhabit astome ithinkmylifestyleishealthy ialwaysgetupandgotobedinastrictregulation thankstomygoodhabit iamhealthyandenergetic therefore mygoodhabitplaysaveryimportantpartinourdailylife asasayinggoes healthisbetterthanwealth franklyspeaking ireallybenefitalotfrommygoodhabit step2discussion 2 whatdoyouthinkofotherpeople shabitsaroundyou aretheyhealthyorunhealthy itisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthabits somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes ihavemanyfriendswhoareoverweight besides theyarenotwillingtodoexercise soithinktheirlifestyleandhabitarenotgoodenough 3 doyouagreethatabadhabithassomethingtodowithdisease icouldn tagreemore abadbeginningmakesabadending itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth ononehand goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth thatistosay withoutgoodhabits publichealthcan tbeassured ontheotherhand catchingdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits likeaids sars h1n1fluandsoon 4 asanoldsayinggoes afallintoapit againinyourwit dowelearnalessonfromtheh1n1 thesayingisabsolutelyright asweallknow h1n1hasaffectedourlivesseriously anditevenaffectsourrecoveringeconomy however suchdiseasesarenotrareinhumanhistory soitisnotnecessarytofear especiallywehavelearnedlessonsfromthebattlewithsarsseveralyearsago thepublicknewtheimportanceofchangingtheirunhealthyhabitsandcustomsanddevelopinggoodones thegovernmentlearnedhowtodealwithemergenciesfromthesarsspread medicalstaffgotlotsofexperienceinanalyzing savinglivesandstoppingtransmission 写作内容 健康问题越来越受到关注 在现代社会里如何保持健康呢 请看医学专家的建议 研究显示 每天锻炼绝对是有必要的 锻炼能增强心脏功能 减少心脏病的机会 并且能帮助降低血压 这就是为何越来越多的人积极参与各种锻炼 其次 已经得到证明的是人们吃的东西影响健康 专家建议人们少吃点盐 糖和肉 但是应该多吃点新鲜蔬菜 水果和鱼 因为这些富含对人体很重要的营养素和维他命 再者 抽烟喝酒没什么好处 改掉像抽烟喝酒这样的坏习惯也是一个保持健康的好方法 step4writing 首句已经给出 nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth buthowtokeephealthy 任务分析 此文是一篇有关如何保持健康的几条建议 因此时态以一般现在时为主 而语态同时可运用主动和被动两种 还可以运用it作形式主语的句型 如 it s adj n todo 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 信息组合与翻译 研究显示 每天锻炼绝对是有必要的 锻炼能增强心脏功能 减少心脏病的机会 并且能帮助降低血压 2 这就是为何越来越多的人积极参与各种锻炼 first researchshowsthatitisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart reducethechanceofheartattack andhelplowerbloodpressure that swhymoreandmorepeoplearetakinganactivepartinvariouskindsofexercises 3 其次 已经得到证明的是人们吃的东西影响健康 4 专家建议人们少吃点盐 糖和肉 但是应该多吃点新鲜蔬菜 水果和鱼 因为这些富含对人体很重要的营养素和维他命 besides ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth asaresult peopleareadvisedtoeatlesssalt sugarandmeat butmorefreshvegetables fruits andfish astheyarerichinnutritionalelementsandvitamins whichareimportanttothebody 5 再者 抽烟喝酒没什么好处 改掉像抽烟喝酒这样的坏习惯也是一个保持健康的好方法 句子衔接 这篇文章是介绍如何保持健康 可以用asfor 至于 asisknowntoall accordingtotheexperts that swhy it ssaidthat it sgood necessary agoodidea todo 等引出话题 也可以用besides what smore but asaresult等表示递进 转折或因果关系 what smore it snogoodsmokinganddrinkingalcohol sogettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy whatmakesthepassagemorebeautiful variety 句式多样化 fullness 内容充实完整 conciseness 简洁 elegance 优雅 step5 beautifying 连句成篇 first accordingtoresearch itisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeverydaybecauseitcanstrengthentheheart reducethechanceofheartattack andhelplowerbloodpressure that swhymoreandmorepeoplearebecomingactiveinvariouskindsofexercises besides ithasbeenprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth asaresult peopleareadvisedtoeat lesssalt sugarandmeat butmorefreshvegetables fruits andfish astheyarerichinnutritionaleleme