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高中英语教学与高考之书面表达一 考纲要求二 各环节落实三 等第样例作文打分好文赏析：汲取教训：之一 白璧微瑕： Our Spring Outing Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain-climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating. With high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a great pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that we put the rubbish into the bin differently. We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though clearing up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.之二Last weekend, my class had a spring outing. Instead of just having fun, we did something rather meaning fun and everyone in my class learnt a great deal from it. When we first thought about where to go, amusement park and the Central Lake came into our mind, but then I suggested we go to the mountain near our school. Everyone agreed with me. That mountain is a famous travel spot, we enjoyed the beautiful view there. But when we reached the top of the mountain, we were shocked that the garbage left by the tourists was just lying on the ground. Without any hesitation, we decided to pick them up and collected them into our bags. On our way back, we dropped them separatedly into two garbage bins according to whether they can be recycled or not. This spring outing might be rather tiring, but its not boring. From this special experience, we realized that there was a lot of problems in our society, and we can do a great deal to solve them. We also learned that by simply picking up a piece of garbage, we are making a difference. We will all reassure this lesson.之三 临界分Last week, our class decided to have a spring outing. Everyone was creativity to enjoy the discussion about the destination of the outing. Someone said to go the amusement park. Someone said to go boating and then, our monitor said “How about to go the mountain?” everyone agreed her idea. So, next day morning, we began our outing. We arrived the destination by bus. As we had planed before, everyone of us all taking a big bag many plastic bags. Because, except playing, we have another destinate is to protect the environment. The mountain is so beautiful that we all very excited to climb the mountain. During the way, when we found the rubbish on the ground, we pick them up and then put them into our plastic bags. When we arrived the top of the mountain, we found a lot of rubbish on the ground. It was so dirty so we cleaned the ground clearly and carefully. After a short time, the ground was clean again. After we got down from the mountain, we put the rubbish into the bin but before this, we part the rubbish in two kinds, recycle or unrecycle. I think, spring outing was very useful. 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序, 介绍植数活动的全过程, 给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。 注意: 依照全国卷要求应当100词左右） 提示词: 郊区 suburbs 情景作文 一、赋分时的内容要求: 骑车去植树 植树 安插指示牌 照相 二、说明: 内容要点可用不同方式表达。 例一 18分Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving， we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment. Though we were a little bit tired, we felt happy. 例二 17分Green Action in Our Class Im Li Hua from Class1, Senior 3, HongXing high school. In response to the slogan “make our homeland greener, students in my class planted trees in the suburbs on April 12th.It was a fine day. With the sun shining above the mountains, we rode bikes towards our destination. Impressed by the beauty of the trees and grass along the road, everyone smiled happily. Upon our arrival, we were divided into different groups. Everyone was responsible for one certain task. Some dug the soil, some carried the trees while others watered the newly planted trees. We all performed our tasks with joy. Thanks to our efficiency, it took us only a short time to plant all the trees. We set up a sign in front of the trees to remind people to take care of them. Finally, we took a photo near the trees and the sign so as to recall the meaningful activity every now and then. We find this activity of great significance, I call on everyone to do something to make our homeland greener, for it is undoubtedly pleasant for one to be surrounded by beautiful green plants. 例三 17分 Green Action in Our Class On the Planting Day our class held an activity of planting trees. Everyone took active part in it.The sun was shining brightly and flowers were smiling. We went to the suburbs by bike happily. As soon as we got there, everyone was busy planting trees. Several students dug holes and obviously they worked very hard. Some of my classmates carried young trees. Then they put the trees into the holes and covered with soil. Some girls carried water and watered the trees carefully. When we finished planting , we put a sign besides the young tree “Protect Trees”. At last, our class took pictures in front of the trees.To be honest, although everyone of us felt tired, we thought it was meaningful and felt happy. We will plant trees nest year to protect our environment and make our country more beautiful. 例四 16分Green Action in Our Class In order to do some good deeds to help to improve our environment, our class organized an activity to plant trees in suburbs.Early in the morning, April 12th, I together with my fellow-mates rode to the suburbs. The sun shone upon us and the wind blew swiftly above the growing trees. Finally, we arrived at our destination.Soon after that, we ran into actions. Some of us dug holes on the ground, and it was some of uss duty to carrying the little trees and place the roots of them in the holes and cover them with earth. Girls made contributions to watering the little trees. After couples of hours hard-work, little trees were all planted. We also put a board into the ground. On the board we wrote a notice said Please protect trees, which was also our purpose of this journey. At the end of our action, photos of us were taken in order to let this meaningful action remain in our minds forever.Regardless of tiredness and tough work, we went home with satisfaction. 例五 15分Green Action in Our Class Im Li Hua from class one senior three of Red Star Middle School. On April 12th, our class went to suburbs to plant trees in order to green our country.We got up early that day and to suburbs by bike happily. When we arrived, we soon took actions. We worked into different groups. Some people helped carrying the small trees. Some people planted trees. Others watered the trees that had been planted. After that, we set up a sign reads “Protecting the trees” beside the trees. Finally, we stood beside the sign with big smile and our monitor took a photo of you. Tired but happy, we finished our action.I like this activity not only because its good for environment, but also because its educational. Id like to take part in the same action next time. 例六 14分Green Action in Our Class As a student of Grade Three, we are heavy burdened with lots of homework, but sometimes we also have a rest and get close to our Mother Nature.Early in the morning of April, 12th, we set out to the countryside by bicycle, wearing big smiles on our face. When we got there, we hurriedly to do our work as planned. Some of us carried the trees to be planted, while some others dug holes and others watered the trees which was just planted. Looking at the beautifully planted trees, we found it was necessary to set a broad to tell other tourists to protect those trees. Then my classmates dug a hole and another place a broad there.Though we felt a little tired after planting trees, our heart was filled up with happiness. We then took a photo beside the broad proudly. During this green action, we attach importance to protect our environment and we shall value the experience forever. 例七 12分Green Action in Our Class My name is Li Hua, HongXing Middle School, Grade Three, Class one. To take part in the activities of protecting environments, our class went to plant trees in suburbs in April 12th. In the morning, we went to suburbs by bike instead of by car. At the beginning, having arrived the suburbs, some classmates drug some holes on earth to plant trees in it. In addition, others brought some small trees. Further more, girls watered the trees which had been planted. Not only did we plant trees, but also set a board besided the trees which says “Protecting Trees”. At last, all of our classmates took a photo in front of the new planting trees. All in all, theres no doubt that were supposed to make every effort on protecting our environment. Earth is to human-beings what mother to babies. Its the nature that gives us a place to live in. Therefore, let us insist on taking care of our earth.例八 11分Green Action in Our Class Im Li Hua, a student of Senior 3 Class 1 of Hong Xing Middle School. In order to respond to the appealation of making our country greener, our class decided to go to suburbs to plant trees on April 12th.Early in the morning, we went to the destination by bike. There are many trees and rice by the side of the road. On our way to there, we enjoyed the beautiful view and talked happily. As soon as we got there, we began to work. Some of us dug, some buried, some watered and the rest took the trees to the places where need them. After planting trees, we close an obvious place to make a sign read” Protect trees” stand to stop people from cutting trees. At last, we took photos in front of the trees. Almost worn out as we were, we estremely excited, for we did a qualification deed.例九 10分Green Action in Our Class I am LiHua, a student in class One, Grade Two in HongXing High School. In order to support Green Action in China, our class went to suburbs to plant trees on April 12th.With rising sun, we rode bikes to the suburbs happily. After we arrived there, not wasting a minute, we began to work. Some digged holes with tools, some translated the little trees and the others planted and watered them. Then we made a sign, which says “Protect trees actively, please” At last, all of us took a meaningful photo standing next to the trees.The Green Action leaves us a special memory. And we will continue to do something like this to protect our environments. 例十 5分 Green Action in Our Class On April 12th, to respond the environmental pofection call, our class went to suburbs for planting. It was a sunny day, we went to the suburbs by bike. At the suburbs, my classmates was digging the ground to make space for the tree. Finished digging, we put the tree in the hole and water it. By everyones effort, we finished very soon, and we set a board read “Protect trees”. In the end, we took a picture in front of our work, and we feel so satisfied to make the world green.评：第二节 开放作文（15分） 根据下面提示, 写一篇短文, 字数不少于50. In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. The versions of different degrees:例一 13或14分 (满分15分)What an interesting picture! A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job. In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 例二 11分 （满分15分）As is shown in the picture, a boy is doing his best to eat noodles. But with two forks in his hand, its impossible for him to get the noodles into his mouth.I think the picture tries to