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HowtodoProof reading短文改错 马雪芳高三 3 班 Learningaims 学习目标 1 LearnsomestrategiesinalimerickabouthowtodoProof reading 2 LearntousethestrategiesproperlywhendoingProof reading Icangotohomenow 2 Ilikeplayingpiano 3 IamfondatEnglish the Wrongword Missingword of Unnecessaryword Formsofcorrectingacomposition 多 缺 错 Step1Leading in Stepsofcorrectingacomposition 1 Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea 浏览全文 掌握大意 2 Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes 分句阅读 逐行找错 3 Readthepassageforthethirdtime checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones 检查核对 攻克难点 Step1Leading in Limerick动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格 细领悟 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 冠词连词常光顾 请先念一遍 咒语 吧 Step2Self learning I 8min Task1动词形1 WhenIwasachild Ihopedtoliveinthecity IthinkIwouldbehappythere 2015全国卷I 2 Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry 2015全国卷II 3 Wecanchoosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip 2016全国卷II thought began taking 谓语动词的时态和语态错误 非谓语动词错误 谓语动词的时态和语态错误 Step3Feeding back I Task2名词数指名词单 复数形式的用法错误4 Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier 2015全国卷I 5 Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest 2016全国卷I 6 Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme 2016全国卷III air years 不可数名词 news advice knowledge information honesty 不可数名词用法错误 名词用法错误 可数名词单复数用法错误 Task3还要注意形和副7 Globalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem 2015全国卷I 形容词和副词的误用8 Myparentscouldn tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem 2016全国卷III 形容词和副词的误用 serious free Task4代词格 细领悟9 Myuncleistheownerofarestaurant Hehopesourbusinesswillgrowsteadily 2016全国卷I 人称代词 物主代词 反身代词使用错误10 IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself 2016全国卷III 人称代词 物主代词 反身代词使用错误 his myself Task5介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 11 Unfortunately onthedevelopmentofindustrialization theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted 2015全国卷I 主要考查固定短语 固定介词的搭配 12 Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichinashortperiodoftime 2016全国卷III 主要考查固定短语 固定介词的搭配 13 NowIamleavinghometocollege 2016全国卷III 主要考查固定短语 固定介词的搭配 with of for Task6冠词连词常光顾14 Thoughnotverybig buttherestaurantispopularinourarea 2016全国卷I 连词but and or so和although等逻辑性错误15 Atthefirst IthoughtIkneweverything 2016全国卷III 冠词a an和the的用法错误 Limerick动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格 细领悟 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 冠词连词常光顾 Step4Self learning II Practice 5min 2017全国卷II短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 Mr andMrs Zhangallworkinourschool Theylivefarfromtheschool andittakesaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday Intheirsparetime theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools Beside theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet Whensummercame theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables Step5Discussion Step6Feeding back II Mr andMrs Zhangallworkinourschool Theylivefarfromtheschool andittakesaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday Intheirsparetime theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools Beside theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet Whensummercame theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables an interested early information comes Besides both 代词格 细领悟 冠词连词常光顾 还要注意形和副 which 代词格 细领悟 还要注意形和副 习惯用法要记住 还要注意形和副 名词数 动词形 习惯用法要记住 to Summary 1 Stepsofcorrectingacomposition2 Thelimerick动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格 细领悟 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 冠词连词常光顾 Don tforget 当堂检测1 Asresult theplantsaregrowingsomewhere 2014全国卷I 2 Withthehelpbyourfather mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden 2014全国卷I 3 Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost 2014全国卷I of wonderful a 冠词连词常光顾 还要注意形和副 介词短语须关注 习惯用法要记住 当堂检测4 Hermotherkeptsheintheroom 2015全国卷II 5 Someclassmatessuggestweshouldgotoplacesofinterestnearby Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea 2016全国卷II 6