2015英语写作指导

高考英语写作指导近年来，高考写作的体裁大多是应用文和说明文，以书信、留言条、电子邮件等形式出现，一般是提纲式作文，并要求进行适当地发挥。字数要求为100字左右。高考作文分数差别极大，平均分数不高，必须进行专门的训练，才能游刃有余地应付高考写作。一高考高分作文的要求：1. 字迹工整、美观，没有勾划现象。2. 开头精彩，句式较好，无错误。3. 要点完整，布局合理。4. 尽量使用了从句、分词、连词and, but等，使句子读起来很流畅。5. 基本不出现单词拼写，语法，句式错误。6. 单词，短语，句式较高级，丰富且富于变化。7. 适当灵活地使用过渡词。千万不能过多使用过渡词，以致文章被过多割裂，读起来不流畅。8. 简明扼要，不罗嗦。没有比喻，过分的描写，文章结构合理。二高考作文评分原则1.总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5. 拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次，即5分。三高考5档文特点1.覆盖所有内容要点。2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。四近年高考英语作文评分状况 高考英语作文评分要求并不算高，只要做到卷面整洁，书写工整，句式基本正确，并适当使用几个较好的句式，基本上都会得到比较令人满意的成绩。 五 写作的基本步骤1. 审题：确定作文体裁和要点2. 确定基本句式及高级语法项目可借鉴的好句型包括：1) I am so interested in the activity that I want to participate in it2) I have been studying English for 10 years so that I have no difficulty communicating in English.3) I can not only introduce our countrys culture but can also learn more about other countries culture.4) I am excited to know that .5) It is a good chance for me to .6) Id appreciate it if 7) The reason for my attending the camp is that I can .8) I would like to take this chance to 9) Ten years from now, I will be living happily, with a well-paid job in a big company. 10) I have made some Chinese knots, which are about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.3. 选择恰当的过渡词和连接词 1) 表转折： 2) 表递进：3）表总结：4）表自己的观点：高考英语作文精练I. 假设你是新华大学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。表示感兴趣说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历希望得到回复注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好DearSirorMadam,ImastudentfromXinhuaUniversity.Imgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart- timeEnglishreporters.Imquiteinterestedinit.IthinkImfitforthejob.Asastudent,Ivereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.ImfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,Imeasytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformy schoolbroadcastingstation.SoImsureIcandothejob.Imlookingforwardtoanearlyreplyifpossible.AndIdappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldcallmeaThankyouverymuch. Yourssincerely Li HuaII假设你是晨光中学高二（1）班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：（1）表示欢迎（2）介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）（3）介绍本班情况（4）希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊注意：（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。（3）词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。（4）参考词汇：交换生exchange studentDear Chris,Im Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Im delighted to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student next term. I feel it an honor for us to study with you. Now I have something to tell you. Firstly, with the climate changing, you should prepare enough clothes. Then it is different kinds of foods and snacks that give you the chance to experience abundant Chinese food culture. In addition, every student can be in harmony with foreign friends, which makes it easy for you to get along with them. Last but not least, we can do what we can to help you, but you must get prepared to meet all kinds of difficulties. During your stay here, I hope you can tell us more about American culture. Only by understanding and learning from each other can we spend these days together happily. Yours, Li Jin III. 假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3.表达对客人的祝愿。写作要求：1.词数不少于100；2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【参考范文】Dear American Guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.IV. （2014新课标I）假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：住宿-accommodation【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li HuaV. 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：未及时回信的原因；你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1. 词数：120-150； 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, How are you!To begin with, please accept my sincere apology for not replying to your last letter in time. During those days, Id been busy preparing for the final exam which was very important to me. Now summer vacation is approaching, during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip to some places of interest together with a few of my good friends, aiming to broaden our horizons. Additionally, being a volunteer is another thing I want to do, from which I can benefit a lot. At last, Id like to do a part-time job, with the purpose of knowing more about society and, at the same time, I can earn some money, which can be called killing two birds with one stone. What do you think of my plan? Hope you could come to China in your spare time and have a wonderful time with us. Best wishes! Yours sincerely Li HuaVI. 个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个 节日里的主要活动。写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一；家人团聚；赏月、吃月饼；还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cakeThe Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends. VII. 2013年全国高考新课标卷II书面表达：假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1. 外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）2. 象征意义3. 价格注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已为你写好。OnepossibleversionDear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!Li HuaVIII. 假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点：1、活动的策划；2、教室的布置；3、活动的内容；4、你的感想。 注意：1、短文词数不少于100；2、开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3、可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；4、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。As Teachers Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10, some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and other went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read Happy Teachers Day!Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly Happy Teachers Day! Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their Gong fu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li.Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.IX. 星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；2.活动的过程；3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. Al the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time !XX假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意： 1词数：100左右： 2参考词汇：房租Tent(n.). Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk an