英语作文：饼状图作文

饼状图作文I饼状图作文写作注意的要点：百分数所表达的意义及正确的表达法：如“20%的人认为广告植入可以接受。”的英语表达法为：20%people(20%ofthepeople)think/holdtheopinionthattheproductplacementisacceptable.2.饼状图往往是对一种社会现象的看法，所以往往用现在时来描述。而许多学生用错了时态例文（苏州二检卷：春晚广告范文）The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionduetoproductplacementintheprograms.Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproduct,placementappearsintheprogramsnaturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprograms.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprograms.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudiencesfeelingsintoaccount.,II学生佳句、佳作:导入话题：Asthepiechartshows,differentpeoplehave/holddifferentopinionstowardstheproductplacement.Byanalyzingthepiechart,wecancometoaconclusionthatdifferentpeoplehave/holddifferentopinionstowardstheproductplacement.Accordingto/Fromthepiechart,wecandrawaconclusionthatmostpeopleareagainstthispractice.,百分数所表达的意义及正确的表达法15%ofthepeoplehavetheviewthatthisactioncancatertotheneedofthedevelopmentofCCTV,but10%ofthepeoplethinkquitedifferentlythattheproductplacementcandoharmtotheimageofCCTV.Besides,25%ofthepeoplethinktherearetoomanyadvertisementsplacedduringtheperformancesandtheyhavenothingtodowith/havenorelationtotheprograms,whichmakesaudiencefeelannoyed.Onthecontrary,20%ofthepeopleconveyedthinkitisnaturaltoplaceadvertisements.描述不错，但思路混乱。,20%peoplethinkthatitisnaturaltoplayadvertise-mentsduringtheperformances,whichwillnotdoharmtotheperformances.15%peopleholdtheopinionthatitcansatisfytheneedsofthedevelopmentofCCTV.However,everycoinhastwosides.30%peoplethinkthattheadvertisementshavenoconnectionwiththeperformancesand25%ofthepeoplepointoutthattoomanyadvertisementsmaketheperformancesboring,whichwillmaketheaudienceloseinterestinit.Inaddition,10%peoplethinkthispracticedoesdamagetotheimageofCCTV.,个人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned,thedisadvantagesoftheproductplacementoutweightheadvantagesofit.ThereisnodoubtthatthecommercialadvertisementswillbringgreatprofitstoCCTV.ButnoonecandenythefactthatitwillchangethemeaningoftheSpringFestivalGala.Meanwhile,itcanruintheimageofCCTV.2.AsfarasIamconcerned,theproductplacementshouldntappearintheprograms.AlthoughCCTVcanmakeplentyofmoneythroughthepractice,theyshouldntignorethenegativeeffectsduetotheproductplacement.CCTVrepresentsChinasotheymustknowthatagoodimageismoreimportantthanprofitinalongrun.,佳作:The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionduetoproductplacementintheprograms.Asisshowninthepiechart,differentpeopleholddifferentopinionstowardsthepractice.Somepeopleareinfavorofthiskindofpractice.About15%peopleholdtheopinionthatitisneededforthedevelopmentofGala.Another20%thinkitnaturaltoplaceadvertisementsintheprograms,whichdoesnotaffectpeoplesinterestintheperformancetoadegree.,However,othersholdtheoppositeopinion.10%peoplethinkthiskindofphenomenondoesdogreatharmtotheimageofCCTV.Besides,15%oftheconveyedcomplaintherearetoomanyadvertisements,whichwillmaketheSpringFestivalGalaboring.Theother30percentofthepeopleconsiderthattheadvertisementsarenotrelatedtotheprograms.AsfarasIamconcerned,asasayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,thispracticehasbothadvantagesandd