初中英语写作课ppt课件

.,ParagraphWriting,MuZhonghua,No.39MiddleSchool,.,LearningTarget(学习目标),Wearelearninghowtowriteaparagraphtoshowideas.,paragraph,?,段落,YaoMing,thecenteroftheChineseNationalMensBasketballTeam,servedtheHustonRocketsinthe2002NBA.The2.26m,120kgcenterbecomesthefirstonetocomefromaforeignteam.YaoMingwasborninShanghaiinSeptember,1980.HismotherwasacenterandcaptainoftheChineseNationalWomensTeam.Hisfatherplayedbasketball,too.SportanalystBillWaltonsaid,“YaoMinghasthepotentialthecapabilityofchangingthefutureofbasketball.”,.,SuccessCriteria(目标达成要求),1.Icanwriteastrongtopicsentence.,2.Icanwritethreedetailsentences.,3.Icanwriteaclosingsentence.,4.Icanusewordsorphrasestomaketheideasmoreclear.,5.Icancheckmygrammar,spellingandpunctuation(,.!)afterwriting.,G/NG-GoodN-needsimprovement,.,ParagraphWriting,detailsentence1,detailsentence2,detailsentence3,closingsentence,topicsentence,body,beginning,ending,.,Groupwork,Task1:Underlinethetopicsentence.,Task2:*Addtransitionalwordsorphrasesfordetailsentences.(添加过渡语),*Writeaclosingsentence.,Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos._zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword.Withoutzoos,mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers,lions,elephants._zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell.Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly._zoosprotecttheanimalswell.Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein._.,.,WordWallTransitionalWords(过渡语）,表示层次,detail1,detail2,detail3,表示总结,closing,first,firstly,firstofall,tobegin(start)with,second，secondly,then,next,afterthat,besides,whatsmore,third,thirdly,finally,lastly,atlast，intheend,inaword,inshort,asaresult,.,Groupwork,Task3:Rereadtheparagraphformistakesandcorrectthem.,Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos._zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword.Withoutzoos,mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers,lions,elephants._zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell.Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly._zoosprotecttheanimalswell.Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein._.,.,Writing,请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健康的方式。要求使用过渡语以及topic,detail,cl