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WritingPractice,ByLiuXiaolifromGuangyuanExperimentalHighSchool,Writingtask:,据一项调查显示，大多数的中学生每天的睡眠时间少于7小时，有些甚至不到6个小时，请你就此现象从以下方面写一篇英语短文。1.分析中学生睡眠不足的原因。2.提出你的看法。注意：词数120词左右。,Stepsforwriting,审,列,连,查,Outline,Openingpara:,学生睡眠的现状,Body：,学生睡眠不足的原因,Closingpara：,自己的观点和建议,Brainstorm,para1.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/Arecentsurveyshowsthat;havelessthan7hourssleep;nomorethan6hoursPara2.Whatsthereasonfor/Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingfor（导致）thisphenomenon（现象）./Therearechieflyreasonsforit.Foronething./Firstofall/Firstly/Tostart(begin)withareburdenedwithtoomuch；befacedwith;bebusydoingburythemselvesin/beabsorbedin;Foranother/Besides/Inaddition/Moreover/Whatsmorepaymoreattentiontoratherthan;beofgreatharmto/dodamageto/haveabadeffecton,Brainstorm,(Apartfromtheabovereasons.lackagoodlifestyle;stayuplatedoing;whichalsocontributetoalackofsleep)Para3.Asweallknow/Asisknowntoallgoodsleepessential/ofgreatimportanceto/fundamentalInordertoimprove.livingandstudyconditions;takemeasureswithoutdelay/immediatelyFirst/Firstofall/Tostartwith/Tobeginwith/Ontheonehandgivelesshomework/relievethestudentsfromgreatpressureSecond/Besides/Moreover/Whatsmore/OntheotherhandFindabetterwaytoteachandlearn/improvetheteachingandlearningefficiency（效率）,Brainstorm,Finally/Lastbutnotleast(getridof/formagoodlivinghabit/developagoodlivinghabit)Only.canwe.,Whatmakesagoodcomposition?,1.Istheessaydividedintoparagraphs?2.Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?1.areallthekeypointsstated?2.Iseverythingtothepoint?(切题)1.Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?2.Arethereanymistakes?3.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary(高级词汇)4.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns(句式)?,Structure,Content,Language,Groupwork,1.Choosethesample.2.Checkandimprovethestructure.3.Correcterrorsandmistakes.4.Makethecompositionmorelogical.5.Presentyourcomposition,Apossibleversion,Arecentsurveyshowsthatmostofthemiddleschoolstudentsonlyhavelessthan7hourssleepeachday,someevennomorethan6hours,whichismuchlessthanrequired.Whatisthereasonforthisphenomenon?Mainlythereareseveralreasonsbehindthesituation.Firstofall,thestudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Theyhavetoburythemselvesindoinghomework.Anotherimportantreasonisthatschoolsandparentspaymoreattentionontheirgradesratherthantheirhealth.But,infact,thiswillbeofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Inordertoimprovethestudentslivingandstudyconditions,measuresshouldbetakenwithoutdelay.First,givethestudentslesshomework.Second,findabetterwaytoteachandlearn.Lastbutnotleast,improvingtheteachingandlearningefficiencyisthebestpolicy.,现象解释类作文模板,Accordingtoarecentsurvey,85%percentofstudents_(说明现状).Thereare_reasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Firstofall/Foronething,_(理由一).Besides,/Foranother,_(理由二).Whatismore,/Inaddition_（理由三）.Itsnaturalthat_(引起的后果)Inorderto_(改变现状)，measuresshouldbetakenwithoutdeny.Ontheonehand_(措施一).Ontheotherhand,_(措施二).Lastbutnotleast,_(措施三)Only_can_.(结束语),Homework,1.Trytorecitesomeusefulexp